Title: Chapter 1

Hello Hello Kaleah!
I am glad you are back! I Love your work.. The first story would truly be a best seller.Keep up the good work.!
BTW:Crossing my fingers hoping you will update "Now that it's over"

Author's Response:

Hey Adriana i'm working on Now that its over and i hope to put up a updat soon

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2014 05:45 am

Title: Chapter 1

Bolding the names is distracting

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2014 07:04 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Welcome back!   I'm glad you decided to give your new characters their own story.  Looking forward to reading your updates.

Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 29 2014 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 1

These three ladies are a trip! Jordan needs a knew man! Just saying...,

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 04:03 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Hi, I am glad you are back!  I liked the other story with Kayla and Tyler.  I think that you should keep that story the way it is and create this story with brand new characters.  This story should be in the Kayla and Tyler universe, but not be a remake of their story because it was fine the way it was.  I like your new characters Kaila, Jordan and Canada.  They shouldn't be exactly like Kayla and her friends were.  They should be a little different.  I know that you may not agree with me, and that is fine.  These are just my thoughts.  I hope you are not offended.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 07:50 am

Title: Chapter 1

I never read the original story so there's no confusion for me. But I'm interested and would like you to continue.

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 03:24 am

Title: Chapter 1

Seriously? please leave the names i can see the confusion already :P use the new names for your next masterpiece thats an idea.

Reviewer: SenieceTaO Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 02:45 am

Title: Chapter 1

I think u should keep everyone's name the same to avoid confusion. 

 

Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 01:21 am



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