Reviews For Golden Girl
Title: The Introduction

i love this story so far. i cant wait to see when they run into each other. but can you make the font bigger, and shorter paragraphs its hard to read the way you wrote it thanks.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2014 03:20 am

Title: The Introduction

Good start update soon

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 11:12 pm

Title: The Introduction

Very good start.  Please give us mor

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 07:56 pm

Title: The Introduction

Good start, can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 04:00 pm

Title: The Introduction

Good start. Can you make the font a bit larger and the paragraphs shorter?  It's a bit hard to read because the sentences seem to run together with the large paragraphs.

Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 03:57 am

Title: The Introduction

Good start, can we get some dialogue soon? What is his perspective of things?

Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 03:20 am



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