Reviews For COLORLESS
Title: Chapter 34

Oh nooo! they found the home! Now I'm scared to what Hiram and Camille will be coming back to! Great update!!

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Date: April 18 2015 02:47 am

Title: Chapter 31

Loved the update! Poor Stevie!

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Date: April 18 2015 02:06 am

Title: Prologue

Hope you update soon!!! 

 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2015 09:54 pm

Title: Chapter 34

I love this! Yaaaaaas! You are such a good writer!

Reviewer: Elodie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 02:44 am

Title: Prologue

Sorry, I had to add my reviews again. I had no idea I was signed out. LOol I was too interested in reading to even check. Haha

 

Update soon!!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:12 pm

Title: Chapter 34

Awww man... This is not going to be good when they do get back. I wonder what they are going to do. Burn the house down? Wait for them to get back and be hidden in the woods? In the house? Oh God. This is not going to be good. 

 

I'm glad I caught up though. I can't wait for the next add!!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:11 pm

Title: Chapter 33

I'm really glad that they found the Kellers. Now Savvy can really be connected to her birth mother. I hope they get out, I just know something is about to happen. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:10 pm

Title: Chapter 32

I can't believe this crap!! If you care for your son's whereabouts so much report it to the police!! That dick hungry birtch Debbie is lower than scum. They all are

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:10 pm

Title: Chapter 31

I'm glad that he went home with them. Camille is right, they need to leave there. I hope those bastards to get put in jail for abusing him. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:09 pm

Title: Chapter 30

I can't believe that they are doing that to poor little Steven. I hope that he doesn't have to go back home with them. Hiram and Camille should take him with them. But at the same time, he needs to go to school. They all need to run off to New York

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:09 pm

Title: Chapter 29

I woder if he will share this information with his family. Shatter their perfect little life. Aww she said her first word!!! That is one of the greatest moments of parenthood. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:08 pm

Title: Chapter 28

Oh Lord, I know that Savvy will be alright. Now I want to know where this Black in her comes from. Tell me now!! LOL

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:08 pm

Title: Chapter 27

That trick is soo desperate it is absolutely ridiculous. Her mother is right, let it go. She is going to get people killed and herself killed over a man that does not want her. She has already gotten a man killed and Hiram put in jail over ther obsession. How far will this go. 

 

I feel soo bad for Steven. How could they treat him like that? He is a child, why would anyone want to destroy his innocence like that? He can't have friends now? If he doesn't want to live that way then fine. Shit, kids don't always turn out the way parents want, that's apart of life. Beating him senseless isn't going to change anything. I hope he gets away and finds Hiram

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:08 pm

Title: Chapter 26

Now that's how you start the new year!!! LOl. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:07 pm

Title: Secound Act

I'm loving this plotline. Can't wait to get the juice!!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:07 pm

Title: Chapter 25

It's crazy to think that your own family and close friends will turn on you in the blink of an eye. I would have tried to kill them all, it was either that or they hang you like they would anyone else. But of course he was arrested. At least it was just that. The police could have just delivered him to the Klan or something like that. I hope they get out, I know that bitch is still looking for him.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:06 pm

Title: Chapter 24

I can't believe they actually said those things to her face. Their entire family is a peice of shit and will be dealt with accordingly. That is simply horrible. A damn reputation over your own flesh and blood. All she did was come into this world looking different. I wonder how many Baxters there were out there whose skin was a lil darker than what they expected. Her dark skin had to come from somewhere.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:06 pm

Title: Chapter 23

This was great. What a Christmas gift that is!!! Haha. LOl.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:05 pm

Title: Chapter 34

Awww man... This is not going to be good when they do get back. I wonder what they are going to do. Burn the house down? Wait for them to get back and be hidden in the woods? In the house? Oh God. This is not going to be good. 

I'm glad I caught up though. I can't wait for the next add!!!

 

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 06:56 pm

Title: Chapter 33

I'm really glad that they found the Kellers. Now Savvy can really be connected to her birth mother. I hope they get out, I just know something is about to happen. 

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 06:17 pm

Title: Chapter 32

I can't believe this crap!! If you care for your son's whereabouts so much report it to the police!! That dick hungry birtch Debbie is lower than scum. They all are

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 05:58 pm

Title: Chapter 31

I'm glad that he went home with them. Camille is right, they need to leave there. I hope those bastards to get put in jail for abusing him. 

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 05:46 pm

Title: Chapter 30

I can't believe that they are doing that to poor little Steven. I hope that he doesn't have to go back home with them. Hiram and Camille should take him with them. But at the same time, he needs to go to school. They all need to run off to New York

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 05:37 pm

Title: Chapter 29

I woder if he will share this information with his family. Shatter their perfect little life. Aww she said her first word!!! That is one of the greatest moments of parenthood. 

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 05:12 pm

Title: Chapter 28

Oh Lord, I know that Savvy will be alright. Now I want to know where this Black in her comes from. Tell me now!! LOL

Reviewer: Keikei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 02:51 pm



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