Title: Chapter 1: Ready To Open Up

Glad she stood up not many women in those situations do

Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 03:05 am

Title: Characters

I like the photos. Hope Keline turns out ok.

Reviewer: Noni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 11:50 am

Title: Chapter 1: Ready To Open Up

Interesting start! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 03:52 am

Title: Characters

I think I'm going to like this story!!!

Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 12:24 am

Title: Chapter 1: Ready To Open Up

This sound like it will be a very good story. Please don't make us wait long for an update. Keline picture is very pretty.

Reviewer: Black girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 12:06 am

Title: Characters

love the pics

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 11:38 pm

Title: Chapter 1: Ready To Open Up

Great Job...Domestic volience one of the most hardest crime to help people to share.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 11:37 pm

Title: Characters

Jared is a scum bag for one and two Keline needs to get over him. He does not deserve her or any girl for that matter. Abuse is a touchy subject. It's even sadder when it involves young kids. Im a little wary to continue reading but I will for now. Your writing is well written. Good job.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1: Ready To Open Up

She is still in love with fool!!  Her aunt is making her do the right thing because she doesn't deserve him putting his hands on her.  Jared is where is should be so that he can get help to deal with his anger issues. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 10:57 pm

Title: Chapter 1: Ready To Open Up

The subject is mature, the writing is well presented and the reading is smooth...I'm more than interested !!! One word left : more !!!

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 10:50 pm



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