Loving it! Mark need to take his jealous, selfish, possessive ass and sit down somewhere. He had his chance to be with Kerri. He need to let her be happy.
I bet he is going to make her feel guilty. Kerri better put him in his place if he does.
[Report This]Date: April 11 2014 06:09 pm
I think its time for Mark to have a reality check. He can't have both women. It would not be fair to Kerri. But I also hope that Mark is not right about Brandon using womena and then dropping them. Kerri deserves to be treated well and not taken for granted.
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 05:29 pm
I'm enjoying this story. Mark is a douche. He made his choice and now he has the nerve to try to c-block Kerri.
Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 04:39 pm
I love sex as much as the next but it did come a little fast. Well, actually, I don't really object to it coming this fast (no pun intended) it's just the declarations that I really am not feeling. Okay, they like each other and quite literally gave each other the business quickly. But, should they be at this emotional level already? No, I don't think so.
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But, it's also not my story and I'm here for the ride regardless. so whatever...
Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 04:19 pm
Idiots all around.
Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 04:07 pm
Mark, that is what you get, Kerri deserved more than what you were giving her. I am so not convinced that Mark didn't know that Kerri was in love with him. I do not feel bad for him at all! Mark shuld die of jeaalousy. Kerri will finally know love!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 03:36 pm
It's about time!
Reviewer: Harrie Holiday Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 02:26 pm
(Sigh) What is Quen's deal? I still love this story!
Reviewer: Virginia Gilbert Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 10:10 am
Good job!
Reviewer: Virginia Gilbert Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 10:08 am
Drama! Go on girl with your bad self!
Reviewer: Virginia Gilbert Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 10:07 am
I love it!
Reviewer: Virginia Gilbert Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 10:03 am
I may sound mean but I don't feel sorry for Quen. If she is suffering its because of her own stupidity. She is not blind. She knows damn well that Mark is in love with Kerri. I have absolutely no respect for woman like Quen. They know that their man has interest in other woman, but yet they take it. And its then those type of woman who go around complaining about how all men are the same and what not. You are the one who accepts his treatment. Instead of being a woman and stand up for yourself you chose to stay with him. Quen is pathetic. And the way she thinks that she can't do nothing but accept him while he clearly is in love with another woman, just because she is in love with him is absolutely ridiculous. There is a difference between being in love and be stupid. There is always a choice.
I really hope that Brandon is genuinely interested in Kerri, and isn't doing this just to piss Mark off.
Mark is selfish. Kerri is his second option in case things doesn't work out with Quen? What the hell is that?
And Kerri is a fool for letting Mark have so much influence in her life. She waited years for him and he still chose another woman over her. Move on girl.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 09:45 am
Part2
ROFLMBO!
When I reread, I realize that Mark knew exactly what he would find. Based on what he could hear before the phone fell.
K- Hey
B(in background) - What time angel?
*Kiss, kiss
*Rustling of leg on clothes
B(in background) - Angel...( sucking noises) You make me hot. I want you so bad and if we don't stop right now, I'm going to rip your clothes off where you stand and make love to you now, all night and well into the morning. By the time you get ready for your morning jog, it will be time for you to go to work.
*phone falling.
if that isn't obvious to a friend, that you need to call your friend back LATER, coz she busy getting it on, then I don't know what is!
What I ask myself is, did Brandon do it on purpose? Heheh. And why is Mark such a drama queen? That whole scene he was trying to engineer, was that Kerri was supposed to go after him to comfort him, effectively choosing him over Brandon. Kid's a trip. I'll bet he's sitting in the car in the driveway hoping she'll come after him...
btw, Alexandria, can you tell that I love your story and your complicated characters?
I don't hate Mark, he just has some growing up to do. Maybe Quen needs to catch him crying and leave him alone to sort himself out. She's got to have some sort of self-preservatory bone in her body!?!
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 09:32 am
I hope that Brandon is being genuine and not just trying to stick it to their brother because while I think it's great that Kerri is taking interest in someone else, I worry that Brandon and Kerri are moving really fast but I digress this is a story so please take it as fast as you want too.
Update Soon!
[Report This]Date: April 11 2014 09:25 am
Boom! That man took care of business!
Mark is a mess, pretending like he cares for Kerri, when he wants to keep her as a Plan B. I don't know who it is more insulting to: Quen or Kerri.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 09:15 am
Wow! love it. Mark wants his cake with a little cream.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 08:33 am
Glad to see Kerri getting hers. Mark is a punk to do that to her. He had his chance.
Reviewer: wow Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 08:31 am
LOVED IT thank you, now take that Mark
Reviewer: renata Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 07:57 am
Love this chapter
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 07:49 am
Wow! Quen is a better woman than I am...Great job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 06:20 am
I feel for Quen is all of this. Mark is being very selfish he only wants Kerri as a second choice. He should want her to be someone's first choice.
Good story.
[Report This]Date: April 11 2014 05:52 am
love the story , but plz don't hurt Quen b/c she is just a pawn in Mark's game let him suffer not Quen
Reviewer: renata Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 05:29 am
Mark can kick rocks. You want to deprive Kerri of what you are seeking for yourself with Quen. She is suppose to wait on the sidelines while you have a family with Quen. As a true friend you made the decision to PROPOSE to someone else. You have no rights to jealousy from YOUR decisions. He is a entitled, spoiled brat who doesn't love nor care for her feelings, otherwise he would wish her well and just warm Brandon not to play with her emotions that he is so good at doing.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 05:29 am
Quen is an idiot she's going to get hurt, he's in love with Kerri but doesn't or can't handle her strong personality.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 05:17 am
I hope she gives him a chance and forgets about Mark, but I'm sure he's going to cause problems. What a hater...urghhhhhh
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: April 11 2014 05:13 am