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Title: Chapter 43

Camilie that old bitch is reaping the karma that she is owed.  Don't feel guilty, she was nothing but the vessel that birthed you, death is deserved!!  Ethan actually likes Savvie, so I believe that he will be at her bat mitzvah.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2015 07:35 pm

Title: Chapter 43

I want Ethan to go to Savvys bar mitzvah. As for Camille. I want her to listen to her heart. Let go and let God. It would be nice if one of the siblings have a come to Jesus moment. But with people like these that will never happen. It's sad that if Carmilles heart leads her help this woman. The family will go back to ignoring her after its done. 

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2015 07:29 pm

Title: Chapter 43

Let Ethan go to Savannah bat mitzvah. It is more than  Mildred hating Camille skintone I think someone need to pay her a visit like a aunt perhaps or a cousin that look like Camille i think it time for Mildred skeletons to come out of the closet. So Camille can heal from the rejection

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2015 07:17 pm

Title: Chapter 41

So good.  Those mean ass old hags....I just can't stand them

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 25 2015 06:44 pm

Title: Chapter 43

Girl!!!!!! I was thinking the same thing f*ck Mildred Baxter, but Camille has a heart and she would save her mother. I would do what i have to do for Mildred and then let go and let God!!!!. Ethan seems like a good boy with a since of discernment he sees Chelsea for what she is a mean-spirited troublemaker and jealous person. I think God put people in our lives for a reason and some for a season. I think Camille will feel better knowing that she helped save a life. Thanks for the update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2015 05:07 pm

Title: Chapter 40

Thank you for a beautiful love story! They went hell and back but they made it. 

Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2015 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 42

I like the way they explained Savi's background and how the family began.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2015 09:10 am

Title: Prologue

Wow can't believe Stevie is in College Savy is a teenager & the boys are all growing up with the youngest being six. Loved the way they explained about the family being honest without having to go to deep then reinterating about how much she is loved. Sad have some mean kids in her class that are just nasty but such is life. Hopefully she meets & develop a good friendship with someone. Stevie has a Japanese girlfriend, so cool. Seems he's grown into a great kid with an open heart & views on race & that is everyone is beautiful in their own way every shape color ethnicity.Can't wait to read the next update love the path the story is going

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 05 2015 01:39 am

Title: Chapter 42

Steven is in college and he's in a interracial relationship, my how this young man has evolved. Steven, Hiram and Savannah should write to Hirams mother and Steven parents in prison, and let them know what they tried to do didn't break them it only made them into the family they are today and send them pictures of the family. Hiram's mother probably will have a heart attack, Steven's mother probably will have a nervous breakdown and Steven father probably will try to commit suicide. Camille and Hiram should let their children know that love could come out of hate and that they are a living testimony to the whole ugly past. Thanks for the update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 05:28 am

Title: Chapter 42

I loved this update. It's so hard to believe that Savannah is turning thirteen and growing up so fast since most of us are used to seeing her a baby and toddler. Steven seems to have turned out great. As for the family tree project Hiram is right Savannah dosen't have to let her family's past and history define who she is or who she will eventually become. Will Mildred end up at the hosipital Camille works at? maybe final confrontation with her birth mother?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 04:27 am

Title: Prologue

Ok so you know you got me over here fangirling right? Like I'm so into this story on the way home I was thinking that if you made a part 2 about Steven, you could call it Colorblind. I even was thinking of a part 3 for Savannah... ugh... I just love this story so much. I really adore their family. You did a really amazing job on this. 

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 42

Loved the update! Hope Savvy's project helps her to accept herself as well as her family for who they are. Hope Mildred and her ignorant children leave Camille alone.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 42

Thank you.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 12:16 am

Title: Chapter 42

What a beautiful update...

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 03 2015 11:15 pm

Title: Chapter 42

Awesome update. I still hate the Baxters. May they roast in hell

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2015 09:27 pm

Title: Chapter 42

Stevie is college man!! Stevie has a lady love who is Japanese.  Awesome!! Camille and Hiram a have done an excellent job raising Stevie!!    As a family they are helping Savanah deal with project. Savage needs hit one them little heifers in the throat for talking smack.  Just saying.., 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2015 07:57 pm

Title: Chapter 40

I loved this story from beginning to end. 

Reviewer: Curvy farmer Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2015 05:26 am

Title: Chapter 41

Omg yaaaaaaaasssss more chapters!!!! :D

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2015 03:44 pm

Title: Chapter 41

Man this story has been on my mind, I even had a dream about It. I just can't fathom a mother that carried a child for 9 months not wanting her because of her skin color. Then this same mother needs someone to help save her life and the only option could be the child you didn't want. I understand how Camille being a nurse could feel guilted into saving her mothers life she's human and she's a nurturer. Maybe It's the hormones talking being that I'm pregnant but I can't see myself laying down on my side while someone stick a needle in my pelvis for someone who thought I was beneath her and her family. If I were feeling generous I would let them take a Peripheral Blood Stem Cell donation where they take It through my blood. I wondering was Eugene even Camille's father, maybe Camille came out so dark because she was someone else's child.Maybe mama was a rolling stone, where ever she spread her legs was her home., maybe Camille was a reminder of her sin's. Maybe Camille needs a DNA test done because to me something in the milk isn't clean.Girl you know you are good when you have readers dreaming about your story. Good Job!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2015 12:14 pm

Title: Chapter 41

Little Logan was born on his grandfather Hiram Sr. birthday. I know that's right about more children we are done when our twins get here, 5 children will be enough. I hope Savvy don't let what the other children say get to her, kids can be so cruel I blame their parents no home training. My family is a plethora of a lot of nationalities to. My grandmother is black, my grandfather is Black/korean, my mother is Black/korean, my father is full Native American, I'm black/korean/native american, my husband is Full Italian so my children are Black/Italian/Korean/Native American that's alot. I be DAMN if I would give anything to save that women life, so who needs who now. If my skin color wasn't enough for you keep me, why would my blood be enough to save you, all you saw was the color of my skin not your blood that was flowing though me, so no lady you can't have my blood PEACE OUT!!!. This was one good story MP!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2015 12:15 am

Title: Chapter 40

Twins what!!! you know I like that. I love these people.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 39

I always say just because you are born into a family it doesn't make you a family.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 11:49 pm

Title: Chapter 38

YES!!!!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 11:45 pm

Title: Chapter 37

THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!!!!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 11:39 pm

Title: Chapter 36

The wicked witch is dead.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 11:32 pm



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