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Title: Checkers

Just a note women who lose their spouse are called "widow", men who lose their spouse are called "widower".

 Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 14 2015 08:26 pm
Title: Checkers

I am officially addicted to this story!

I Love the way S & S relationship is blossoming…I can’t help but feel this is the calm before the storm…Sally is definitely living a double life..

I cannot wait for the next update…

 

You have some Awesome writing/storytelling skills… Thanks for sharing your gift with us. J

 Reviewer: Adriana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2015 01:30 am
Title: Checkers

Good work...I like the pace of the story and hope to learn Sally's back story soon.

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2015 04:53 am
Title: Checkers

Sally piss or get off the pot, you want a relationship with Storm and you trust him or your don't.  I am tired of the waffling, she is making my left eye twitch!!  Who would have recognized her at that function and why was she worried about it?  Why would any of Storm's business associates recognize her ?  Was she hooking trying to make ends meet?  Sally frustrates me!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2015 10:23 pm
Title: Checkers

Good update. Not sure if you realize though but the text is duplicated on this one.

 Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2015 09:30 pm


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