That was hot. I love it when Robert becomes all dominant..... Camryn loves it too. There was nothing wrong with his reaction, I think she did it on purpose because she wanted him to dominate her again. He didn't hurt her in any way. A "red flag" would have been him letting her go and being like "ok see ya". I would like to see more dominant Richard, that is after all who she fell in love with and he fell in love with a defiant sub in Camryn who likes to be forced into submission. This story is so HOT and I love Iron Man so yes this story is awesome. I don't like weak men, I love men who are explosive and love deeply, Robert is HOT, he handled her in the best way. Continue to write your story your way, alpha male and all!!!

I NEED ANOTHER UPDATE QUICK!!

Hmmm....just when Ricahrd almost had me.....

I'll have to be honest, Richard made the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. It's not so much that he blew up, people can do that, its HOW he blew up. And for me, an apology and making me breakfast couldn't necessarily erase that. When you see/suspect red flags, pay heed. There were a lot of control issues flying out of him at that moment. I didn't like the manhandling and throwing; or her telling him out of fear she'd never leave him. What was up with THAT? I was worried for a minute there.

See, I forgot that at the beginning of this story, Richard was being a little creepy about Camryn himself. He was doing a little stalking of his own. He likes to control and I was hoping it was limited to sex, but when you cuss and yell at me, tell me I can't leave, and throw my shit across a room and break a freaking mirror, we have a problem. But that's just me.

Maybe this all part of the lifestyle and its just a common reaction for such. I'm just thinking on the flip side of this chapter. 

Good stuff!

Great update

Love, love your book.

NOO!!! You ending this chapter too soon, damn it. LOL!! Great job, I can't wait for more. Please post again soon.

I'm loving this story :D

Nora makes my teeth itch. That ole heifer needs an attitude readjustment!  Camryn made me proud when told her incubator about herself.  Awesome sauce!

I love this chapter...

I like Nyesha and Ralphie.  Their relationship with Camryn reminds me of the one I have with my siblings; its teasing and supportive at the same time.  Nora is probably planning for Trey to show up at the house for Christmas.  Camryn needs to be ready.

Their parents are a trip! Nora needs to sit and down somewhere since she doesn't support any of her children.  Bishop is just as hateful, man I feel bad for the sibs.

Richard's comin to town.  It's about to go down

oow she was smokin hot 

Cam is going to have to put Annabelle in her place and be harder about it than she was with her mom.   Annabelle no longer can hold her job probation period over her head.

 I wished Richard had told Annbelle 'yep it is my fault the marriage failed and aren't you glad you didn't have my kid?'

Okay, as the story continues, I understand more on why he didn't tell her.  She is not comforting at all.  He probably would have gotten a cold reaction by telling  him to forget about it and grow up or something.  I can't imagine her acting the same way as Camryn.  He respected her and he felt lust for her but I don't truly believed Richard really loved Annabelle and maybe she knew it and recognizes the fact he is well and truly in love with Camryn.  At this point as a grown ass woman, Annabelle needs to let this ish go.  Why are you so bent on attempting to get back in his arms when he has clearly, simply stated he don't want you.  Go find the f*uck buddy you had for Christmas. 

Anywhoo, I can't wait for her momma's reaction when she show up with Richard, a white dude after that speech about her oldest son's girlfriend.  Momma a trip.  At some point you have to want the best for your children and listen to your children.  Camryn has told you numerous times she doesn't want ol boy.  Stop telling him her personal business before you get your daughter physically hurt with his can't take no behind.