Reviews For Adaline:The Silent
Title: Chapter 6

I really hope Addy can have a life outside of Dominic, which I think is already underway. I just don't want her to pine away for him when he is still in pain over Dina (though he shouldn't have assumed they would get back together...). Maybe she could even go on a date with someone? Or at least have a friendship with another man? It could help her heal from her near rape attempt maybe idk. I just need Dominic to really thirst over her eventually because it's vastly overdue. A little healthy cliche jealous never hurt especially with how open they are with another due to their previous close friendship. 

I was excited to see this updated so quickly! Can't wait for more

Reviewer: reneicy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 09:12 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Please Dominic !I've on from Dana she is most certainly not worth all the drama. If the man wasn't a danger to her or her baby then why run? Seems shady to me. More please!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 08:06 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I don't know who the father could be but please don't let it be Dmitri baby.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2015 07:53 pm

Title: Chapter 5

OMG! Is that Dominic's baby? Is that why Dina ran off? It couldn't be Slade's baby, could it? OMG! The plot thickens!!!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 04 2015 11:02 am

Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter! I am curious to know who the father is....

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2015 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 5

I thought Dina may have ran away to hide pregnancy but I thought she had other admirers around the same time she was seeing Dominic.

I don't want Adaline to become someone's doormat or lost puppy.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 06:48 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Love it, love it. Dominic is such deep character

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 08:38 am

Title: Cast

 

Holy crap! Is Dominic the father of Dina's baby? ! If so she needs to tell him. That's not right and it's not fair for her to keep a child from him. She need to talk to him and stop trying to avoid him. Great update worth the wait! I can't wait for chapter 6.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 04:59 am

Title: Cast

 

Holy crap! Is Dominic the father of Dina's baby? ! If so she needs to tell him. That's not right and it's not fair for her to keep a child from him. She need to talk to him and stop trying to avoid him. Great update worth the wait! I can't wait for chapter 6.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 04:57 am

Title: Chapter 5

So there is a spark of awareness from Dom to Addy....that's what I'm looking for! My concern was always that I didn't want Addy to be some sort of sloppy seconds for Dom. That Dina was the one he really loved (the one that got away) and Addy was the one he learned to love. She deserves more than that.

Also, I don't want Addy getting lost in all things Dom because she's caught up in the reconnect.

For me, there is already a fairly deep level of intimacy and trust between, even if Dom isn't actually aware of it. For example, she knows about his music and singing...and NO ONE else does! Not even Dina, the woman he's currently crying over. That says some in my book. Thats a big deal.

I'm not recalling the timeline at the moment, but I really hope this baby isn't Dom's. Its selfish, but I dont want Addy to have to deal with all of that. I'd really like things with Dina to be a tether-free. I mean, she hurt his feelings, cry and move on. 

All that said, awaiting to see where you take this....

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 02:59 am

Title: Chapter 5

Love Ed Sheeran!! Hmmm...I don't think the baby is Dominic' s. Why would she be so mean to him if it is his baby?? I like that Adeline is going out trying to start a friendship/relationship with Dominic. But he's so torn up and lovesick over Dina... I just don't want her to get hurt.  Good update.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 10:47 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Dimitri baby lol

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 10:46 pm

Title: Cast

Where can we go to read "Sasha: The Wallflower" since it's no longer posted on VC.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 10:26 pm

Title: Cast

Where can we go to read "Sasha: The Wallflower" since it's no longer posted on VC.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 10:23 pm

Title: Cast

Where can we go to read "Sasha: The Wallflower" since it's no longer posted on VC.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 10:23 pm

Title: Cast

Where can we go to read "Sasha: The Wallflower" since it's no longer posted on VC.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 10:19 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for the new chapter. I really like this story. But I am more and more confused about Dina's new background. From what I remembre from Sasha's story, Dina was a waitress and ahd a kid, a boy : when she met Slade she even told him about the kid and it was a test to see how he would react. So now she has a gallery and a secret baby?? It feels like abig retcon. And I am not liking theis (sub)plot in Adalaine's stroy. I am not really interested in Dina right now (especially seeing as she has been rewritten) : the cheating part is way too melodramatic, and the secret baby and secret baby daddy stuff is veering on the ridiculous side. I am way more interested in learning more about Adalaine, how she is doing at her job at the center, and how she is going to become a photograph and it feels like Dina's story is taking Adaline's one away. And please, don't make the two woman ending up working togetehr or something, and turnsit into some tringle bit.... UGH! I hate love triangles. And I really, really want the focus to stay on Adaline, rather than her to become just one corner of a cliched triangle.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, RedHobo! Hmm...I don't remember writing in Dina having a kid, even in the chapters published for ValentChamber but I concede because it was a long time ago. I hope you keep reading because there is a reason for Dina's presence in this story. While a subplot, the two will be connected at a certain point and no, not in the way you are assuming (e.g., a love triangle). I am not a fan of love triangles myself so don't worry! There will be none of that. I can understand the secret baby daddy stuff seeming ridiculous because you don't have the entire story yet, but I hope you keep reading. As for the cheating, I don't find it melodramatic myself because that is just a fact of life: people cheat- emotionally and physically. Thanks for reading and your review has definitely given me something to think about! :-)

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 09:33 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Man, this is getting so good. Can't wait for the next update. GOOD JOB!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 07:18 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Not liking Dina right now. Who is Sofia father? Could Dominic be her father or is the man that left Dom for the father? Please update soon!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 05:45 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I wonder how is this dinner going to go.

Reviewer: Candice Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 04 2015 08:57 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait for update.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 31 2015 09:10 pm

Title: Chapter 4

What is wrong with Dina? Was her career so important that she would hurt someone and a relationship. It sounds like she just up and walked out of a growing relationship. Who did she fall in love with? Where is this person? Is she still in love with this individual?

hopefully Dominic is not so hurt that he will try to hurt out of his hurt. Adaline does not need or deserve a relationship that is going to take her on a journey of pain and regret.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 27 2015 01:24 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait for update.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 26 2015 09:40 pm

Title: Chapter 4

She said she "fell in love" with someone. She didn't say "she is in love" with someone else. That still does not answer the question of as to why she left without telling Dominic. Did she leave the U.S. without telling the other person she fell in love with? Or was the other individual With her?

 

Please update soon.

Reviewer: Carrie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 25 2015 02:05 am

Title: Chapter 4

I'm not sure about Dina and Dominic but I know that Adaline is tired of being a door mat and she is determined to have her independence.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 11:31 am



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