Okay, 1. More writing will get you more reviews (only one chapter since 2014?... I've implied enough?)
2. I'm intrigued as Jen Anon as well, but a word of warning to make the reading/comprehension smoother... try to incorporate commas, colons, italics (for thoughts), and semi colons (for afterthoughts) into your writing. Example: "... answers will come piece by piece as she begins to cope the writing will have more clarity...). Try this: "... begins to cope, the writing will..."
3. Please update, Yes I'm intrigued,curious, and just plain nosey/nosy.Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2016 12:50 pm
Intrigued by this story..dying to read the next chapter....update soon!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and enjoying... Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 21 2014 05:29 am
She's divorced, a smoker and down on her luck. What is doing on the side of the road? Why did she and ex-husband get divorced? Is Angela a reporter for for newspaper or tv station?
Author's Response: Yay, first reviewer! Well she's a bit of a work in progress... She's checked out on certain aspects of her life, she's a writer (novelist) but there hasn't been much of that. A lot of those answers will come piece by piece as she begins to cope the writing will have more clarity... I really was trying to convey her fractured state of mind. She's a successful in her career but it hasn't correlated with her personal life (a la divorced and barely supporting her daughter emotionally). Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2014 02:21 am