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Title: Chapter 1

I like it so far. Keep up the good work.

 Reviewer: aries20 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 10:34 pm
Title: Chapter 1

The Davis family is now acting like they care, why?  Her mom steuggled to raise Anika and Anika ia struggling to take care od herself.  How did they find her I wonder? Did they hire a private investigator?  Slap Malik again, I don't like his attitude.  Anika has every to hate them. Her poor mother, what an awful way to die!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 10:30 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I'm intrigued and would like to read more. Great start.

One thing to fix, the male character went from Malik to Marcus back to Malik and then Shawn all in the time spent at the apartment. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for pointing that out. I'm going to fix it now

 Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 10:17 pm


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