Amazing as always.

Angelie is still alive damn!!    I have a bad feeling about Angelie rooting around in Ava-Rain's brain.  

Wow. I feel like they accomplished so much in this chapter. You learn something new every time. I would have never thought there was an heir of 3. Of course she was in love with Caleb, why else would she do that to olé girl. Call me crazy but I'm glad she did. Or Av-leb wouldn't exist. Hehe. Soo Angelie can read minds? Interesting. I'm anxious to find out what these images are and what they could mean. I also want to know how Ava-Rain was able to do that in the first place. After all, she is just human.

I'm just going to say it; in the spirit of this major breakthrough in their relationship, I'm going to need some gratuitous sex between these two real soon here. All these emotions need to be put to good use! :))

I your stories have this ability to stirr up so many of my emotions it's mind blowing. Declan is such an old soul and it makes me love him even more, I love that he is like a brother that Ava-Rain has never had and always needed I wish that they had met at an earlier stage maybe that maybe that would've halted the feelings of uncertainty and insecurity that Ava-Rain harbors. But ironically I think that it's those very feelings that she gets her strength from even though she doesn't realise it. Don't call me horrible but I'm kinda hoping that Emma Grace was working with th pure bloods  and that's why Angelie killed her 1stly for Ava-Rains safety and because I kinda hate the doubts and fuel her memory adds to Ava-Rains life she has had a tough time she doesn't need any more drama but with the recent developments I think it's safe to say it is inevitable lol I am happy that Caleb some what got over his anger and is trying to patch thinks up and get back to the way things used to be. I am so sorry about the long review but I can't help it I'm so in love with this story if it were human I'd marry it lmao 😂. As usual fantabulous update can't wait for more 

Excellent as always! Loved the conversation between Ava-Rain and Declan as he really seems to understand her. That was a real spiritual lesson he gave Ava-Rain. I just fell more in love with Declan with this chapter! Loving Rickon more, too! I think the twin deltas really value their Luna.. And a little Tommy action for the first time was too cute. He knew how to be the quiet strength she needed. And Caleb stepped up! I have to give him mad love for his acknowledging to Ava-Rain that his love for her his true mate is beyond his feelings for Emmy-Grace. She needed to hear that truth or she would be stuck on the 'what-ifs'.  And Angelie is in love with Caleb? Whoah that was a little bomb dropped. But her killing Emmy-Grace seems beyond jealousy. There has to be more to this story.  Maybe Anglie read Emmy-Grace and detected a threat that she thought was best eliminated. My curiosity is totally picqued to understand the images Ava-Rain saw upon touching the pureblood. Is this the beginning of learning who she really is and why she's Caleb's mate?  You just packed so much emotion as well as tbrowing out more information to keep me speculating on what is really happening with the purebloods and Caleb's pack. And somehow I think Ava-Rain is front and center in it all. I have to say I love you for updating! I just can't really express how your writing touches my spirit. I can so relate to Ava-Rain's internal battles.  Brilliant.

I don't blame Caleb for snapping like that. If she would have listened then this wouldn't have happened. I'm soo glad that Declan is going to be fine. Things would have really been bad if he died. I wonder why the pure bloods ran? Punk ass fucks! OMGoodness! Not only was he in love with this girl but he was going to claim the chick! Yeah, Ava-Rain is not going to like finding that out. Wow..

Alright! It's Caleb's turn to feel my heavy words... lol you're off the hook today Ava-Rain

Here we go!

This is what I meant when I said that Ava-Rain is stronger than she thinks she is, because in this very moment, she is the one that is understanding and holding herself together. This moment between her and Caleb is different from the last chapter. This is the Alpha-female Ava-Rain that I know her to be. It's not always about physical strength but she is able to have her emotions and surrender to them in this moment. Surrending to emotions in certain situations between yourself and your beloved is not bad and that is what Caleb needed to learn.

Caleb you had failed Ava-Rain when you decided that this was only your burden to carry. As much as you wanted her to always tell you what she felt, you did not repay her in the same way and in that sense he was a bad mate. In fact, this reminds me of back to that chapter when she told you she had felt unwanted because you were keeping this other woman from her and even though yet again she was the one to apologize he has not yet apologized from keeping this important past from her. Yes it was painful for you, but that is a pain that your mate needed to understand. You can't demand for Ava-Rain to follow the rules of your world when you're not even being honest with yourself nor her in dealing with Emmy. I got pissed the hell off when Caleb decided that he was going to walk away and not say why/how Emmy died. If he had continued to walk and not say anything I would have been even more furious because he's doing a disserve to himself and Ava-Rain. Basically get that shit right Caleb.

Also, I'd like to add. Though Caleb thinks about Emmy's death as Luna's message that she wasn't one for him, I think I see it another way. Okay yes, it could have been Luna's message, but he also needs to understand that Emmy's introduction to his life helped him when he really needed it. I don't think it was a coincedence that Luna put Emmy in his path. As he said, she lifted an Alpha off his knees. She was that light he needed at that time and that is a gift in itself. I think he's really just being extremely harsh on himself when he's talking about how he couldn't have Emmy and then how he can't have Ava-Rain. I think making that statement is more detrimental than anything else becuase Emmy was important piece of him and so has Ava-Rain become important and both women were placed in his world for a specific reason. Luna knows what she's doing. 

Him crying onto Ava-Rain and allowing those emotions to show, that's what Ava-Rain has been asking of him from the get! I'm not sorry for my own anger towards Ava-Rain last chapter, even though I understand why she did what she did (idk the costs were just to bad for me especially since she could have died and so could have Declan. Just imagine the amount of pain that would have caused. That I can't immediately forgive, but I understand) but I was going to be incredibly disappointed in Caleb if he had walked away and for me disappoint rests heavier than anger. Actually I am still disappointed in Caleb because he took so damn long to tell Ava-Rain about Emmy (and almost ran too still) while the whole time he was trying to preach this whole we gotta feel each others energy and we're mates and we gotta love each other and don't run from me blah blah blah. 

Ultimately both these chapters were an important moment for each. For as last chapter if she didn't realize how real his world is now Ava-Rain certainly does and for this chapter Caleb needs to understand what his past meant and what his present means now and he needs to stop placing his past onto his present because it will put a lot of burden on himself and Ava-Rain and that is not fair to her. She has been willing to be part of his world and to fully understand what tat means he needs to be completely honest with her. Boo no one is asking for you to cry in front of your damn clan but for Ava-Rain you have to really bare it all because she is your Alpha-Female now she's chosen you and you need to show that you fully appreciate what she's done by be completely blue for her all the time. It's okay to let those "human" emotions show becuase that is who Ava-Rain is. She's a damn human and she requires your emotional honesty the way you require her to place herself in your world. 

Alright damn I'm done lol.

Great chapter! I love both your characters! My home girl Ava-Rain holding it down in that forest! Good for you girl. Caleb you've got to get your act together and be honest with your mate. Stop being all "oh I might lose her so I ain't gonna tell her" That's stupid because if you don't tell her you definitely will lose her faster. Allow her to feel her hurt. Don't try and make that decision for her. She loves you as you love her. Don't take her choices away from her. Let her hurt, but she'll heal faster if you give her that respect and in the mean time maintaining that you love her as well doesn't hurt lol. Geez many people have loved others before they met the one that they know is for them. That shit happens and that's why you'd be honest with your partner and tell them. That's understandable, but what isn't is keeping big things like this from your loved ones. That's more hurtful than finding out that there was someone you loved before (loving someone happens... I mean if you wanted to Twelve20One you could have written that Ava-rain had a love before Caleb and that's fine. Caleb would have had to deal with that because it happens, but Caleb is in the wrong for keeping this from Ava-Rain especailly since they're more invested in one another). The only issue I see here is if Caleb wants to come about and say that if he had to choose between Emmy and Ava-Rain he'd choose Emmy and that's fucked up. If the problem here is admiting that he was going to make Emmy his Alpha-female even when that wasn't his mate then alright it hurts but we can get past that, but if the story was that he was going to make Emmy his alpha-female and had met Ava-Rain, knew she was his mate, strung her along, and then still wanted to say F her I'm taking Emmy, now that would be messed up. Caleb get your shit right and stop making this decision for Ava-Rain. I bet you any thing Ava-Rain would allow Caleb his time to hurt and heal as long as she can trust and have faith that she is the one that he ultimately wants. Just love your woman Caleb. Damn lol

and holy hell I wrote an essay. My bad 

WOW, this actually brought me to tears. I am so happy that Caleb finally got Emmy Grace off of his chest I am glad that he finally realised that if he truly wanted Ava-Rain in his life he had to let go of Emmy Grace (love how the girls he loves have the most unusual and unique names). I really admire Ava-Rain it takes alot of courage and strength to hear that the man you love felt so strongly about someone else, I don't think wanting to here the rest of what had happened  was entirely to punish herself but I think she knew that at that moment she needed to be Caleb's rock. The last part reminded me of something I read once it said "one day someone will hug you so tight that they would glue all of your broken pieces together ",enough said. I think in a weird way this was my most favourite chapter and I'm going to read it again. Can't wait for the next update oh and no I am no longer being a rebel even though For Alpha it's totally worth it I use my phone😁

Wow, that chapter was so emotionally heavy...so beautifully written...gave me chills...Caleb really bared his soul to Ava-Rain and our girl stood strong...she's amazing in her strength...instead of hating Caleb, instead of anger, which he expected, she reached out to him to give comfort, strength...love...she loves him in the true sense of the word because she was able to put aside her pride and her feelings of maybe jealousy and even inadequacy to hold her mate and be his rock...Ava-Rain is a true Luna and if anyone truly knows that family is everything her response to Caleb shows that she does...you just rocked this chapter...but then you are rocking this whole book and I am just excited for the next update...I'm not going to let you rest until it's done because it's so brilliant...

WOOOOOOO where the hell do I begin?

Alright first and foremost Declan is alive!!! Even though I saw it earlier on in a comment it was still great to read that booboo was still breathing and healing. That's one thing off of Ava-Rain's mind

speaking of which... Ava-Rain... Sorry? That's all you gotta offer up? I mean I guess after you nearly killed yourself and your delta, I guess sorry is the best you can say... because what else could you say huh? Maybe oh I don't know... "I finally understand how important my role is and where I stand in this pack"... and oh maybe.... "I finally understand how many lives are at risk".... oh maybe "I'm sorry for being selfish." Idk which but yeah ofc "sorry" is just the best route to go -_- Thank you Ava-Rain for a show of what not to do. 

Man the brute anger I would have felt. Me and Caleb are on the same path of red. 

and I get the whole... don't make her feel worse cuz she knows, but come one Ava-Rain! I can't even be like "let this be a lesson." That makes the matter seem so trivial (like if I wanted to eat ice cream when I knew I was lactose intolerate and I still ate it anyway and got the shits... that's a "let this be a lesson" scenario) but Ava-Rain... you nearly killed someone. WAIT NOPE the battle against the pure bloods just begun who knows who is gonna die now and while it was going to happen ( the battle that is) at least they would have had more time to get themselves ready but nah Ava-Rain comes through just to speed up the process and then offers us a simple "Sorry".  (us lol.. it's like I'm a pack member. Damn right I am! hahaha) 

Also I do get his beta's points. But Caleb needs a breather. He does... wait I want to address something.

Caleb thought " My world did not consist of fairness and equality. It was harsh. It was dark. It was cold."

My thing is... what the hell kind of world is Ava-Rain living in that's all fairness and equality. Yo Ava-rain needs to really step up to the plate. Alpha female doesn't just mean you get to pet tummies and give ear rubs. Come on Ava-Rain. Now, I'm just disappointed. The anger has gone and now... how does she expect Caleb to trust her again? smh... she got a lot of groveling to do A LOT. Like I have to believe it!

Also da hell is this Emmy chick? Fake-mate or can he have more than one mate? Is that possible? if not, then clearly Luna knew what she was doing and that's why Emmy died cuz Caleb was about to miss out on his real mate.

Ava-Rain pull your shit together and start acting right. I still believe in you to be stronger than we all think, but you gotta believe in your own strength woman up and let's go kick some ass. Assemble your pack. Get your shit tight and let's kill some pure bloods. As far as I see it... Ava-Rain should be promising that whole pack that she fights for them. If it was me I'd work my ass off to get everyone's trust back, get my own behind trained in at least some hand-to-hand combat. Get me some weaponry learn some more about controlling enegry and also encourage and support my pack and my mate and kick some ass! No one else would be getting between me, my mate, and my pack. That's that. Step them cookies up Ava-Rain

Thanks for the upload! Loved it!!

I am glad that Declan is okay it's a huge relief. What Caleb said to Ava-Rain was a low blow, I don't think she would have thrown caution to the wind and went to see Jennifer if she didn't value family that was wrong of him to say even though he was rightfully angry at her. AND that part about Emmy Grace yikes now I'm starting to doubt Caleb's 'love' for Ava-Rain it seems like he only loves her because his bonded to her, this is going to crush Ava-Rain my heart bleeds for her, gosh I freaken love this story btw when are you going to update moonrise? 

I love the update and as mad as I am at ava rain seeing how she feels now and Calebs low blow about family makes me soften that and the fact that Declan is okay. So the fake mate has a name. Hmmm her existence complicates things for Ava rain and Caleb and combined with the fact that Caleb has put her on a pedestal makes me not like her at all so she will remain fake mate. Lol hey at least I am honest about my dislike. Now give Declan a big hug for me.looking forward to the next update happy writing my friend.