Reviews For Stars Colliding
Title: Shaking Hands with the Devil

Never get in an elevator with someone giving you the creeps--now Lia can tell him she will take the next one and why, if this happens again.  

The dog stays--I once had to choose my dog over a boyfriend.  She was more trustworthy than he was lol.

If Seamus has to go, they should be looking for a nice home with security--they can afford it and as they are about to be married...   

I can't stand stalkers--they make me angry, not scared; like they should.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 03:54 am

Title: Evil Has a Name

I have absolutely no idea what Eric's going to do next & the suspense is killing me! Another great chapter! And PLEASE don't feel rushed to update because I'm sure your readers won't mind waiting until you're feeling better. Take all the time you need!

 

Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 01:59 am

Title: The Most Wonderful Time of the Year

Very good chapter

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 11 2015 02:54 am

Title: Stars Colliding

Shandy better bite for the balls don't do down without a fight lol.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 10:54 pm

Title: Evil Has a Name

Seamus better watch his back Eric seems like he'll poision the puppies steak or something ... I say time to move and far

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 10:52 pm

Title: Evil Has a Name

What do I think his next move will be? Well Eric will probably try to force himself on her one of these days when she is alone or try to kidnap her or something. If he succeeds to kidnap her, he will obviously keep her captive and try and maybe even succeed in raping her.  I mean he is the typical obsessed psycho, who thinks he can get the girl. 

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 05:16 pm

Title: Evil Has a Name

I don't know about his next move but I know he's in for a world of hurt!!!  Lia's men folk are going to kick his ass!!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 01:32 pm

Title: Evil Has a Name

Next move will be that age old snatch and grab. Hope Lia kicks his ass so hard he sees stars in another galaxy.

Reviewer: linalin Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 09:58 am

Title: Evil Has a Name

It seems we have a Sandra Bullock stalker on our hands. I hope they heed Shamey's warning. I wouldn't be surprised if he tried to get rid of Shamey. Dom better pay attention and keep his guard up. He might try to eliminate him.

Great story!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 08:59 am

Title: Evil Has a Name

I know I don't want YOUR next move to be to off Shamey by the hands of crazy dude! I couldn't take that. I already love Shamey!! I say this because I think he'll try for the dog first.

Gio and Mimi...lol!



Author's Response:

He is going to go for the dog first, but not in the way you think.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 08:17 am

Title: Evil Has a Name

Creepy Elevator guy needs to be shanked!  He is going to try to kidnap Lia.I want Dom to beat like Ali beat Liston! So awesome!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 07:22 am

Title: Evil Has a Name

Oh crap!!!  They need to do some serious investigating of this dude.  Lia betta walk around with some mace, taser and a knife because she gonna need all three on this sicko.  Dude, she don't know you nor does she want you.  How has his mental illness gone undiscovered for any length of time.  

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 06:16 am

Title: With Joy Comes Pain

Oh crap.  I should've known somebody would be against their relationship.  Glad Dominic stood up for Los.  The dog hated that guy? Hmmm interesting! Good update.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 04:20 am

Title: The Most Wonderful Time of the Year

Ahhhhhhhhh...I just love them. Great story and I hope things get better for you soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  And thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 02:05 am

Title: The Most Wonderful Time of the Year

What's up with the creep? I'm glad Dom didn't break up with her.



Author's Response:

You'll be getting more about Creepy Elevator Guy in the next couple of chapters.  Guurl, Dom ain't goin' nowhere. He sprung!  LOL

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 12:03 am

Title: The Most Wonderful Time of the Year

Awesome sauce!!! Dominic is the man!  I am so glad that Lia got Dom to to talk and that she did offer to step out of Dom's life for the sake of his relationship with his parents. Dom popped the question and she said yes! Baby circles, baby circles, baby circles!  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 09:00 pm

Title: The Most Wonderful Time of the Year

I love these two souls together. I don't like guy on elevator he is creepy maybe he is a stalker fan. As for mommy and daddy they would be alright.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 08:30 pm

Title: With Joy Comes Pain

What awful parents Dominic has not to mention so outdated ..u'd think they lived in the 1960s...like to see Dominic turn his back on his ignorant parents they are not worth shit..who wants parents who dont care about their childs happiness...lia and her family is so cool and great.. love to see Dominic find them more as his family than his biological family..love to see more bonding time between lia and Dominic....update soon!!!!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 02:24 am

Title: With Joy Comes Pain

And so it begins....

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 01:28 am

Title: With Joy Comes Pain

LOVE this story!! Lia & Dom are so freaking adorable! Dom truly loves Lia, so I feel like, at the end of the day, he'll always choose her. But Lia loves him just as much, & because she knows how important family is, I wonder if, once she finds out about his parents' disapproval, she'll choose to let him go, not wanting to be the 'cause' of this 'rift' with his parents-even though it's not even HER that's the problem, but their own bigotry. My gosh, I love your storytelling, Jaye Sims! Thanks for this wonderful chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much.  As someone whose work I admire, your words mean a lot.

Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2015 11:22 pm

Title: With Joy Comes Pain

Honey take your time updating, DO YOU!!!, The computer and the keyboard will be there when you are ready. If it something to hard for you to carry, give it over to JESUS!. You are in my prayers.



Author's Response:

Thank you, dear.  I appreciate that.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2015 11:18 pm

Title: With Joy Comes Pain

I'm so tick with Doms family right now. Everyone is entitle to their own opinion, but i draw the line in the sand when you start trying to live my life for me. If they are truly his family and they love him like they say they do, they will get over it. If not they can KICK ROCKS. Because i love who i love end of story. That man on the elevator is shady seamus knows what time it is.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2015 11:13 pm

Title: With Joy Comes Pain

Oh I feel bad for him. Sad thing is even though its 2015 people have this attitude still. Lia is going to be really upset when she finds out. Please update soon

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2015 11:01 pm

Title: With Joy Comes Pain

His parents are racists assholes! Will he choose love or pick his ignorant family?  Right now I love Dom as long as he makes the right choice. Lia all day everyday!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2015 10:59 pm

Title: To Thailand with Love

I will have my panties and my bras, my toothbrush, and a little clothes in my bag.Because i wont be needing to many clothes because i plan on being bucknaked all of the time. WAITING AT THE DOOR!!!!

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 10:04 pm



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