Storm, that was all kinds of wrong, but Sally did eventually acquiesce. Wow!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 16 2015 01:28 pm
Wow. OK Storm!!
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: February 16 2015 01:02 pm
Catching up, great update and changes.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: February 16 2015 12:42 pm
He did not wear a condom.....
Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]Date: February 16 2015 07:34 am
Wow....so it looks like Storm couldn't take it anymore...he basically said fuck it...literally 😉
Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]Date: February 16 2015 06:17 am
I'm glad he told her to leave. She's getting annoying with her indecisiveness! Puss or get off the pot Sally!
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: February 14 2015 08:01 pm
I am new to this story but after reading to this point I absolutely love it!! It's completely different from the other stories I have read. And it's so interesting. please keep going 😊😊
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: February 14 2015 07:33 pm
Storm's mother is a bitch blaming a child for the mistakes of her father. dyorm is a hood DB big brother!! Team Storm!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 14 2015 03:50 am
OK, Storm is getting creepy. Why does he know so much about her finances? He's a little Christian Grey-ish. Controlling, manipulative...
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2015 01:02 am
Finally!!! I'm glad Storm is working toward unravelling Sally's story. Hopefully he can protect her from the crazy cop and whatever else she's running from.
Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2015 02:50 pm
Awesome sauce!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2015 05:56 am
Why is Sally fighting her feelings for Storm so hard? I know that her psycho stalker is problem but Storm could help her if she would open herself up to him. I can't wait for officer Eastman to meet his sire Satan! !
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 10 2014 08:25 pm
Good golly miss molly Storm, stormed his into Sally's heart. More please! Happy Thanksgiving! !
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2014 09:45 pm
okay, loving the story.
Let's get ths stalker caught. He is a sorry cop and seems to have some mental problems. So far as Rhonda is concern, if she is involved with break ins she needs to get her head together or suffer the consequences.
Now Sally. I believe she has some inkling about Rhonda possibly being involved with the robberies; maybe from reading the newspaper/tv or whatever. Sally is coming to understand she is falling for Storm, who seems to be ready to give his love to a wife and family.
However, Storm needs to really put his foot down with Audrey. He needs to deal with her face to face before she really goes nuts. He saw the display of her foolishness on camera. That type of behavior indicates she is not too stable. She needs to be dealt with.
Now when will the update be posted??????
Reviewer: A storm seems to be coming! Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 17 2014 05:24 pm
Sorry, I meant Sally.
Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed [Report This]Date: November 17 2014 08:45 am
After reading these chapters I have to say that I don't like it. Not because it's badly written but because I feel like somehow you've stripped the story bare and it no longer has the soul that it had. The names feel all wrong and the small details feel like they're missing, ie the connection and chemistry that Storm had with Salina, I'm not feeling it with Storm and Sandy.
It's still early days though so I hope it gets better.
Good luck!
Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed [Report This]Date: November 17 2014 08:42 am
Yes, Sally is admitting her attraction to Storm. By the way, I love the name Storm!! Audrey is cray cray, Storm needs to get rid of her quickly!! I am looking forward to Sally opening up to Storm about her stalker.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2014 03:36 pm
Looking forward to the updates. Storm sees like he has a hero complex.
Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2014 01:31 am
RHonda is shady, why is Sally friends with her? Me likey !,
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 24 2014 05:42 am
Okay, so I read this on here before it was good then and now...it does feel a little different but sounds pretty much the same. Good luck with the re write.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 10 2014 02:31 am
What is up with this officer? CREEPER! And why does he want Sally?
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: October 07 2014 04:54 am
That cop that is stalking Sally needs to die a horrible death!! Rhonda must know that her time of committing crimes is coming to an end. I am team Storm! ! Sally could use a break!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2014 05:10 pm
I hope the mysteries are unlocked in the upcoming chapters. When is Sally going open up? I know the story is called Trust for a reason, but what's the reason?!
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2014 02:02 pm
I like it. Just the right touch of mystery to keep me going to the next chapter. One thing niggling at me. If she's strapped for cash and working in a seedy dive, why did she turn down the cash her friend was offering to cover for her? Maybe they could've split it, or did Rhonda need it more? That stuck out. Other than that, good stuff. Your writing has a very cinematic feel... Very descriptive. Good stuff.
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2014 10:16 pm
I had the feeling that Rhonda couldn't be trusted. How are Sally and Rhonda friends? Why is Sally using a bike that isn't registered in her name? I am liking this story, I can appreciate how build the story with each new chapter. Excellent! !
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2014 01:06 pm