Reviews For Memories Lost
Title: Night Out

Oh Darren. I told you, you weren't ready for Danica. too funny.



Author's Response:

Darren has met his match for sure. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2017 05:27 am

Title: Night Out

Very good update



Author's Response:

Thank you😊

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 24 2017 04:58 am

Title: Looking for Answers

Finally!! He let that hoe know. 



Author's Response:

Yes but will she take the hint? 🤔

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 03:51 am

Title: Looking for Answers

I loved the update...Please give us more

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 09:23 pm

Title: Looking for Answers

Finally!! He let that hoe know. 



Author's Response:

Yes, but will she take the hint? 🤔

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 06:44 am

Title: Looking for Answers

I enjoyed tihs chapter, great job! 



Author's Response:

Thanks😊

Reviewer: kaci Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2017 06:35 am

Title: Looking for Answers

Finally the truth! 



Author's Response:

The truth always reveals its self eventually!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 11:24 pm

Title: Looking for Answers

Awe this is such a great well written story. It's unfortunate to hear there's no outline and may end up unfinished like countless others.

 

I hope you're able to figure things out. Your style is excellent.



Author's Response:

I most definitely plan on finishing. I thinkg i just made it harder on myself by not outlining it first, such a rookie mistake. LOL 

Reviewer: intheroar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 11:01 pm

Title: Looking for Answers

I can't wait to read more...Glad to see that he finally see Macy for what she is.



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying it. It took him far too long but i'm glad he wasn't an idiot forever.

Reviewer: lleendaah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 10:31 pm

Title: Looking for Answers

Finally he kicked the bitch to the curb, but she still has that file.   I hope she left it in Brian's car. 



Author's Response:

Keep hope alive! lol Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 07:49 pm

Title: Looking for Answers

i love ur writing style, cant wait to read those chapters



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 07:36 pm

Title: Looking for Answers

Thank goodness the Detective was smart enough to pull the most important info out of the file, before handing it over.

I guess the point for Henry to go see her Dad was to say he was sorry.  As Pops was beating his azz, Henry must have relalize that he wasn't dumb enough to tell that he basically turned her over to be his dealer's whore. 

Very well done on Brian discovering he had been played by that snake Macy.  I hope he realizes while in his hotel how Macy feels toward Kelly and decides to go home--maybe he can run into Dani and she spills the beans about Macy pushing our girl down the stairs...

I know in your previous story you had the two women get into a fight, if that happens again, can Kelly get in some kicks this time?



Author's Response:

Henry is crazy but not stupid. I doubt he will willing give up that piece of information. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2017 07:20 pm

Title: Trust Your Gut

I'm glad Harvey has a heart I hope he do right by Kelly. And someone needs to flip the script on Macy and investigate her( what's done in the night, will come to light ) Brian needs to get his act together with Macy before Kelly will even look his way. Thanks for the update honey and Happy New Year.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and Happy New Year to you too. Harvey is in a kind of tough position.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 03:36 pm

Title: Trust Your Gut

Kelly that ho isn't pregnant, quit pushing Brian away.

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Date: December 29 2016 01:31 am

Title: Trust Your Gut

Let the truth come to light.



Author's Response:

Doesn't it always. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 07:53 pm

Title: Trust Your Gut

Go Brian go!!! Wahhhh their hearts are in it. I feel like crying for both. She's so confused and Brian come on mannnnn. Figure it out. Leave that trick. Living it and loving it lmao 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 08:17 am

Title: Trust Your Gut

Yay!!!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 07:53 am

Title: Trust Your Gut

Get busy, Brian and then kick her out.  In fact, just trick Macy--tell her he's taking her for a surprise and then take her to the appointment with the Doc.  

Poor Zoey, when she remembers what she went through and why, Brian needs to be unencumbered so that he can be there for her.  I like the story's do over. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 06:49 am

Title: Trust Your Gut

More!!!! :-)

Reviewer: kaci Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 04:54 am

Title: Trust Your Gut

Good for Kelly/Zoey. Do what's right for you, girl.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 04:06 am

Title: Closer

I'm dead please update soon!! I live in LA and it was my birthday last week. My sister and I took a road trip up to San Fran. I read her this story and she was hooked too! Lol just thought I'd share. 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2016 09:02 am

Title: Closer

It's time Brian to cut Macy loose so you can explore Kelly fully and honestly. I mean why? stay in a relationship where you are not happy? you was not happy before a potential pretend baby, you won't be happy in that relationship with a real baby. Thanks honey for this update and Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2016 04:03 pm

Title: Closer

i cant wait until they find out there is no baby

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2016 11:16 pm

Title: Closer

Love the update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2016 07:50 pm

Title: Closer

Smh! Brian Brian Brian. When are you going to see that witch Macy for who she really is and move on with your life?? It's obvious you have deep feelings for Kelly and you have a feeling Macy is being shady about her "pregnancy" so why not man up and get to the bottom of things! Ugh. 

Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2016 02:30 pm



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