Another great chapter. Keep them coming!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Glad you're keeping up with it.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 25 2014 01:39 am
Hot!! 😊
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm trying to work on the steamy scenes.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed
[Report This]Date: March 24 2014 06:39 pm
Usually I'm pretty picky about the stories on here. I really liked this though. I wonder if this him character is dead or he just left her and might come back. Love your choices of characters.
Author's Response:
Well thank you for giving this a chance! Glad you like the characters.
Reviewer: littlebird15 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 04:56 pm
Okay am I the only one who is confused here? The previous chapters when she asked "him" to stay and this chapter is it the same day? And who is "him" as in the person she is with now, Cale? or was it this new guy in the pic you posted this chapter with Clark? Then there is this "him" that she just cried for. Okay I'm totally confused????? What is going on?
Author's Response:
Yes, I think you are the only one confused. Maybe go through it again. I could make minor changes so its even more clear. That might help you out.
Thanks for the reviw.
Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2014 04:02 pm
She is still in love with a man who is either dead or left her. While a fine man who is totally into her is in her present life Andromeda you're stupid! What is with her not making eye contact and closing her eyes? I am so annoyed with Meda right now!
Author's Response:
Yes, im pretty annoyed with her too. But don't worry soon she will start making sense.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2014 02:00 pm
I want one just like him!
Author's Response:
Lol. Me too.
Thanks for the review again!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2014 04:14 pm
Did I tell you how much I adore you male character... Ugh. So yummy. Love the update cant wait for the next 😊
Author's Response:
LOL. Thanks love. Yes he's pretty dreamy.
Thanks for reviewing again!
Reviewer: TheDoll Signed [Report This]Date: March 21 2014 06:24 am
So good! Can't wait for more. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I will be updating VERY soon.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 21 2014 01:03 am
I'm glad I took a chance on this story, it's fantastic so far! Thanks for sharing it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you darling! I'm glad you took a chance and enjoyd it.
Reviewer: Annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 17 2014 07:54 pm
Thank you for this fantastic update. How well does Meda know Caleb? How long have they known each other? Why in the hell is angry? She asked him to stay and he did. Her discomfort is not about him but her. What is about him that makes her doubt herself? Good stuff!
Author's Response:
I wasn't going to start this story in the middle like this....it's just an idea I had...so I'm going to try to do flashbacks so I can fill in these plot holes. But right now I have no clue lol.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 17 2014 05:03 pm
Good so far
Author's Response:
Thank You!
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2014 07:45 am
Well done, Chica.
If you have more, by all means, share it. You have stepped out on faith. It won't let you down.
Author's Response:
Yes. I do have more. Hopefully I'll be able to post it before the wekend. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 16 2014 05:03 am
I like it. It's cute and still so rife with emotions. Plus I'm curious about this other guy and what he did to her to shut her down.
Author's Response:
Yes I'm curious too who this other guy was...lol. Right now I have no clue. But we'll get there. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2014 01:26 am
Honey Im glad you got the courage to post here. This was very sweet I adored it. Awesome job on your submission.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I've been reading your stories too. Love them. By the way I'm swooning over the male characters you choose.
Reviewer: TheDoll Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2014 07:38 pm
This was short, but filling, while leaving me wanting more. Please continue.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I shall continue. I sort of have an idea with what I want to happen. I wasn't going to continue at first but I'm addcited to these character now. Stay tuned.
Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2014 05:15 pm
Fantastic start! I'm interested to see where your going take us with this story. Congrats!
Author's Response:
I'm going to try to take this somewhere, I think lol. It's happening I promise. Thank You for the review!
Reviewer: kimloanies Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2014 04:54 pm
I am impressed as I am avid reader but can't write worth a damn so kudos for stepping out. Love your choice of cast, Tyler Kinney is fine as hell! you are off to great start. So please continue.
Author's Response:
Hun, I don't know how many times I had to check the internet and other writing sites to make sure most of what I wrote made sense, and was sort of gramatically correct. I just had to get something out of me. Glad I did. Thank you so much for your review! There will be more.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2014 02:41 pm