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Title: Uninvited Pt. 2

Her husband is a doggggg! Actually that's an insult to dogs. His lies will come to light Soon! Brian isn't backing down and I loveeeee that. He isn't about to let her go with them without him. He is amazing and I love him😍😍😍

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2017 11:33 am

Title: Uninvited Pt. 2

Henry hasn't really changed. He's only thinking about himself. Each day that he gets up and continues to not tell Zoey EXACTLY what happened is another LIE that he's telling. No sugarcoating it for me. He's a LIAR and he CONTINUES to lie. I sure hope that Brian starts to look at what's being said, critically, and starts digging. Zoey is a sitting duck. Brian is clueless and so is Dad and Henry is a f'in' COWARD. I hope that she starts to get more memories back and more importantly, that she can interpret them correctly. That a-hole Henry is letting her think that she's trifling in going to be with a drug dealer. That makes no damn sense and if they buy that then they're dumb as dirt. gah.

Good update, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2017 12:04 am

Title: Uninvited Pt. 2

Diablo may be dead but Henry still have that debt to pay😯 What happens if they come to collect😮 Kelly's life is still in danger😣 they probably think she had something to do with the shoot out and the reason their leader is dead. Now you have Allen and Brian in the middle of Henry's mess😤 Nice update😆

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2017 11:44 pm

Title: Uninvited Pt. 2

I bet Henry is scheming about ways to come between Kelly/Zoey and Brian😏 when they return to Atlanta. I bet he won't extend the hospitality to Brian to stay at their house😕 I hope Kelly/Zoey bunk at her daddy's house without Henry😀 love the update😍

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2017 09:42 pm

Title: Uninvited Pt. 2

I'm so glad that Brian is fighting for Kelly/Zoey, and that he pit a monkey wrench in Henry's plan by going to Atlanta with her.

Henry is such a Slime.... and I wonder if Zoey was more of a conquest for him than his actually being in love with... I so hope that soon Allen and Brian find out who Henry really is.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 11 2017 01:33 pm

Title: Uninvited Pt. 2

It would be nice if that Private investigator Macy hired comes back into the picture and tell everything he knows... just blow slimy Henry right out the water. I love Brian, he's going to be stuck like white on rice to Kelly. Thanks honey for this update!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2017 05:13 am

Title: Uninvited Pt. 2

Brian is good to her & for her, but he is still gullible as hell. He needs to hire his own damn P.I.  The part about the drug-dealer & her just leaving Henry for some gangster is pure BS. 😊

Loving the updates

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2017 05:08 am

Title: Uninvited Pt. 2

Shit bout to hit the fan. Oh it's gonna come out. 

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 11 2017 05:03 am

Title: Uninvited Pt. 2

 I'm all for Zoey getting her memory back. Macy needs to be gone for good never to be heard of again.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2017 03:42 am

Title: Uninvited Pt. 2

I like the way the story is unfolding so far, but the only glaring mistakes I see are misspellings, incorrect words and run on sentences without puncuations. I really can't wait to see what happens next for Brian and Zoey/Kelly.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm going to have to give it a couple of days and go back over it with fresh eyes to catch the stuff I missed. 

Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2017 03:05 am

Title: Uninvited Pt. 2

I just want Henry to disapper,  his presence just irks my soul.  Brian is my ace boom coom, he is going to Atlanta to fight for Kelly/Zoey.  Please let her remember the truth about that asshole she married before she sends Brain away. Don't allow Henry to talk her into giving him a second before her memory comes back.  I love this story!!



Author's Response:

Brian is stepping up to the plate. I'm so proud of him. LOL

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2017 01:47 am

Title: Uninvited Pt. 1

I need to him to own up to what he did or I need all the memories to come rushing back to her like ASAP. She does not need to leave Chicago and go back to Atlanta with that scum. Maybe to vist her dad but not to go back with her husband. I really need her to get her memories back. Start to put those dreams together with what he just told you. Please girl!!!

Update soon. 



Author's Response:

Henry wants his wife back Brian is going to have to put his all into keeping that from happening.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2017 05:38 pm

Title: Uninvited Pt. 1

You have done so much work on this story, it really is coming together so nicely! Great work! 

Henry is incapable of starting off on a good foot. Typical. Allen should make a break from him, and try to reconnect separately with Kelly. I hope he brought more photos. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am glad my hard work is paying off. Henry can't do right to save his life.

Reviewer: Bookbutterflyq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 09 2017 09:43 pm

Title: Uninvited Pt. 1

Please let Kelly get her memory back soon😞 Henry and Macy must be stopped😤

Author's Response:

Maybe if she gets to Atlanta it will happen faster...

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2017 09:02 pm

Title: Uninvited Pt. 1

omg. The story has obviously been an awesome read from the beginning, but THIS aspect of the story (Zoey/Kelly learning about her previous identity and basically having to choose between her old life and her new life) is what I've been anticipating from the very beginning. And this chapter was the perfect introduction for the story taking this type of turn!

As for Henry and his selfishness regarding him lying (which we've all come to expect from him), I don't know what makes me angrier: the fact that he's lying to her, or the fact that since he's also lying to everyone else, especially including Allen, it'll probably be a while before the whole truth is revealed.

ugh. Henry and Macy deserve to be driven off of a cliff.

I can't even imagine how heartbroken she will feel after learning about everything that she experienced before the accident. Not only did Henry allow someone else to disgustingly mistreat her, but Henry himself mistreated her. And when the truth is revealed, it'll be like she's experiencing all of that pain all over again. smh.



Author's Response:

thanks for the compliment! i hope the rest of the story lives up to expectations! Henry doesnt know if he is coming or going at this point. hes doomed to fail when it comes to Zoey.

Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 05 2017 05:32 pm

Title: Uninvited Pt. 1

Great update! It's time to get to the heart of this story. Macy is a cow and i hope she gets what is coming to her. And I hope henry gets the ass whopping he deserves. Patiently waiting for the next updat. :-)



Author's Response:

Yes we are getting to the nitty gritty now! Henry keeps screwing up he might already be past the point of redemption.

Reviewer: kaci Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 05 2017 04:42 pm

Title: Uninvited Pt. 1

BRIAN KICK HIS ASS! She's going to remember him being an asshole but don't let him take her! Hell to the no! Omg I want to scratch his eyes out hahahah I highly doubt Brian is going to step aside so easily lmao not after that session 😉😉😉😂 SOOOO EXCITEDDDDD! Thank you for updating! It was such a good chapter. 

P.s died when Brian went ham on that whore maibitch lmao he was so close to not being a gentleman haaahah good man for not smacking the shit out of her. Henry loser pisssss off liar! 

 

...hahahaha my ship still sails!!! 



Author's Response:

Brian went through too much to just give up, hopefully we see a whole new side of him in the next few chapters. 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2017 02:50 pm

Title: Uninvited Pt. 1

Macy honestly believes she still has a chance with Brian😕 after he told her straight up to her face😨 that wasn't happening😆 and he had witnesses😉 Macy wants to investigate somebody, somebody needs to investigate her and put all her business in the street😠 I hope Zoey don't go back with Allen nor fake Henry😱 until she gets her memory back, stay with Brian. Henry pimped her out once he would do it again😡 Nice update😆



Author's Response:

its going to be tough. she has a father that she is going to want to connect with and be close to. Avoiding going back home means avoiding him too.

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2017 02:00 pm

Title: Uninvited Pt. 1

Hopefully, she will remember that she was some rapist property and ask where was her husband?  

I would not go with a stranger and that is what her 'husband' is to her.  I sure hope Brian and the rest stand up to Henry; her daddy knows Henry is worst than sorry and should speak up.  If she does have to leave Brian then go with the dad.



Author's Response:

Her father does know something is amiss but he has no proof. he doesnt know that Henry actually sold his daughter. all he has is a hunch.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2017 03:53 am

Title: Uninvited Pt. 1

I want Kelly to get her complete memory back so she can divorce that lying turd HEnry.  He hasn't learned a thing has he.  Macy you still won't get Brian back  PLease don't let her go back to Atlanta with HEnry?.



Author's Response:

Nope, Henry still doesnt know who to handle himself. He just can't man up in any situation.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2017 03:43 am

Title: Uninvited Pt. 1

I don't know who I hate more Macy or Henry they deseve eachother, they both only care about themselves... and I hate women like Macy, always blame others for what they lack... and I hope that the D boys investigate Henry and find out how slimy he his.

I know Brian isn't going to let Kelly go without a fight.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2017 02:32 am

Title: Uninvited Pt. 1

Henry is about to find out that you cannot make someone love you. Once the trust and love is gone, it's a wrap. I'm more surprised that Allen didn't intervene with the truth.



Author's Response:

Don't forget. Allen doesn't know she was traded to Diablo. He knows the same BS story that Henry is now telling Zoey. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 05 2017 12:18 am

Title: Uninvited Pt. 1

Girl, I got a house full of people and more people on the way to our 4th of July cookout. I'm in the kitchen cooking and trying to read at the same time. I'm glad you updated this story. Macy was so wrong for that. Poor Kelly didn't knew what hit her. Slimy Henry shouldn't even be there... it's all his fault she in that situation. I loved how Brian, Derrick, Danica and Darren stepped up to protect her. I feel for Allen, because that's his child but Henry can go jump in traffic for all I care. I hope Kelly memory comes back fully before she go anywhere with Henry. One thing I know, husband or no husband Brian is not going anywhere without Kelly. Thanks honey for this update.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Enjoy your cookout. :) Thanks to Macy things are about to get a whole lot messier.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2017 07:10 pm

Title: Games

I'm surprised. I don't think I would have let that go on for a whole week without jumping his bones (literally)!! But I can see where it makes the sex that much better. You are anticipating it more and more so it's like the big bang. Lol. I'm proud of her though! 

Update soon. 



Author's Response:

Right! She did good by not running away. LOL Brian was really showing out.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2017 06:10 pm

Title: Revenge

Such a tease!!! I do not like Macy with everything in me. I can't believe she reached out to her ex husband and father. I'm glad that she will find her father but I know finding out about her past and how she ended up in Chicago is going to crush her, I just don't think she is emotionally ready for that. But she does deserve to know. I just wish the private investigator would have reached out to her and told her what he found and how he was able to find it.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2017 12:36 pm



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