I feel bad that whatever is happening inside of Saul, that he has yet to truly delve into or address has caused him to lose his happiness.  Unfortunately he has been the cause of his own misery.  I still do not feel that bad that I want Lynne to take him back just yet.  I have a hard time with him sleeping with Alicia after the conversation with Lynne and she brought up a divorce.  If Lynne finds that out, I think it will really be no way to come back from that for Lynne.  Malcolm seems cool but Lynne seems very mature and Malcolm appears a little young in his actions so it would be interesting to see how the romance plays out.  Plus Malcolm doesn't have any children and does he want any?  I like the pace of Malcolm and Lynne being friends first.

I feel like we are going to learn something in Saul's past that has caused him to self-destruct after 25yrs.  You don't go from being happily married to cheating overnight.  I sense a trigger somewhere that we don't know about yet.  Looking forward to how you redeem Saul's character.  He might be the more interesting of the two to read about actually (Shhh, keep that on the DL).

LOVE THIS!! I literally yelp when there's an update!!

I'm really enjoying your story.  The first version was nice, but I think this one is more polished and the plot and pacing are good.  Thanks for sharing.

See Saul, you brought that crazy ho into Lynne's world. All you could think about was gettin it in. No thought to what disease you could bring to Lynne, no thought of the cesspool you were dipping "little saul" in, no thought to that ho's mental instablilty, 'cause this couldn't be the first time homegirl has channeled "fatal attraction". Whatever happens is on your triflin' ass.

Malcolm really has it for Lynne and she's starting to feel him. Again I say, Saul who?

Alicia is cray cray, and I want Lynne to beat her like Tina whooped Ike in that limo.   Aliho quit her job!   C-I-L-L Aliho!!!!   Make Saul's dick shrivel up and fall off.  Oh, I'm sorry I meant to call SS. Or we call him SAS which stands for Sorry Ass Saul!   Yep that works for me.  .Malcolm is working his way into Lynne's heart.  Team Malcolm!!!!

very good chapter

Can't wait to see how this plays out.

Lynne made the right move and she needs to go slow with the new guy--it has been 6 months but she needs to make sure this one is a keeper, not a rebounder.  I hope he ios younger than Saul and a couple of yrs younger than Lynne (men tend to age faster).

Alicia is so damn desperate--she reminds me of those women always putting their paws on something that don't belong to them.  His kids will never forget what he did--they may forgive Paul when they see their mom is happy, but they will never accept or respect Alicia.  

Alicia don't realize it, yet, but she has really done Lynne a favor:  he was going to cheat on Lynne, sooner or later.  

let me say again that I love this revision!

Get yo man lynnnneeee!! Love it!

Loving this story and Malcolm was just too cute--more background on him, please.

That's what I 'm talking about!  

All Saul can say is what he wants--buddy, it is no longer about you.

How could Lynn trust Saul again? Instead of seeking inner calm and reflection, he fucked that bitch without a condom and was hard as granite! I hope Lynn never takes him back; once a cheater, always a cheater. If not in reality, in dreams, looks toward other women or thoughts of other women. 

Lynn needs to be happy with someone new and trustworthy.

Malcolm is fine as hell!!  Lynene deserves that fine man.  Saul you doesn't deserve love of a good woman or your chilren. Sex with a ho and no protection, stupid as hell! Did Lynne ever get tested?   I really hate Saul!!