This is REALLY great. Like I am legit a fan of this and of yours.
It's sort of like The Pod People but infected with the urge to fuck or something. I was all geared up too coo over Alex because he was such a adorable cutie, but Mika infected him or something. Will those two be back in the story because even though Mika of betrayed him... I feel some 'stan-ing' coming on for him if you continued his story.
Steffen and Cersei (love their names btw) seem like they are going to be a compelling couple. The fact the there is obviously some bad blood along with palpable sexual tension makes for juicy sex scenes. I'm too through.
I'm curious about the aliens and what their plan is. Do they want world domination or are they only selecting a small group of people that they feel are 'worthy' of infecting (which I THINK was sort of implied in the Alex/Mika scene).
Update soon girl because this is hawt,
Reviewer: MonstersArePretty Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 29 2014 02:55 am
i knew you were a pro at writing bamon..now your own stories...you go girl!! cant wait to read more
Reviewer: mrs.Mathis Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 24 2014 09:56 pm
Looks Interesting. Is there more?
Nyeesha
Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]Date: May 23 2014 08:53 am
Oh shizznits!! Very interesting start
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: May 23 2014 01:49 am
Great and interesting start. I can't wait to read more and find out what is going on and what is the infected.
Thank you for sharing your imagination. Waiting for more.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 07:58 am
I hate cliff-hangers with a passion... It's not a writer makes! Not an insult by anymeans. you have a promising storyline and that alone will bring the readers back time and time again.
Reviewer: SenieceTaO Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 04:19 am
This is almost like Invasion of the Body Snatchers. I love this. Your writing is very detailed, hardly any mistakes. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 04:06 am
Ohhh yea!!! Keep it coming.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 02:13 am
Wow this is really exciting! I'm loving the characters already!
Reviewer: keluboo Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 02:56 pm
I am not liking Steffan or Mika, poor Alex is about to become a vampire. Steffan doesn't really love Ceresi if he puts her life in danger. I can't wait to see cast pics!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 01:18 pm
Wow! you have definitley caught my attention. Please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 08:16 am
well that grabbed you in and makes you want to see just what is going on here with these 4 people . That was a very good start
Reviewer: Linda Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 07:51 am
Interesting start! Infected?!! Infected with what? What are they?
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 06:10 am
interested to see where this is going
Reviewer: cocoverdad Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 05:43 am
What is he infected with inquiring minds want to know?
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 05:31 am