Reviews For Confluence
Title: Intro: Lee Williams

Nice😀

Author's Response:

THANK YOU SISSSSSSSS

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2019 01:52 pm

Title: Intro: Lee Williams

Thank you for the update. Oh, Lee...I know losing weight, can be sometimes difficult, but if you want to do it, you must go through the difficulty and get on with it.
The doctor, as brutal as he was, is correct, you are obese. It's certainly not something you want to hear, but it's something that you need to face. Mum, is doing you no favours by pretending otherwise. The Doc was brutal and straight to the point, because that is where you are at and too many times things get lost in the mind, if it's sugar coated.Your self esteem has certainly been lost along the way. Your weight and self worth are most definitely correlated and it's heart breaking. The more your weight goes up, the more your self worth and esteem goes down.
You remind me of my older step sister, Ria...she's was 5'9 and 240lbs. She felt like crap and most certainly treated herself as such. She was very promiscuous (not intentionally, we realized she just wanted someone, anyone outside of the family to love or at least want her). It took years of this toxic behaviour, and the family finally acknowledging it, to get her to realize what was happening. My sister who became a psychiatrist...pointed it out and made us all (Ria, included) realize, that she was not in control of her actions as previously thought. Her emotions, like Lee were controlling her and decisions and behaviour were being made based upon these feelings.
I want to wish you a very Happy Christmas and an even happier New Year. Looking forward to your next update. Have a wonderful day.



Author's Response:

I absolutely adore your commentary Sarah and appreciate it so much! Thank you for sharing beautifully personal and poignant information!! Love that you love the story so far! I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and pray that you have an even better New Year!!! Have a great day darlin and I'll see you soon! 

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2019 01:19 pm

Title: Intro: Nakamura Tobu

This will be my 1st story I read when I get back😀 Nice job!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2019 12:52 pm

Title: introduction.

What a teaser😀 I want more!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2019 12:50 pm

Title: Intro: Nakamura Tobu

I love Tobu!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2019 03:04 am

Title: Intro: Nakamura Tobu

Thank you for the update. I really like this story. The intro caught me immediately.  Please , please update it often...it's good. To be honest there are only a few writers on this site that can keep my attention to continue reading all their stories...you are definitely one of the few. I like your originality and style.P.S. Can you update Transcendence...great story.
Have a blessed day.



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah!!! First, thank you for leaving a comment hehe. Oh my that's quite the compliment!!! I am so thankful and humbled that you enjoy my works!! That means so much to me and inspires me to continue crafting my artistry. I'm glad you enjoyed getting to know Tobu a bit from the intro! There will definitely be more to come! Yes darling, Rae and Roto are my next planned update! Prayfully soon! I have learned not to rush lol. 

 

You have an even more blessed day love! Thanks again for the support and comment! May God bless you richly!

 

D&L

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2019 01:06 pm

Title: introduction.

Dang you let the cat out the bag about Hiroto and Rae, but i'm not mad at you. My baby Tobu has his own story I'm so happy and Leah is a hoot!!.



Author's Response:

hehehehehe yup!! Leah is for sure a hoot fa sure lol. Glad you like it Ms. J!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2015 05:09 pm

Title: introduction.

Accordance is done!

let's get this show on the road.



Author's Response:

Lee Lee, Tobu's intro is up and ready for your viewing pleasure lol. Hope you like it!

Reviewer: lee lee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 09:31 pm

Title: introduction.

*Icona Pop voice* I love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you thank you darling!

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 01:48 am

Title: introduction.

sounds like it will be an interesting ride.



Author's Response:

For sure lajack1! Tobu's introduction is up and running so I hope you will enjoy it!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 09:27 pm

Title: introduction.

I absolutely love this story please keep this story the way you have it now. I'd love to know more about Lee and Tobu



Author's Response:

ehehehe are you still ready for the ride? They're here. 

Reviewer: ch. 1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 07:07 pm

Title: introduction.

YATTA Tobu-kuuuuuuuuuun .

Though it wont be updated til Accordance is completed i am more than willing to wait you got me hooked

Author's Response:

hehehe I hope you haven't forgotten about these two! Tobu's made his introduction!

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 04:17 am

Title: introduction.

Lee is hot mess and not sure of herself I see. Looking forward  to getting to know  her and Tobu.   



Author's Response:

hehehe

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 04:08 am

Title: introduction.

Lee is hot mess and not sure of herself I see. Looking forward  to getting to know  her and Tobu.   

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 04:08 am



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