Reviews For More Than Life
Title: Chapter 6

I love the strangeness of this story and the pace, the fact that a stranger would latch on to someone but in a non creepy way is what I like about it.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 01:08 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I would very much like to hear from Mica's point of view, if for no other reason that to learn why she felt like she needed to help Ken.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 08:04 am

Title: Chapter 2

What Mr. Ken's wife is doing to him is tantamount to emotional abuse.  It's a shame he feels like he has to swallow that mess in an effort to keep up appearances.

I like where you are going with this story.  So far it's emotional without the usual overwrought melodrama that you sometimes find in stories on sites like this.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 14 2015 07:14 am

Title: Chapter 6

Ken deserves some happiness and love Mildred is coco for Coca Puffs.  I would like to hear what Midas thinking although I am still bothered by the age difference.   Team Ken!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2015 01:07 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I want to hear from Mica's point of view definitely. The only error that i saw was that you put mines instead of mine but this story is so intriguing i read it as soon as I realized that you had updated please do so again.

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2015 10:33 am

Title: Chapter 6

Nice update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2015 03:12 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Oh man, I feel so sorry for ken. I hope he finds happiness soon maybe with Jamica? 😉

I would love to hear Jamica's point of view. This story is really deep and I'm loving it, so keep it coming 😊

Reviewer: Rainbows Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 11:23 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Very nice chapter! Can't wait to see where their interactions go. 

Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 09:00 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Omg I don't know why it took me so long to read this story! I love it. Please update soon!!

Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 07:36 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I've read this story and with each chapter I try to get into the grove of the story you are telling, but something is off.  I can't put my finger on it.  The implausability may be to much for me, but I think it is the character of Jamica.  She just isn't believable.  I am not saying the story is not good, outside of Jamica, I like the story.  I like Ken and his struggle and his trifling wife and the detached kids.  But the two of them together just is not quite there for me.  

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 05:37 pm

Title: Chapter 6

 I like this story and hope Ken and Jamica become a couple don't see that happening no chemistry but we will see

Reviewer: Charming2i Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 04:57 pm

Title: Chapter 6

It may enrich the story to have Jamica's point of view. However,   I fear a loss of the intensity you've cultivated in Ken's character, given that you have little time with your studies to write.  That's just my greed and impatience talking.  Whatever makes this story flow for you; keeps you inspired.  It's really great,  this far! 

Reviewer: Not sure Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 01:30 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I would like hear Mica's point of view, although I can admit that age difference bothers.  Ken is his best but MJ is like an albatross around his neck bringing him down.  Telling him that he was ruining their family when it was her cheating ways that were.  Nasty drunk heifer!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 12:11 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Plz update soon.....

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 07:48 am

Title: Chapter 5

I am liking your story a lot and the characters and would like to see how they develop.  The age difference only makes the story very interesting.  Plz update soon.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 07:27 am

Title: Chapter 5

Wow. Ok so I've been reading since the first chapter and I've got to say that this is amazing!! I love the pacing and the characters but also how you've written the story. It's like (don't know if this is true) you've been through a divorce etc and you're bringing it out on here. Anyway thanks for posting this and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Ken & Jamica takes things slow 😜 10/10

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 10:27 am

Title: Chapter 1

Good start. I love a Good North Carolina based story. :)

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2014 05:06 pm

Title: Chapter 5

What happens next?  Pls update.

Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 08:00 am

Title: Chapter 5

I love this chapter :)

Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 12:50 am

Title: Chapter 5

"No, I don't know you from Adam, but I help people. That's what I do, then they are out of my life."

It can be really draining to take on others' problems. There's something mysterious about Jamica.

I flucuate between being pissed at Ken for letting that skank get away with all that she has and being so hurt for him being so devastated by that skank. MJ has always been a selfish git, Ken just didn't want to see it. He may have lived for her, but at no time did he figure in her life. 20 years, a very long time to be deluded. I'm concerned about his dependence on Jamica. She can not be his saviour.

This is a really good story, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 05:37 am

Title: Chapter 1

This story is so strange to me because of the point of view but I really love it and the pace your going I willing to go along for the ride because you've got me hooked now.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 05:46 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Supreb!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 05:02 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Mildred is crazy, showing up at the house drunk.  If Ken hated you it would be because you cheated on him repeatedly and didn't hide that you were cheating!  Looking forward to Ken finding himself and being truly happy. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 02:45 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Love this chapter. Glad he had the courage to close the door on his wife instead burying is feelings.  Seeking out comfort is natural response and he found that with Jamica. Hopefully he doesn't hurt her because it sounds as though she has a past as well.

 

 

Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 01:28 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Great job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 08:27 am



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