Arena should have stuck to good looking man for awhile. Now she wants t I dress like man for a bit, I have a bad feeling. Will she run into the good looking dude again? Good stuff!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: October 06 2014 06:36 pm
A cliffhanger! I wonder what happened. Update soon!
Author's Response:
I will! Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 06:40 pm
Areena posing as a maid was a good plan. She's free, but what now? Does she have money or a place to stay? How will she survive now that she's on her own. Is she safe? Her father is a douche canoe. He probably has enemies who would love a go at Areena. Can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response:
These are all good questions and will be answered soon :)
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 06:27 pm
Areena's father is definitely suspect. Why would he want his daughter to marry such a vile person. And the focus on the Duke's money? Hmm. She better run like the wind. You're off to a great start.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! :)
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 06:10 pm
Interesting story so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2014 05:51 am
Areena is good people!! I just hope that she can remain free. What happened to Clara?
Author's Response:
That'll be explained in the next chapter or two :) Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 12 2014 11:28 pm
Yes she got away! !
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 12 2014 08:33 pm
Fantastic start. Her plan wasn't very clever, why would she want go back to her house when she was a prisoner there and be forced to marry the devil?
Author's Response:
Haha, yea, I guess it wasn't, but she really doesn't have much choice in the matter - and she can't just abandon her responsibilities. Thank you for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: me Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 12 2014 04:17 pm
Loved the update! Hope she didn't jump from the pot into the fire.
Author's Response:
She probably has :P
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2014 03:32 am
Let's see what happen nexts
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: May 25 2014 09:26 pm
Seems interesting with a lot of little details that need to be paid attention to
Author's Response:
Yup, there are! :P It gets tricky trying to make sure that I get everything right. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]Date: May 24 2014 10:20 pm
Oooooooh! This looks good!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Redmoon Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 02:58 pm
Interesting start!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 06:12 am
It's good!
Author's Response:
Thanky you!
Reviewer: linalin Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 12:56 am
Her father is an asshole!! Run, girl RUN!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! :)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 10:45 pm