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Title: Chapter 1

Hmm.... So I'm guessing that Andy is the rich white billionarie. I wonder if he found her by chance or he looked into her and found out she does that. Hmm

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2015 04:37 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Me likey!

Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2015 03:24 am

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Well something tells me Mr. Money bag is a freak a big one.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2015 05:04 am

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I am Mixed race woman who identifies as black. I don't need to educate myself as you put it, I know what's up. I disagree with you about MOST black men treating black women like crap. It is your story as you say. I was just making the point that one does not have to step on the BLACK MAN to make the White man look good in stories that are interracial. You seem upset' and that was not my intention.



Author's Response:

I'm not upset nor am I stepping on black men to make white men look good. I don't think white men are better than black men cause at the end of the day white men are still gonna be attracted to eurocentric beauty standards, and black men can be that way as well. My female character does not have eurocentric beauty, and the male character is not a saint nor am I implying that he's a saint because he's white. I just want this to be cleared up.

Reviewer: madison Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2015 04:08 am

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Why do a lot of writers of interracial stories make the BLACK MAN THE VILLIAN!?? I like the story except for that part. The stuff the character spews out of his mouth. YUCK. Is Travis black or white?



Author's Response:

Well in my story, I made Robert like that to portray him as a successful but self-hating black man. Now let me just inform you that black people can discriminate their own people. For example, Team Lightskin vs. Team Darkskin. In this country, hell even in the damn world, black women are treated like shit, and most black men are the ones treating us like shit. If we aren't lightskin or white passing, then we're ugly. It's those Eurocentric beauty standards. I'm a lightskinned woman, but I believe that lightskin (or white) doesn't always mean beautiful and darkskin doesn't always mean ugly. I'm not being rude or mean when I say this, but please educate yourself on this subject because we as black women need to know this type of stuff. I know it's a work of fiction, being that it's my work of fiction, I just wanted to clarify some things with you whether you care or not.

Reviewer: madison Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2015 05:34 pm

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Love how the story is unfolding....just like to point out inconsistency of sitter's name, it was the Franklins in Chapter 1 and became the Smiths in Chapter 2.  Uppity Robert deserves be immersed with water for putting Fe down, kudos to Knight Andy.

Reviewer: Agape Realms Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2015 03:28 pm

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I like it! I like it! I hope you write many more chapters, I can see this being a full length story. 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 02:54 pm

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Great start, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 02 2015 05:08 pm

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I just finished reading this first chapter, and i'd like to say that i found it very enjoyedable. Please give us an update!

Reviewer: sandra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 30 2014 11:10 pm

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Awesome start. Didn't like the girl Andrew was on the date with. Great beginning. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: laughterandlife Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 30 2014 01:14 am

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Hmmm.  A bit eerie that he didn't wanna show his face. Great start. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 01:11 pm

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Awww

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 08:56 am

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fantastic start to the story...I love pictures of H/H

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 06:17 am

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Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 03:08 am

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Great chapter I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 09:55 pm

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Very interested!

Reviewer: AstralSkies Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 09:45 pm

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Like the story so far

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 08:55 pm

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Insteresting chapter.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 07:57 pm

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Interesting story.............

Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 06:16 pm

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Good start. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 05:04 pm

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Good start.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 03:44 pm

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Love the casy, Matthew Bomer is so damn fine!  Andrew ' s date Shanna was self - absorbed, mindless twit!  Why would Andy's publicist do that to him?  Why is billionaire going on virtual dating site? More please!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 03:38 pm

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love this! I hope you update soon. Have you got a schedule? Daily? Biweekly? Weekly?z

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 02:38 pm

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WOW!!!  I like this new story, very different and fun. I can't wait for more, please post again soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 11:50 am

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Great start, love that you made her dark without light eyes. What's wrong with dark brown eyes?! Thanks Alison

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 11:03 am



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