I just wish the chapters were a little bit longer, but that's just my opinion. I love the story so far. Definitely will be keeping an eye out for this story. Keep up the great writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the encouragement!
Reviewer: Miku Signed
[Report This]Date: February 03 2014 10:34 pm
I can't wait to get more from this story! I love the characters so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you I will try not to disappoint!
Reviewer: Justkillingtime21691 Signed [Report This]Date: January 26 2014 01:23 pm
Perfect! I love your writing style, Can't wait for chapter 5!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Leeli01 Signed [Report This]Date: January 26 2014 04:52 am
Mmmm, great job
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: January 26 2014 02:46 am
Oooooo, colour me intrigued.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: January 21 2014 06:11 am
Hmm. Interesting
Author's Response:
A good interesting I hope?
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 17 2014 08:55 am
extremely well written edge of the seat waiting for the continuation!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: stoney Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 17 2014 05:42 am
Oops! I forgot to rate.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the love!
Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 17 2014 01:31 am
Interesting beginning with these two. Sometimes, words can be just as powerfully sexy than the actual act, I cant wait to see where you go with these two, please continue!
Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 17 2014 01:28 am
Nice! I wanna see where this is headed.
Author's Response:
Thanks & I promise a good things to come!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2014 07:32 pm
Wow! Great job
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2014 04:24 pm
Perfect! I'm so happy for you! And l'm hooked on this story as well, which you know already lol I love it!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!!!!
Reviewer: Leeli01 Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2014 11:54 am
Oh yeah, I'm on board. At least he's up front with what he can offer. He gives her the opportunity to decide whether she wants to go there with him. A lot of times, the guy is thinking one thing and the girl has a whole 'nother view of what they're involved in. That Mars, Venus thang. This seems different.
Author's Response:
Thanks I figured it would be a little different!
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 16 2014 10:40 am
good so far
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2014 08:58 am
What a name! Triple A...where have I heard that from? Oh that's the roadside assistant company. LOL
But seriously, I am loving this chapter so far. I love the tone of the story and this girl got a personality I can easily adore. I'm hooked. More please!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2014 08:52 am
What...the...heck...did I just stumble on to? LOL I was so not prepared for this.
*cautiously moves on to the next chapter*
Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 08:46 am
Please continue this sounds very interesting.......................
Author's Response:
Thank you i'm working on chapters 2 right now.
Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 11:46 pm
Good start. Can't wait to read more ! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 09:28 pm
Wow! Such an alluring introduction! I hope that you do continue this story. You're off to an interesting start. 10 stars!
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 09:21 pm
Wow, i wanna kno what's going on! Nice start! I have so many questions in my head, can't wait to see where this is going! Nice start!
Author's Response:
Thanks girl your bravery has inspired me
Reviewer: Leeli01 Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 09:17 pm
I'm interested! Please continue :)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: mya1967 Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 09:06 pm
It's short, sweet, and to the point. I like it a lot. It's a good start because it makes you wonder how the main character got to where she is. And I wanna know who is this guy she is talking to. So maybe these are text messages, a chatroom, or IMs. This introduction feels like a drabble. Will these chapters be drabbles or will be there be more?
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Next chapter will explain exactly what the messages are & will definitely be longer. I just felt like the story needed to start with a small teaser to add mystery & make people think about whats going to happen next.
Reviewer: Missus James Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 08:58 pm
Nice. Short... although nice
Author's Response:
I promise there'e more, this is just a taste to see if people will actually be receptive...If people like it I will definitely continue, thank you for commenting!
Reviewer: Britney Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 08:47 pm