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Title: Chapter 7

I have to remember this is an adventure. Alliances might be formed and broken and re-formed. So, yeah, I can see why Adam is still among the living. Sure, he can't be trusted now, but who knows. Plus, you best believe the rest of the crew don't trust him as far as they can throw his fine ass. He might become quite useful, if the others as as good as they seem to be.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 10 2015 06:09 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Why would they trust Adam not to betray them? How are they going to prevent it,  babysit him 24/7? This aspect of the story makes absolutely no sense.  And Natia is supposed to be lusting after the guy that tried to kill her? Again after a betrayal of this magnitude they let Adam off this easy and expect him to simply comply with their wishes makes absolutely no sense to me. Hopefully in time, the method behind what I see as madness will become clear.

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 12:54 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Adam has proven himself untrustworthy so he should be dead already.   Mika is psychotic and needs a kill shot to his brain.  Jail is too good for him.  Each chapter this story gets better and better.  Two thumbs up Is my rating!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 12:22 pm


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