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Title: Chapter 1

A lot to take in. I like this

Devious old man, L.O.L

On to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 19 2014 05:56 am

Title: Chapter 25

I feel no sympathy for Theresa that woman is evil and is geting what she deserves!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2014 03:23 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Kim - That was very very emotional and I felt the lose of a loved one just gone without any warning..........WOWWWWWW.

I felt like i should call them and express my sympathy.

Good job on the writing skills!!!!!

              Thank you so much Kim.  I'm glad my writing was able to convey the loss of Whitney and Fox.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: yhh Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 11:13 am

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - Theresa should be the one dead!  Whitney and Fox were finally happy and Whitney was finally geting over her stupid. Why??  

          Why?!  Why oh why, did my homey have to die with a tear in his eye?  I came to say goodbye.

Reviewer: yhh Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2014 11:11 am

Title: Chapter 23

That was very very emotional and I felt the lose of a loved one just gone without any warning..........WOWWWWWW.

I felt like i should call them and express my sympathy.

Good job on the writing skills!!!!!

Kim

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2014 11:15 pm

Title: Chapter 23

Theresa should be the one dead!  Whitney and Fox were finally happy and Whitney was finally geting over her stupid. Why??  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2014 02:51 pm

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - OMG!!  That is crazy Fox knew and Whitney is stupid.  But she came by it honest as her momma is stupid as well.  Who cut the breaks brakes? Why? I love Fox!

              Yep, he knew the whole time.  Whitney was too caught up in her own head to realize that she wasn't dealing with some novice at relationships.  I'm glad they were able to work it out.

               Are you sure someone cut the brakes?  Maybe the brakes just stopped working on their own.

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 13 2014 01:38 pm

Title: Chapter 22

OMG!!  That is crazy Fox knew and Whitney is stupid.  But she came by it honest as her momma is stupid as well.  Who cut the breaks brakes? Why? I love Fox!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2014 07:37 pm

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - Wow, Gwen give Ethan a chance, Theresa destroyed his psyche! 

             Gwen now realizes how much Ethani s hurting, since he opened up.  He had to lay it all on the line or Gwen and the kids were for sure out the door.  Theresa did a true number on him, hopefully he can come back.

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 09 2014 01:21 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Wow, Gwen give Ethan a chance, Theresa destroyed his psyche! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2014 04:58 pm

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - Theresa was wrong wrong, the man was married and was off limits. That crazy ho needs Jesus!! Great update!!

            LOL!  She thinks Jesus is telling her to go for Ethan that's how crazy she is.

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 07 2014 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 20

Theresa was wrong wrong, the man was married and was off limits. That crazy ho needs Jesus!! Great update!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2014 02:25 am

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - Great update, I am liking Eve a little better.

           I'm glad you're liking Eve a little better and that you enjoyed the latest chapter.

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 05:41 am

Title: Chapter 19

Great update, I am liking Eve a little better.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 07:52 pm

Title: Chapter 1

kimyso - That was an emotional chapter but goodness gracious so good, plz keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

            Thank you for reading and reviewing.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  This chapter was emotional, but finally Eve is making some headway of getting pieces of her old life back. 

Reviewer: yhh Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 01:00 pm

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - So the baby was Fox's afterall and Julian knew that she was faking. WHITNEY is such a punk!! Grace and Eve are friends once more and TC was nice to Eve. Eve was wrong how she handle that whole situation but TC, Grace, and her husband are not without sin themselves.  So I am glad that they forgave her however I am not sure how Grace or Sam were affected by her lies? TC, Whitney and Simone were the directly affected by Eve's deception. Really Sam Grace can suck rocks!!

            Yes, the baby is Fox's.  Grace and Sam are upset that Eve helped Ivy convince Grace that John was her biological whom she had no memory of.  Eve played on Grace's biggest fear, that she had a husband, a child she couldn't remember.

Reviewer: yhh Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2014 12:58 pm

Title: Chapter 17

That was an emotional chapter but goodness gracious so good, plz keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2014 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 17

So the baby was Fox's afterall and Julian knew that she was faking. WHITNEY is such a punk!! Grace and Eve are friends once more and TC was nice to Eve. Eve was wrong how she handle that whole situation but TC, Grace, and her husband are not without sin themselves.  So I am glad that they forgave her however I am not sure how Grace or Sam were affected by her lies? TC, Whitney and Simone were the directly affected by Eve's deception. Really Sam Grace can suck rocks!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 01:11 pm

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - Maybe Whitney loosing the baby would be good thing since she can't be honest with the msn that she loves. Chad has it turns out was not her brother so please calling an incestous ho. Gwen is just plain stupid talk to the man, Ethan doesn't deserve what you are planning. Please put that psychoho Theresa under the jail. Ethan does not want your crazy ass you drugged and raped the man. More please!!

               In her mind, Chad is still her brother which is why she continues to call herself an incest freak.

               Gwen is sick of Theresa, sick of hearing another woman's name on her husband's lips, she's just tired.  She doesn't understand the full scope of everything Ethan went through because the two never talk.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 10:58 am

Title: Chapter 1

RedMoon - Ok I just sat and read all the chapters! Don't let them die ppl are just coming together! But I feel like I'm reading a sequel without reading the first book 

             Thanks for reading my story and commenting.  People are starting to come together so hopefully everyone will live to enjoy that.  Or maybe a death is what truly brings everything together.

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 10:50 am

Title: Chapter 1

RedMoon - Wtf! I have to re read chap one again 

                I'm glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 10:48 am

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - Awe that was sweet, but IVY IS A BITCH!!!  Fox is her biological child and she treats him like a bald-headed step-child with bad teeth and leprosy.  What is her psychosis?

             Ivy is just misunderstood, no?  She's stuck on Ethan and no matter how great, how wonderful her other kids are, she'll never appreciate them because they aren't her first born.  They simply aren't Ethan.

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 10:47 am

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - Wow, thar is a whole bunch of8f angst happening with this family.  If they would only talk to each other and be honest all that stress could be eliminated. Good stuff!!

                Yes, if they would just talk and be honest with each other, they'd have it made in the shade.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 10:44 am

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - Gwen has lost her mine, Ethn was drugged and raoed by that delusions ho Theresa. Ethan is going to be devastated. I can't wait for Theresa to be put in jail cell as it is where she belongs. Good stuff!!

               Communication is the key in relationships, maybe one day Gwen and Ethan will figure that out.

               Don't you think Theresa is just misunderstood?

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 10:40 am

Title: Chapter 16

Maybe Whitney loosing the baby would be good thing since she can't be honest with the msn that she loves. Chad has it turns out was not her brother so please calling an incestous ho. Gwen is just plain stupid talk to the man, Ethan doesn't deserve what you are planning. Please put that psychoho Theresa under the jail. Ethan does not want your crazy ass you drugged and raped the man. More please!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 03:09 am



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