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Title: Chapter 16

Ok I just sat and read all the chapters! Don't let them die ppl are just coming together! But I feel like I'm reading a sequel without reading the first book 

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Date: February 21 2014 01:23 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wtf! I have to re read chap one again 

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Date: February 20 2014 11:29 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Awe that was sweet, but IVY IS A BITCH!!!  Fox is her biological child and she treats him like a bald-headed step-child with bad teeth and leprosy.  What is her psychosis?

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Date: February 13 2014 03:21 pm

Title: Chapter 15

Wow, thar is a whole bunch of8f angst happening with this family.  If they would only talk to each other and be honest all that stress could be eliminated. Good stuff!!

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Date: February 13 2014 01:00 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Gewn has lost her mine, Ethn was drugged and raoed by that delusions ho Theresa. Ethan is going to be devastated. I can't wait for Theresa to be put in jail cell as it is where she belongs. Good stuff!!

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Date: February 12 2014 02:51 pm

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - Gwen, Ethan was drugged and raped.He is not in live that crazy ho!!

            In her heart of hearts Gwen knows this, but there's too much history with Theresa and Ethan is being tight lipped so Gwen doesn't know what to think.

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 03 2014 01:13 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Gwen, Ethan was drugged and raped.He is not in live that crazy ho!!

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Date: January 30 2014 05:25 pm

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - But she isn't free, she is lying to Fox a man that claims to love.  She needs to tell Fox so that he can make the decision of whether to say with her and raise a child that may not be his. I am not feeling very sympathetic towards Whitney right now. Whitney the truth will set young free!!

            The truth will set her free.  Hopefully Whitney will trust Fox, trust his love for her, sooner rather than later or this could all blow up in her face.

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 12:53 pm

Title: Chapter 10

But she isn't free, she is lying to Fox a man that claims to love.  She needs to tell Fox so that he can make the decision of whether to say with her and raise a child that may not be his. I am not feeling very sympathetic towards Whitney right now. Whitney the truth will set young free!!

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Date: January 25 2014 04:27 pm

Title: Chapter 1

 

pmgayles - Theresa is crazy and sjould have never been released, hell babies are born in jail everyday. Gwen your husband Ethan was having a nightmare he is not in love with Theresa she drugged and raped the man. Quit being stupid and help Ethan through this crisis.  Ivy needs medication as that ho treated Ethan better than her own biological children. Why didn't Julian do anything about that? Ivy wasn't all that motherly with Ethan as he craved what he saw that Whitney and Simone received from Eve. TC is evil does he really love his current wife or isxshe means to exact revenge on Eve?  What's is Theresa so evil? So sad all the way around.

               - The judge was feeling sorry for the pregnant woman.  I hope that doesn't come back and bite him. 

 

                   Gwen is just sick of all things Theresa so any mention of the "T" word sets her off, she's not taking into account Ethan's rape, sadly.  Does she even think he was raped?

                 Ivy was motherly in her own way.  She was never going to be the get down in the grass and kiss you to make you better mother.  But if the nanny told her Ethan was hurt, she would have wanted the nanny to bring him to her ASAP.

                 Julian was too busy:   feeling guilty about abandoning Eve and their child; drinking; running his company; and sleeping with every available woman to be concerned with how Ivy was treating the children.

               TC's hurt and anger has blinded him to who Liz really is and to the truth about his relationship with her.  He's trying to hurt Eve by saying look here's me being happy with a good, honest woman, like I thought you were.  Uh, epic fail on that one TC.  Hopefully, he'll learn better before it's too late.

               Theresa thinks all is fair and in love and war.  She believes she and Ethan are destined to be together and everyone else is stopping them from being together.  So she's determined to do whatever she can to win the heart of the man of her dreams.  And since Ethan has never firmly put her in her place and said, "NO!  I don't want you," she thinks he too is hopelessly devoted to her too.

                Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 25 2014 12:36 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Theresa is crazy and sjould have never been released, hell babies are born in jail everyday. Gwen your husband Ethan was having a nightmare he is not in love with Theresa she drugged and raped the man. Quit being stupid and help Ethan through this crisis.  Ivy needs medication as that ho treated Ethan better than her own biological children. Why didn't Julian do anything about that? Ivy wasn't all that motherly with Ethan as he craved what he saw that Whitney and Simone received from Eve. TC is evil does he really love his current wife or isxshe means to exact revenge on Eve?  What's is Theresa so evil? So sad all the way around.

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Date: January 23 2014 01:12 pm

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - Theresa is going to mess up and back to jail where she belongs.  I really TC, he's an asshole of epic proportions.  Liz is truly stupid!!

       You're right, Theresa's arrest and little stint in the county jail hasn't changed her ways one bit.  Everyone better watch out!

        TC is hurting.  His life was blown up.  And he has a woman whispering in his ear all the things he wants to hear, but he doesn't have his eyes open to see the real truth.  Poor guy.

         Liz's goal is accomplished - - hurt her older sister.

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 03:25 am

Title: Chapter 8

Theresa is going to mess up and back to jail where she belongs.  I really TC, he's an asshole of epic proportions.  Liz is truly stupid!!

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Date: January 20 2014 12:58 am

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles - Eve was such  a deceitful bitch so I feel absolutely no sympathy for her.  I want life to painful for as painful as what she caused her loved ones to feel.

               Eve was wrong, but sometimes self-perservation kicks in.  It was either her past would be revealed destroying everything or Grace getting a fake son.  She didn't make the right decision, but when people back you in a corner sometimes it's hard to do what's right.  Can Eve get a little love from you?

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 01:16 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Eve was such  a deceitful bitch so I feel absolutely no sympathy for her.  I want life to painful for as painful as what she caused her loved ones to feel.

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Date: January 17 2014 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 1

pmgayles  - Ivy is coo, coo for coco puffs!! 


          You are so right, Ivy is cray cray!  How will Ethan react with a normal mom?

Alistair was evil and is going hell wearing gasoline draws and pork chop sandwich necklace for the hounds of hell!!

           I love this description.  I'm going to have to use it in the future.  You are so right!  Thanks for reading and commenting.

 

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 12 2014 05:24 am

Title: Chapter 5

Ivy is coo, coo for coco puffs!!

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Date: January 11 2014 03:58 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Alistair was evil and is going hell wearing gasoline draws and pork chop sandwich necklace for the hounds of hell!!

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Date: January 11 2014 03:34 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Vie - I'm glad I made you miss Passions.  I miss it to.  I had to kill the incest thing that was just way too creepy.  Fox and Whitney are together in this one, if Whitney doesn't self-sabatoge.  And Theresa is just doing what Theresa does, getting into trouble and creating havoc wherever she goes all in the name of her "love" for Ethan.

 

Reviewer: yhh Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2014 03:58 pm

Title: Chapter 2

You've made me go and miss Passions! So, Ethan is Eve and Julian's son which killed the incest thing; thank God!!! Whitney and Fox are together at least I'm praying they are! I'm missing Foxney something terribly fierce! And what's this about Theresa raping Ethan, WTF!?!? So interested in what's gonna happen next.

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Date: December 27 2013 12:35 am

Title: Chapter 1

brown_mocha

So, I was a little confused with the baby switcharoo involving Eve. So Ethan is her son? I can't stand anything to do with the Lopez-Fitzgeralds. The only one I like is Pilar. Same with the Bennetts because the only one I like is Sam. I don't think Alistair even has the word overslight in his vocab. If Fox and Whitney's baby was a Crane he would have mentioned it in the will just like Theresa's Twins. Soooo glad she's going to jail!!! If she goes that is. I do hope the baby is Fox's, but I don't think that it is. 

               - Yes, Ethan is Eve and Julian's son.  Ivy and Sam's baby died of SIDS.  Chad was used as a decoy baby in case Eve ever tried to find out more info about her son.

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 26 2013 02:39 pm

Title: Chapter 1

So, I was a little confused with the baby switcharoo involving Eve. So Ethan is her son? I can't stand anything to do with the Lopez-Fitzgeralds. The only one I like is Pilar. Same with the Bennetts because the only one I like is Sam. I don't think Alistair even has the word overslight in his vocab. If Fox and Whitney's baby was a Crane he would have mentioned it in the will just like Theresa's Twins. Soooo glad she's going to jail!!! If she goes that is. I do hope the baby is Fox's, but I don't think that it is. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2013 07:09 am

Title: Chapter 1

brown_mocha - Nope, he didn't mention the new baby.  Does that mean something?/  Or just an oversight?

 

skriver - There were a lot of characters introduced, but it was just to set up the world and all everyone who was effected by the will.  The rest of the chapters narrow in on the main characters.  Hang tight, it will all clear up!

 

juno - More is coming.

 

lajack1 - That sums it up.

 

 

Reviewer: THE AUTHOR Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 23 2013 04:45 pm

Title: Chapter 1

He didn't mention Fox and Whitney's baby..uh oh! This makes me miss Passions.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2013 06:14 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wow, such a complicated story, so many characters, with som much going on, just can't get my head around who is who. I hope you can do this justice and make your characters easy to know. I have read this chapter twice and I still can't define who the characters are, so I will read your next chapter to see if it make sense. But I must say Alistair sound like my kinda Guy 'Smooth' lol.

Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2013 12:47 am



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