Reviews For Alpha
Title: 10 (2) - '. . .hallucinate the tables are turning. . .'

Great as always. Just got back from vacation, I had a lot to catch back on.

Update Soon!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much, Kaye2008!! So glad you're enjoying Alpha!!

Aww, lucky you! Hope you had an awesome vacation. I'm sure it ended far too soon, as they always do!

Thanks for reading & for taking the time to review! It means a lot to me! :)

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 01:54 am

Title: 10 (2) - '. . .hallucinate the tables are turning. . .'

My finger is itching to pull the trigger.... But anyway I'm glad ava rain is talking to Kasey because her other best friend has a dinner date with a certain female werewolf. Caleb should know his pack is now ava rains and they like her better so he can get over it. And now I am scared because if what happened before is gonna happen again then I am going to have to have several buckets of ice cream when ava rain decided to go to the park but I am studying to be a certified medical assistant.as for me remembering that I told you this is one of my favorite stories. Happy writing my friend update soon. 



Author's Response:

Still determined to put a silver bullet in Caleb's skull? AND you still want Jennifer to be eaten by Angelie? LOL, you're absolutely killing me!!!!

I may have to join you with those several buckets of ice cream because what happened before is definitely going to happen again. You're studying to be a medical assistant? That's so awesome! Your favourite twin is going to need somebody to tend to his wounds, lol.

As always, thank you so much for reading & for taking the time to review, Jadedbylifesavedbygrace!! It's such an honour to know that Alpha is one of your favourite stories because I never imagined that anybody would like it. So, thank you!

p.s. LOVED your YOS update! It was amazing, as always! :)

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 01:49 am

Title: 10 (2) - '. . .hallucinate the tables are turning. . .'

This book is sooo good!  I love Ava-Rain's giving and forgiving spirit.  She will be so hurt by Jennifer's betrayal but at the same time she mentioned that her friendship with Jennifer was somewhat one-sided in that Jennifer always thought about Jennifer and friends were there to support that habit.  I actually don't understand her friendship with Jennifer and would kick the girl to the curb anyway.  Jennifer is likely being used by the purebloods and has no real idea that she is betraying Ava-Rain.  She hasn't been described as a deep enough thinker to actually be knowledgable about werewolves, but I could be wrong. Still, who knows what type of bull was fed to Jennifer to get her cooperation?



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Ava-Rain will totally be devasted by Jennifer's betrayal for sure! Jennifer is one of those friends that sometimes tends to put her own needs above everybody else's needs, but at the same time, she knows when to stop pushing Kasey & Ava-Rain past their limits to avoid being kicked to the curb. She's not a horrible person, although it may seem that way thus far, but I'm a firm believer that 'horrible' characters always have a reason for being horrible; it's such a pet peeve of mine when characters aren't fleshed out & are created to be 'villainous' without any real reason or just for the sake of drama. Which is why, of course, there's a deeper reason why all three are still friends & a reason why Jennifer is working with the pure bloods.

Thanks so much for reading & for your review, jahchannah! :)

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 01:01 am

Title: 10 (1) - 'Come raise the dead, I'm dreaming of the end. . .'

Its like I'm about to fall out of a chair wanting whatever is going to happen, happen already! Dreams always mean something, and to be having those kinds of dreams...yeah.

The big bad is lurking.....



Author's Response:

Lol, the big bad is defnitely lurking! Ava-Rain's dream is definitely foreshadowing something & to be having dreams of your own death, I'm sure, can't be anything good.

As always, thank you so very much for reading & for your review, flikchick! :)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2015 08:15 pm

Title: 10 (1) - 'Come raise the dead, I'm dreaming of the end. . .'

The death of Ava-Rain in her dream, I think is the old, insecure, fearful girl. Morphing to the beautiful and strong Alpha female will be through trial by fire and the painful shedding of old skin.  Transformation is not easy, but can be gut wrenchingly difficult. That's what I see, anyways. Caleb telling her what she wants to know would be easy. Becoming who he absolutely needs is the challenge. I love this book. So original!



Author's Response:

LOVE your analysis of Ava-Rain's dream, jahchannah! There will definitely be a transformation that Ava-Rain will undergo. It won't be easy & it may be one that she will be forced to endure, just like in her dream.

As always, your continued support means a lot! Thank you so much for reading & for your review! Originiality is super important in every story to avoid cliches, so I'm super happy that this story isn't falling into an unoriginal storyline. :)

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 01:59 am

Title: 10 (1) - 'Come raise the dead, I'm dreaming of the end. . .'

Ohhh man.. What is this dream about. I wonder if that's what could happen to her if she became a wolf. At least that's what I thought at first. It would make sense that she doesn't become one if all of that is going to happen. LOl. 

I can't believe he just teased her like that for some damn information. That's not fair at all. You didn't accept a damn thing, you 'guided' it out of her. If she can't 'guide' stuff out of you then don't do it to her. That's just unfair. You forced that girl to tell you what you wanted to know and then left her out to dry. Rudeness!!

I'm getting tired of this damn girl. Whoever she is, she better be the damn bomb. His sister or some shit. All this crap over an ex is not cool at all. Get it together Caleb and quick!!

Update soon!! 



Author's Response:

There's a lot to Ava-Rain's dream & it's pretty significant to the overall plot. I've always tried to stress and foreshadow that there's a lot more to Ava-Rain than we know, and this dream ties into that.

All's fair in love & war, at least for Caleb anyway. But it was so wrong of him to tease her, wasn't it? Soooo not fair, but there's no such thing as fair when it comes to his mate.

LOL, you're not alone in your feelings! The girl from Caleb's past is somebody really important to the plot as well, as she was somebody extremely important to Caleb. He knows he needs to tell Ava-Rain about her, but, of course, he's going to avoid doing so for as long as he possibly can.

Thanks for reading & for your review, KeiKei! Second half of this chapter should be up soon! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 12:44 am

Title: 10 (1) - 'Come raise the dead, I'm dreaming of the end. . .'

 I  love how Ava-Rain pulls herself together I actually tried it once and it worked so thanks for that. I wish that Ava-Rain could stop feeling so insecure about her relationship with Caleb, but in a way I do understand were she is coming from. As for the theories, you have heard( actually read) ours now I am dieing to see what you are brewing in that head of yours also to see if I was at least close. Thanks for the update and I'm looking forward for more. 



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, Ava-Rain's life has been governed by her insecurities, so it's definitely hard for her to not fall prey to them. I LOVED all of the theories you all shared & I can't wait until the story plays and reveals if you were right or not!

Thanks for reading & for your review, Zoleka! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 11:25 pm

Title: 10 (1) - 'Come raise the dead, I'm dreaming of the end. . .'

Ava Rain is such a creeper checking him out while he's asleep lol that dream reminds me of the last chapter you wrote before you took it down last time is it foreshadowing that? Okay I love you and this story but I am going to f**king kill Caleb if he doesn't man up and tell Ava Rain about fake mate. I don't  care if Declan hates me afterwards I swear I will put a silver bullet in his skull. okay now that I got my aggression out can you please have him tell her. I know he actually feels her pain so please just tell her. I might have an anger issue when it comes to characters I like and Caleb is doing her wrong I apologize if that was overly rude. Sidenote chapter 15 of YOS and chapter 5 of LAY should be up by Friday. Happy writing my friend



Author's Response:

Ava-Rain's a HUGE creeper, lol! But, when she has a boyfriend/mate as beautiful as Caleb, I can't blame her for staring! Her dream definitely ties into the chapter your referencing. Gosh, I can't believe you still remember it, it was soooo long ago, lol.

LOL, I totally feel your anger in regards to Caleb!!! Get it all out, don't worry, I don't mind! He knows he has to tell her about 'fake mate' (lol), he knows that he needs to tell her, but he refuses to put that type of strain between them. He doesn't want to give her a reason to doubt him or regret her choice, which is kind of selfish on his part but he's never denied that about himself. He'll only wait until it's absolutely necessary to tell Ava-Rain, which will probably do more harm than good, but that's a risk he's willing to take. He doesn't want to cause her pain, but he also doesn't want to relive his own pain over what happened in the past.

As always, thank you so much for reading & reviewing, Jadedbylifesavedbygrace! And thanks for the heads up on your stories! So glad that your creative juices are still flowing! :)

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 10:56 pm

Title: 10 (1) - 'Come raise the dead, I'm dreaming of the end. . .'

Ava-Rain is back to frustrating me, talk to Caleb can't tead your mind. He also can't help you if doesn't understand the problem. Tell him about the dream ad he might be able to help you understand the dream. I am hoping that dream signifies that she is changing becoming more shifter  That would be awesome. Only after they do the thang will the change be permanent.  I love this story!!



Author's Response:

LOL, Ava-Rain is always frustrating me, so I feel your pain. Of course, sharing her dream with Caleb would be the EASY thing to do, but she tends to make things difficult because she's so used to keeping things to herself. As for Ava-Rain's dream, it's definitely a bit of foreshadowing & ties into one of the theories you all shared. Only question is which one. . .

Thanks so much for reading & for your review, pmgayles! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 10:23 pm

Title: 10 (1) - 'Come raise the dead, I'm dreaming of the end. . .'

Brilliant as always.  You are so extremely talented.  Beyond gifted.  Thanks for sharing your imagination with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Jaye Sims! Coming from a briliant & talented authour such as yourself, that truly means a lot to me! I'm just so honoured & thankful for your support & still can't believe that my little tales were able to spark your interest. Thank you!

p.s. Haven't had the chance to read your new story yet—I wish I had more time to read—but expect to be bombarded with a bunch of reviews in the near future, lol! :)

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Date: May 20 2015 08:08 pm

Title: 9 (2) - 'Your rescue, my undo; I'm not the one to save you. . .'

Look at her claiming them as her deltas. LOl. I love the bond she is creating with the pack. A true alpha female. I think that is going to be important in the future. What did she whisper to Declan? Not the belly rub!!! That thing there is powerful though. I don't know anyone who can resist it, human or animal. Haha. 


I still want her to become a wolf. Call me selfish! LOl, it would be cool. But I know it would cause a bunch of problems with The Council and the Hunters. Dang!!


So that's what he meant by training her. That is interesting. I can see why that would be important. Especially when things are happening. If she can't control all those emotions it could overtake her and ultimately destroy her. Makes sense. Especially since his emotions are soo strong. 


Sooo that's why Caleb has to stay a secret. The Council is afraid of what the power within him could do. And the fact that his mate is a human doesn't make matters any better. But Ava-Rain isn't a hunter. So will they try to kill him and her if they found out about them? 


So he is going to finally shift in front of her. I can't wait!! 


Side note: Can females have their own pack? Like Caleb does and find a mate. Or am I just thinking too much. LOl


This was great!! Update soon!!! 



Author's Response:

LOL, Ava-Rain totally has the twins wrapped around her finger! She is, ultimately, the pack's future Alpha Female, but the title isn't as important to her. She's just happy to have a family & to be accepted by these strangers that are, quite literally, willing to put their lives on the line for her-a human, whom feels like she has absolutely nothing to offer them or their world. They already view her as their future Alpha Female, but it's a role that Ava-Rain will have to grow into and believe in. Her journey's definitely going to be a tough one.

LOL @ you still wanting Ava-Rain to become a wolf! When I first posted this story, there were some awesome theories that she might be a shifter and that her 'wolf' was dormant. I did say that Caleb would never want to turn her, but that doesn't mean she won't be turned, in some way or another. . .

If The Council were to find out about Caleb, they will do whatever they need to do to ensure the balance between the worlds. As will the Hunters. He is literally not suppose to exist, as there has never been an heir of the four since Chogan & Chayton. I don't think they'd go so far as to kill him, but his existence was kept a secret because his parents weren't willing to take the risk.

Females can totally have their own pack! That's such an awesome question & thank you for asking. Females (wolves) are bred & raised to be just as strong as the males, and there are many packs led by Alpha Females, some with a mixture of males and females, as well as many with only females. But all female packs are more common amongst pure bloods, whom usually CHOOSE their mate rather than wait for Luna to grant them with one. And, in that case, they'll usually choose a mate from an all male pure blood pack (i.e. an alpha female will choose an alpha male), but both pack's will be kept separate and under the rule of their respective alphas. I know, that was a ridiculously long answer, but I hope that it answered your question & made some sort of sense! Lol.

Thanks so much for reading & for your review, KeiKei! Glad you enjoyed this chapter! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 06:00 pm

Title: 9 (2) - 'Your rescue, my undo; I'm not the one to save you. . .'


Luna does not make mistakes in pairing mates so she has a purpose in pairing Caleb with Ava-Rain. It can already be glimpsed in watching her bring peace in her dealing with the twins. Ava-Rain possesses a strength and a connection to the supernatural world of which even she is unaware. Like other readers, I think she has a connection to the hunters, especially since she seems to fit so co.fortably in Caleb's world. Perhaps she is a human heir of the four and with Caleb will help to restore balance to their world.  This werewolf story is definitely unique and I love it!


Author's Response:

You are so right! Luna definitely does not make mistakes & there is a reason why Ava-Rain & Caleb were paired together as mates. A HUGE reason why she was deemed fit to enter this new world. I'm absolutely loving the reccuring theory that Ava-Rain may be connected to the hunters or a human heir of the four. But do you think she's badass enough to be a hunter? And if she's a human heir of the four, is she an heir of 'good' or an heir of 'evil'? Or maybe she's just a plain old human, lol.

As always, I really appreciate you taking the time to read this story & share your thoughts, jahchannah! Thank you! :)

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 05:48 am

Title: 9 (2) - 'Your rescue, my undo; I'm not the one to save you. . .'

I really want them to spend some serious time together. They have the connection, but not the time. It seems something is always coming up.



Author's Response:

I know, right? Unfortunately, time is one thing that will probably never be on their side, which totally sucks.

Thanks so much for reading & for your review, flikchick! :)

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Date: May 14 2015 11:30 pm

Title: 9 (2) - 'Your rescue, my undo; I'm not the one to save you. . .'

Ava-Rain is a human heir which would explain their connection and her dreams.  Cava-Rain is awesome!!! Or could it be Aleb- Rain? She has Cully accepted Caleb and it a beautiful thing. Awesome sauce!!!!



Author's Response:

LOVE your theory, pmgayles! Ava-Rain being a human heir of the four could possibly explain A LOT of things, but would she be an heir of good or evil?

LOL @ 'Cava-Rain' & 'Aleb-Rain'!!!

As always, thank you kindly for reading & big thanks for sharing your theory! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 01:28 pm

Title: 9 (2) - 'Your rescue, my undo; I'm not the one to save you. . .'

I like it so my theory ava-rain is descended from the hunters and that's what her grandmother didn't think her father was good enough. Caleb please tell her because she can help you and the reason fake matedied is because she wasn't your true mate and that is the only the healing power works my theory. And I will give up my claim as soon as he's mate shows up I promise. Sidenote if you watched general hospital how do you feel about Stefan. Happy writing my friend

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

That's a very interesting theory about Ava-Rain! All hunters come from a line of hunters; it's a life they're literally born into. Ava-Rain wasn't even aware that hunters existed, but your theory would definitely make things interesting. I will say that there is a lot more to Ava-Rain than we think & what's been revealed thus far.

I literally laugh out loud everytime I read 'fake mate'!! Love your theory about the healing/resurrecting abilities of Caleb's blood only working on his true mate, but he's pretty darn convinced that he holds no such power. You think he's wrong? As for your claim on Declan, lol, I may just have to write you in the story as his mate-if him having a mate is in Luna's will, of course! In regards to Stefan from General Hospital, don't really know much about him to form a useful opinion-apart from the basics-because I never really watched it back then.

Thanks for reading, reviewing & sharing your awesome theroies, Jadedbylifesavedbygrace! :)

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Date: May 14 2015 12:21 pm

Title: 9 (2) - 'Your rescue, my undo; I'm not the one to save you. . .'

Two reviews in one day I couldn't help myself. I got another theory Kasey I know why she is so overprotective over Ava-Rain so much and why she told her to stay away from Caleb at the club... Wait for it wait for it She's a hunter Boom b9;que in thunder. Am I close? 



Author's Response:

LOL @ 'Boom'!!!!!!! You already know that I think you're a secret heir of the yellow, but I'm neither confirming nor denying your theory about Kasey! You'll definitely have to stay tuned to find out if your theory is correct!

Two reviews on one chapter, you're totally spoiling me, Zoleka!! Again, thanks for reading & for sharing your theory!! :)

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 08:09 am

Title: 9 (2) - 'Your rescue, my undo; I'm not the one to save you. . .'

Gosh I love this story so much, it's moved up to the number one spot of my most favourite books or stories that I've read. And I've got a theory on the healing blood that the original wielders of the four had, could it be possible that the blood only works with a true mate seeing as they are two parts of a whole which is why it didn't work the first time Caleb tried healing someone,I'm guessing it was on the girl in his dreams. I loved the twins interaction with Ava-Rain and adored Calebs jealousy, loved it and I can't wait for more. Sorry about the long review btw😊😅



Author's Response:

Number one spot? WOW!! My gosh, that's such an honour, Zoleka! THANK YOU!!!

Absolutely LOVE your theory, thanks for sharing! Caleb tried to heal somebody in the past & it didn't work, so he's pretty convinced that he doesn't have the ability to ressurrect anybody, not even his true mate. But there's so much to 'the power of the four' that he has yet to learn & doesn't understand, so who knows. . .well, I do, but I'm not telling!! Lol.

Glad you enjoyed Ava-Rain's moment with the twins because I totally enjoyed writing it. I love my twinsies!

As always, thanks so much for reading & for reviewing! I love when readers share their thoughts so I absolutely appreciate you taking the time to do so. It really, really, REALLY means a lot!:)

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 07:53 am

Title: 9 (2) - 'Your rescue, my undo; I'm not the one to save you. . .'

Is it possible that it was the girl from Caleb's past that he couldn't save?  And if so, is it also possible that he couldn't heal her because she wasn't his true mate?

 

P.S.  I danced a jig when I saw this update.



Author's Response:

LOVE your theory, Jaye Sims!!! You may be on to something. . .

Thanks so much for reading & for your review! :)

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Date: May 14 2015 03:14 am

Title: 9 (1) - 'If I could go back in time when you only held me in your mind. . .'

I'm glad that she chose him. I would hate to see them both if she didn't. When they finally mate, it is going to be something serious. They are already burning something fierce for each other. What exactly does he mean by train? Like get her ready for what's coming or something. 



Author's Response:

It would have been super depressing for both of them if Ava-Rain had walked away, but I'm glad it didn't come to that. They're definitely going to learn that they're better & stronger together than apart. A true alpha pair.

As for when they finally mate, lol, it will most definitely be something serious in more ways than you might think!

By Caleb wanting Ava-Rain to be conditioned, he means that she needs to be trained to be able to handle the effects of HIS elements so that they can't 'hijack' her (like his anger was able to in Chapter 8). Since they are connected/linked to each other as TRUE MATES, they're essentially 'one', in the sense that they will be able to 'feel' what the other is feeling, mentally, physically, & emotionally. Since Ava-Rain is a human, naturally, she isn't equipped to handle the pressure of the elements in the ways that a wolf can. So Caleb needs to train her on how to handle his 'power'. Hope that answers your question! 

Thank you for reading & for taking the time to review, KeiKei! :)

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Date: May 12 2015 02:25 am

Title: 9 (1) - 'If I could go back in time when you only held me in your mind. . .'

Nothing but love for this.....



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much, flikchick! :)

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Date: May 11 2015 08:13 pm

Title: 9 (1) - 'If I could go back in time when you only held me in your mind. . .'

You know what I like the most about your stories, it's that they feel so real  they actually make me wish  that the characters were real people. Also I love the character development of both Caleb and Ava-Rain I can't wait to see a growth in Declan and Rickon some how I feel they both living in each others shadows it's just that Rickon hides it better that or I'm thinking to much on this. Loved the fluff in this chapter (it took alot to admit that I'm a closet romantic or was till now)  and I can't wait for the next update. 



Author's Response:

My gosh, thank you so much, Anonymous! I think one of every authours' worst fears is to create a world with characters that readers can't relate or feel connected to. So for you to not only say that you enjoy my stories & wish that the characters were real means A LOT! I truly appreciate that.

Glad you're enjoing Caleb & Ava-Rain's character development. They've still got a long way to go to get where they need to be but I'm excited for that journey. As for my favourite twinsies, wow, you're spot on! Their whole sibling rivalry is derived from living in each other's shadow & Rickon is definitely better at hiding it than Declan. Love your perception!

LOL, glad you enjoyed the 'fluff'! I swear, sometimes when I read over the fluffiness I've written, I roll my eyes and ask myself if I could be any cheesier, lol. But these two are so adorable & sometimes they need those 'so-adorable-it's-almost-sickening' moments.

Thank you so much for reading & for your review! :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 11 2015 02:13 pm

Title: 9 (1) - 'If I could go back in time when you only held me in your mind. . .'

Ava - Rain and Caleb ate definitely one of my favorite couples.  Together they beat all enemies that ratchet heifer Angelie.  AR needs the protection provided by the pack so Caleb can do his thing without worrying about her.  Love this story and these characters! 



Author's Response:

Wow! I'm so glad to hear that, pmgayles! Caleb & Ava-Rain are my babies & I'm just so happy to be telling their story, so I'm really, REALLY happy that you've fallen in love with them.

LOL @ 'ratchet heifer Angelie'!! Unfortunately, she'll play a big part in this story so we'll see more of her.

Thank you so much for continuing to read & review this story, pmgayles! You've been a true ride or die reader & your continued support means so very much to me! :)

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Date: May 11 2015 12:06 pm

Title: 9 (1) - 'If I could go back in time when you only held me in your mind. . .'

Hello my friend. I'm glad to see Caleb asking for permission but I know it was a blow to his ego being an alpha and all.So she has accepted him completely and is okay with being left in the dark sometimes hmmmm she is a better one than me because I suffer from I need to know everything itis. Now on to the next chapter so I can go back to my Declan with his adorkable self. Lol he was wrong for the torture of the 're but when she is done with training she will teach him a thing or two. Happy Wrting my friend and the shout out for alpha was my pleasure update soon and I will try to do the same



Author's Response:

Hi, Jadedbylifesavedbygrace!

LOL, it was DEFINITELY a major blow to Caleb's ego to ask permission. But as much as he was cringing inside, he knows that he can't continue to expect Ava-Rain to blindly follow him. It was a small step on his part, but an important one, nonetheless.

I see you're still not giving up your claim on Declan, lol. He will make a brief appearance in the second half of this chapter, so hopefully that'll satisfy your needs, lol.

As always, thank you so, so much for reading & reviewing! Was so happy that you updated YOS & it was awesome! And thanks again for the shout out! Happy Writing! :)

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2015 11:47 am

Title: 9 (1) - 'If I could go back in time when you only held me in your mind. . .'

This book is really good. I want to see how Caleb makes Ava-Rain suffer to see how it also affects him. They will strengthen each other, but she will bring his existence out of hiding. It's what I think will happen, but I'm excited to see it play out.



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!

You're absolutely spot on; Caleb & Ava-Rain will definitely strengthen each other in so many ways & his existence will most definitely be brought to light despite all of the forces/people that are working hard to ensure that it doesn't.

Thanks so much for reading, reviewing & for sharing your thoughts, jahchannah! I really appreciate them! :)

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Date: May 11 2015 06:26 am

Title: Cast

I was looking at the cast pictures again and can I just say that I'd like an order of Kane with a side of Chase and some Harrison for dessert.  'Cuz I'm a shameless cougar.

 

Anyhooo...this story just gets better and better.



Author's Response:

LOL!!!!!!!!!! They're sooooo beautiful, aren't they? You sure you can handle all THREE of them though? ;)

As always, thank you kindly for reading, Jaye Sims! Glad you're still enjoying this tale!

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Date: May 11 2015 01:58 am



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