Title: Chapter One:Brave

Damon her friend did her dirty!  And has she gone crazy!! I love it

Reviewer: Sharma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 04:46 pm

Title: Introduction

Love the start.

Reviewer: Kinky Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 04:45 pm

Title: Chapter One:Brave

Poor girl but I hope Gina doesn't do anything to get her killed. I think Jelena will forgive her she was a good friend and her situation was out of her hands. Now she's met the wife of one of his associates what now. &  she really needs to start listening to him when he talks to her maybe then she can understand things better & something is going on & it seems like he's protecting her & she doesn't even realize it. 

 

Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 05:37 am

Title: Chapter One:Brave

Nice to get some more info on Jelena's past. It definitely explains alot. Poor thing just keeps getting hurt too. By the way, I LOVE that Jhene Aiko song. I swear when I first heard it it was on constant replay. Good chapter.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 03:25 am

Title: Chapter One:Brave

You're story is good, I like the rush. It's puts me on edge. But IT does seem all over the place or could it be this story will be all over the edge.!!!! I think Jelena has lost her mind, is she going to turn into a wise gal?!

I don't like Gina, something about her is off!

Booboo stories ha! Lol

I'm excited about this ride!

Reviewer: Blair Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 03:16 am

Title: Introduction

Nice can'take wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: dee27 Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 08 2015 04:57 pm

Title: Introduction

i think this story is very good....if you're going to make her a submissive character please dont make her fully submit to him.......there's nothing wrong with a little sassyness

Reviewer: pillow82 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 07 2015 02:15 pm

Title: Introduction

This is very intriguing. How did she get from stripping to be admitted in his private floor with her own room & everything. after that first introduction. Plus did she find his name after he left without giving it to her.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 07 2015 01:36 pm

Title: Introduction

Nice start. This plot will be fun to watch. Jelena is in for a ride, poor thing.  I enjoyed your writing style and I'm excited to read more 

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2015 02:11 am

Title: Introduction

Wonderful start to a captivating story. I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Jonesy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 06:34 pm

Title: Introduction

Seems Gina should school her since she introduced her into that world. Good start so far. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 06:23 pm

Title: Introduction

I want more!! Great job, I can't wait for the next post :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 03:17 pm

Title: Introduction

Her parents  were killed when she was 16, did she go into the foster care system? Did she at least high school?  Is that why she celt that stripping was her only option?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 02:17 pm

Title: Introduction

I like this. 

Reviewer: TiesThatBind Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 01:58 pm

Title: Introduction

I'm liking the story so far! I like how you are pacing the story!  Nicely done! 

Looking forward to more updates.

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 09:31 am

Title: Introduction

Hmmm this seems interesting. I wonder where you're going to take this :) very happy for the Afro Latina aspect lol (don't mind me lol)

Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 08:19 am

Title: Introduction

Interesting start to this story................

Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 07:10 am

Title: Introduction

Ok I hope this is good. Just a few grammar errors. But I'm intrigued.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 05:48 am



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