Reviews For Adaline:The Silent
Title: Chapter 4

At least Dom knows now. And Addy will be a good friend to him. This will be intersting to watch.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 04:39 am

Title: Chapter 4

I'm glad Dina told him because now he can move on.  Adeline is coming at the perfect time.  They are friends and can grow from that. I think she will become so important to his life and grow to love her romantically.  I do think they both will probably date around a little, but rely on each other for an emotional connection that will grow. It will probably scare him, but when he realizes what he has in Adeline I think he'll be all in!!  Love the update...can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 01:43 am

Title: Chapter 4

I love it and hope he confines in Addie and they grow closer. I want her to tell him her story as well. Great love story to come! HEA! 

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 01:35 am

Title: Chapter 4

Adaline is going to be a friend for Dominic asking nothing in return because she loves him. At some point Dominic is going to realize what he is looking for is in front of him.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 12:56 am

Title: Chapter 4

well she got to meet Teagan & has an Allie in Sasha now that shes moved out on her own into the city. Poor Dom he asked he got the answer but it hurt even more; Adeline called at the right time. Now on to building new relationships & renewing old. Cant wait

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 12:39 am

Title: Chapter 4

Was Dina pregnant with Dominic's baby when she left the U.S.? Why was she so upset and evasive about telling Dominic she was in love with someone else? 

 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 10:22 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I think Carla sabotaged Adelines relationship with Dominic thats the only thing I can think of because she aounds like just that kind of person because she couldnt have him.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 10:17 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Dominic was able to help his brother Dmitri's to go after the woman he loved. He was able to recognize how much Sasha was in love with Dmitri. Hopefully Dominic will be able to recognize true love again. He just needs to be honest about his feelings for Dina. Dina needs to do the same and stop playing with Dominic feelings. Then he can move on.

I don't believe Dominic will hurt Addy. I feel Addy will make it known to Dominic her feelings about him in due time, but will make it known to him she will not always be around. Who knows Addy may meet someone on the job that will show some interest in her. This may be what is needed to wake Dominic up about hidden feelings.

 

 

Reviewer: Seeing and hearing Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 07:03 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Who did Dina fall in love with and couldn't be honest with Dominic?  Not liking Dina at all right now. Victoria is such a biotch!!  Why was her husband Daniel making excuses to Adaliene about Victoria?  Awesome sauce!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 06:29 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I am glad she is going on her own. She needs to be able to take care of herself, because her aunt want to control her.

In the story "Sasha," there was an Asian in love with Dina. I can't remember his name. I don't know if this is the person she claims to be in love with. Whoever the person is, Dina could have told Dominic up front. I believe she was holding on to Dominic in case the other individual didn't work out. Was she telling the truth about bing in love with someone else?

Hopefully Dominic can get himself together. The danger is, is he still in love with Dina? Can he move on? Does he want to move on without Dina? Once he can be truthful about Dina, he does not need to mislead Addy. He already knows how she felt about him in the past. He needs to be upfront with Addy and not us her.

Paddy needs to be on guard with Dominic.

Right now there are a lot of unanswered questions with Dina and Dominic.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 06:17 pm

Title: Chapter 4

They're going to go to dinner. Get close and just when addy think are going to go somewhere between the two Dina will come back asking for forgivness. Which will be weird for Sasha I'd imagine. 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 04:25 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Good chapter. Good to see her standing up for herself

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 02:19 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Who did Dina cheat with? She handled the situation horribly!! Dominic may forgive her, but it's going take some time. I hope he doesn't put the moves on Adeline.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 12:47 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Finally, she told the truth! But who was the person that Dina fell in love with? Was it Slade? Or some new guy or maybe it was a woman? Who knows! 

Either way Dina has allowed Addy and Dominic a chance at happiness, once they get over past hurts!

Yeah for Addy, she has taken a huge step in her life! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 10:06 am

Title: Chapter 4

What the hell is Dina crying for? She just stomp on Dominic's feelings and she's trying to manipulate with tears...  Oh hell to tha nah, girlfriend need to keep on steppin.

Addy called at just the right time. Dom truely needs a frind now.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 09:32 am

Title: Chapter 4

At least Dina told him and it is normal to be stunned, hurt, angry.  In time Dom will forgive her, but it will take awhile.

 I am afraid Addy is putting herself out there and will unknowingly be the rebound chick.  Addy will feel even more insecure when she realizes her competition is the woman in Teagan picture and  Dom will run back to Dina if she wants to try again.  

Love this story!  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2015 06:53 am

Title: Chapter 3

I am in agreement with Adaline concerning the stability of Carla's marriage. Carla is a gold digger. She sees her husband as a means to society, gala affairs, diamonds and the spot light. She does not love her husband. She loves his $$$$$$$$ Who knows her husband may be using her! Or he may kick her to the curb when he finds out what she is really like.

However Dominic's life with women has not proven to be stable either. He has not found the ONE for him, someone who will adore and love him, for just being him. Well he may have found his treasure right in front of him. Sometimes when we are looking for something, we have a tendency to push other things right on top of the very thing we are looking for. Remove the blinders Dominic. Then you will TRULY SEE!!!

Update soon.

Reviewer: Can't see Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15 2015 04:11 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Please give us more.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 10 2015 06:00 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I believe Collin is going to come into some real reality is about herself as well as her marriage.

Adaline has some insecurities about herself. Some of those insecurities come from her handicap her hearing, as well as the people around her; looking at her as the black sheep in the family.

Cant wait for the update.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 09 2015 03:15 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I think Addy and Dom are going to be a cute couple. I don't think Dina and Dom were ready for each other. I hope they can get past the problems and become friends. 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 12:16 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I think Addy and Dom are going to be a cute couple. I don't think Dina and Dom were ready for each other. I hope they can get past the problems and become friends. 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 12:16 pm

Title: Chapter 3

The perception versus the reality with Adaline keeps me on my toes. It's easy to think she's like Sasha with the whole not good enough routine, but I see Adaline can put Carla in her place when pushed, without mincing words. With her issue mostly to do with her hearing, it's major and when it affects how you communicate verbally, its easy to "disappear" into yourself. Look at how Carla used that against her to gain a position of power and superiority over Addy. Yep, petty and churlish. Little things like that chipping at her all the time and its something she can't do anymore about than she already has. But seeing her spunk come out at odd times, I think Adaline is going to surprise us in some interesting ways.

And I'm still confused about why her aunt treats her that way. Interesting story there.

Carla's behavior is easier; spoiled brat who thinks the world revolves around her. And she really has a thing about Dom and Adaline together in any way. She seems to talk real offense to Dom ever even looking Addy's way. Even now. I think she still will be a problem, marriage or no.

Nice!!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 06:54 am

Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter.  Can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 05:36 am

Title: Chapter 3

Hmm, I'm curious...

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 03:25 am

Title: Chapter 3

Finally!!!! Yeah I do remember Dina but who cares about her now it's all about Adeline!!! 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2015 06:20 am



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