Reviews For NIARA
Title: Chapter 2-4

Niara does have smart mouth on her, but it is her protection, too.  I like that wicked sense of humor.  It will take time but Cat should tell Niara about the little time she did spend with her--every child likes to hear about themselves when they were small.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 06:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2015 04:34 am

Title: Prologue

Thirteen years away from her child. Thirteen years away from her mother... I can't imagine the pain those two have gone through. I can understand Niara's feeling of abandonment on both sides, but there is surely more to the story. I don't know what would drive Cathleen to stay away for as long as she did; I don't think there is ever going to be a good enough explanation, but I want to know just as much as Niara does.

Good reading! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: caramia_darling Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2015 08:19 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Man, my heart aches at the idea of having to give up my child because I couldn't provide for them. Especially at such a young age.  But, in the end, what's most important is what would be best for the child. I wonder why she didn't visit all that time?  I can imagine she may have been ashamed, but I would be visiting as much as I cmoossibly could. Great update. Looking forward to the old school vibe! a86;a039;

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2015 06:48 pm

Title: Prologue

Poor, young naive Cathleen. It seems both she and her daughter will be growing up at the same time. And Nathaniel... heaven save us from selfish men... sorry 'boys', cuz he sure as shit ain't a man. 

Reviewer: caramia_darling Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 10:52 pm

Title: Prologue

Now I'm sad.

Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 08:01 pm

Title: Prologue

I hope for her daughters sake when she wakes up she gets her act together.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 04:09 am

Title: Prologue

Can't wait for the next chapter. The part about the guy denying the baby, and being cold and hostile, that happened to my friend. As a result she doesn't trust men. Anyway, I hope Cathleen survives. So she can raise her daughter.

Reviewer: rthom714 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 01:22 am

Title: Prologue

Wow!  Great start. I'm sure a lot of people reading this may know of someoe who has had a similar experience. Interested in where your going with this one. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 11:55 pm

Title: Prologue

Description of the labor pain brought back some memories---I felt for Cat.  She was so young and naive.  I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2015 10:57 pm



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