Title: Chapter 3

Wills is a tease and is enjoying every minute of Talia's reaction...Talia better prepare herself, cuz Wills likes to play Games..

The vivid pictures you paint of Florence, is just Beautiful!!!

I Love the humor in the story...I laughed so hard I got a cramp in my side...Thank you!

Looking forward to the next chapter...


 

Reviewer: Ashley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 03:21 am

Title: Chapter 3

Interesting update. What is William up to? Why is playing games with Lia? Something's up with him.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 01:37 am

Title: Chapter 3

The hell was that? He'd be due for a beat down!!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2014 01:14 pm

Title: Chapter 3

William is a tease and likes to be dominant.

Since he likes to be in charge with BDSM playing he should let his partner know what to expect. Less confusion in my opinion.

Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 02 2014 04:16 am

Title: Firenze

Interesting story

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2014 07:32 pm

Title: Firenze

What happened to George? He was there when they arrived but hasn't been mentioned since.

Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2014 10:42 am

Title: Firenze

Will seems to be working awfully hard to throw that red herring... But the why isn't so clear.

it's ok if Talia wants a ONS. She's young and feels jilted... Keep it coming!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 07 2014 08:35 am

Title: Firenze

Great update! Hmm, William seems to be a playa! Talia should get to know him first before trying to get involved with him on the first night. He may not be what he seems!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2014 11:31 pm

Title: Firenze

At least she wasn't too easy.  I doubt Wills did anyhting with Diana, but I guess he won't be 'getting it out his system' with Talia.  Hopefully, she will get to know him before giving up her treasure. lol

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 06 2014 10:36 pm

Title: Firenze

Why did Talia cook for them?  William seems like womanizer while Diana is a lush.  I am reserving my opinion on Elizabeth and Colin.



Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles! 

Sorry if it wasn't made clear in the story but Talia cooks for them because they decided to have a home meal while the rest of the group explored florence given that Talia already knows the city.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2014 09:28 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I like this.



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2014 07:12 am

Title: Chapter 1

@pmgayles: what's wrong with going off on a weekend with some classmates? To a city she is familiar with? It's not as if she couldn't hold her plane ticket or had to relinquish her passport. 

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 29 2014 10:27 am

Title: Chapter 1

thanks for posting! 

Apart from a little mess from the grammat-gremlins: "have not have  been", you have a very promising story here. Looking forward to more. 

PS- one guy travelling with 5 beauties!? How'd he get so lucky? I hope they're not all going to fight for him!



Author's Response:

I hate grammar grrr hahaha

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 29 2014 10:21 am

Title: Chapter 1

Me likey :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you do!

Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2014 04:31 am

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start! More please!

Author's Response:

You will get more

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2014 04:01 am

Title: Chapter 1

So far, so good.... I'm intrigued. 

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2014 01:45 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Was Talia lying to herself about being not being sexually attracted to Jake? Did she think that Jake waa going to settle for being married to her with no love involved?  Who is this Adriana person? Talia just meets this woman in a foreign country and takes a trip with her to another country, too trusting.  I have feeling that the situation that she ends up in is because of friendship with Adriana. Because she allows other people's opinions to sway her from she internally knows to ne right. Dumb, dumb ditty!



Author's Response:

Hmm interesting review. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2014 01:17 pm



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