Title: Chapter 17

Caleb went there, it'seems romantic but much too soon. Still team Caeb!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2016 04:39 pm

Title: Chapter 17

I myself as a parent of 6 children want them all to be happy, I want them all to be treated with dignity and respect. I can get where cyn's parents are coming from, but the decision to stay together fall on the people in the relationship. I have to believe that I instilled in my children by example how they should be treated, and If they feel violated in any way to tell that person how he or she makes them feel and that they don't have to put up with it. Or they can go the other routes and tell their father and I, along with their uncle's that they are being mistreated and girl...I'm a boxer too, and their would be hell to pay!!. I'm happy that her mother and father are coming around to at least giving Caled a chance. I'm also happy that he proposed and she accepted, so she can stop giving her milk away for free. Thanks for the update and I'm glad you are back with this story.

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Date: April 24 2016 04:32 pm

Title: Chapter 17

very good update

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Date: April 24 2016 02:23 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Poor  Caleb ! ! I feel  for  him  because  daddy  Is  holding  no punches  back . Thanks  for  the  update . 

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Date: December 26 2015 08:10 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Caleb, hang it up!!  Her father will always see you as the broke his daughter.  Caleb hurt Cynthia but the rest of what happened was all her. Caleb just love Cynthia and work on remaining clean.

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Date: December 26 2015 04:41 pm

Title: Chapter 15

wonderful, wonderful update/

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Date: October 25 2015 07:45 pm

Title: Chapter 15

I'm glad that Flo and Armand are giving Caleb a chance. Men seem to give each other the benefit of the doubt quicker than women do. I do believe you are going to have some funny happenings going on when they all go to Jamaica. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2015 08:48 pm

Title: Chapter 15

I get her parents being angry at Caleb, Cynthia is their only daughter,  Armaund and Flo need to chillax, Cynthia chose to try to commit suicide over Caleb.  It's really working my nerves, as there is something lacking in Cynthia that she let Caleb's leaving to affect so bad to attempt to kill herself. The woman needs therapy, Caleb is taking on too much guilt for a decision that Cynthia made.!  Caleb has his own demons to slay. I am not fan of Cynthia's.

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Date: October 20 2015 11:17 am

Title: Chapter 4

So loving this reunion!! She's making him work though. :)

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Date: October 18 2015 04:14 pm

Title: Chapter 14

I think daddy should hear Caleb out, he understand that he hurt Cyn but if she has forgiven him and he's the one who hurt her, then mommy and daddy will just have to deal with it. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 01:56 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Caleb is manning up!!  Het family will he a hard sell, but to be real her attempt to kill herself was all on her.  Caleb wasn't shoveling pills down her throat. Put then blame where it should be placed.  No man i worth taking your own life over. Like Cynthia said forgave Caleb so they should as well.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 03:44 pm

Title: Chapter 13

I like the fact that they are giving Karen something to do that she love like dancing. The music selection was on point. Wow! Cynthia tried to kill herself over Caleb not calling her, I see why her family and friends disliked him so much. Maybe Caleb and Daniel can sit down and talk man to man. Cynthia needs to realize that everything in life may not go her way and trying to harm yourself is not the answer. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 02:27 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Wow, didn't expect to hear that Cynthia tried to kill herself, over a drug addict. Now I understand everyone's anger, Caleb has a lot to prove.  But is he strong enough to overcome both his own demons and remain strong in his vow to be clean?  I am rooting for you Caleb!!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 05:13 am

Title: Chapter 12

I understand her mother and father protection, but Cynthia is a grown women and her life is her life. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2015 10:15 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Supreb!!

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Date: August 23 2015 06:13 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Robert knew Cynthia was using him and alliwed her to, why?  Her parents didn't like Robert either  no surprise there.  As that age difference annoyed me as well.   Don't backtrack now Cynthia either you have faith in Caleb or you don't?  I personally don't understand falling un kive with a drug addict as my oldesr brother was one and my sister -in-law loved hus dirty draws. Don't get it at all,  I loved him because he was my brother but she chise to love his dumb ass.   There are woman in real life who knowingly choise the harder road. I hope that it turns out better for Cynthia. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2015 02:33 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Caleb has to redeem himself in the eyes of her parents. It's understandable. Hopefully he can!  

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Date: August 23 2015 02:15 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Supreb!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 08 2015 03:08 pm

Title: Chapter 11

I like the fact that Caleb is trying to get to know Cynthia, like my grandmother would say " They put the cart before the horse" the first time. Taking thing slow and really getting to know eachother is the right way to go, don't make it all about the sex. Building a friendship alone with the relationship is "Priceless". Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2015 10:01 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Glad they are getting to know each other again but in a different way. This was a very sweet moment for them. Now on to meeting Her Parents can't wait to see how that goes

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Date: August 07 2015 01:51 pm

Title: Chapter 11

A clean Caleb is amazing human being.!!  I can't wait for him to meet her parent, that should be fun. Not!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2015 11:55 am

Title: Chapter 10

It's about time she own up to her feelings for Caleb. I'm glad Flo has step back with her feelings about Caleb also. Cynthia do need to talk to Robert face to face and tell him the truth. Plus Cynthia and Caleb needs to take it slow, not continue where they left off start new.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2015 11:30 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Flo is funny!!  Cynthia so your roll,  get to Caleb again as he really is.  I understand that Caleb hurt Cynthia but she fell in with a drug addict, so as far I am concerned she neefs accept responsibility.  Who in their right mind falls in love with some they see using drugs on the daily?   Then act brand new when addict displays addict behavior?  The man used drigs and drank to mask his emotions and your shocked thst loosing his father made him separate himself from you?   Really?  My okdest brother was a dtug addict and I still wonder why his wife stayed with him?  Addicts are unreliable.   So yeah, I am really ot feeling Cynthia 's anger. Just accept the role that you played in that situation and alliw hom to prove is worthiness of a second chance.  But think about what you saw in him when you first meet, as you obviously thought he was worthy even through the haze of drig use  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2015 12:08 pm

Title: Chapter 9

About damn time!!!! love it.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 08:16 pm

Title: Chapter 9

They belong together.

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Date: June 28 2015 12:02 pm



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