Reviews For Stars Colliding
Title: Damages

He reacted the right way. His dad will regret acting this way. Good chapter!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 07 2015 12:22 pm

Title: Damages

So when we will fond out what I renews major malfunction was? Her reaction was more than prejudice, there was jealously laced with hatred. That ho wad broken, because she has no hope of being half the woman that Lia is. The beast that William and Irene need to be slain! !!

So good that I had to read thrice! ! Yep I said it, thrice!



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Soon :-)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 12:56 pm

Title: Damages

Now, you got me with the water works.  I am so glad everything is coming together, but i am worried that guy is coming back into the picture.



Author's Response:

Eric has one more brief appearance then he's outta there.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 01:20 pm

Title: Stars Colliding

so glad his mom contacted him and is coming to see him I'm a bit surprised his brother is coming.His dad had some nerve trying to turn the fault on him for his own bigotry & prejudice. Now saing he turned his back on his kin & made their daughter do the same when it was them. If he didn't want to be apart of their life I'm with Dom he would be dead to me too. Want have that toxicity around me or my family stay where you are that's fine. But on the other hand he's hurt his father would just turn his back on him & his first & only grandchild.

Author's Response:

Allegra is his first granddaughter.  Donal and Irene have 2 sons.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 01:09 pm

Title: Damages

I hope that Aileen makes an equally heart felt apology ti Lia and the rest of the family.   Dom has every right to feel  how he feels about his sperms donors attitude. The I'd a ahole supreme and that bitches Irene can sit and spin on a pitchfork!! Can you tell that I don't like that woman? Awesome sauce! !



Author's Response:

LOL!  I thought I put you on punishment.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 12:08 pm

Title: Damages

Fantastic chapter...very creative writing 

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 06:21 am

Title: Damages

Regardless of his father, I think Dom needs to keep the door open for him. He doesn't need to go on about the situation, just let his father know if and when he has a change of heart, he and his family will be there. Then just go on about his business and life. I say this because its clear Dom is just as stubborn as his daddy.



Author's Response:

He is absolutely as stubborn as his father, but because he and his dad were extremely close before all of the drama, he's having a hard time dealing with his father's constant rejection.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 05:29 am

Title: Allegra Rose

Whoo hoo! Somebody has some sense

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 03:44 am

Title: Allegra Rose

That was so beautiful. Dom & his little girls moment together. Finally someone with some since glad all not lost with Doms mom she found a back bone to go against the stupidity her & her husband were doing being bigots.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 12:20 am

Title: Allegra Rose

Awww....what a beautiful name!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 11:28 pm

Title: Allegra Rose

1 down 3 to go. I'm glad Dom's mom finally saw the light!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 10:29 pm

Title: Allegra Rose

As always, loved this chapter! Allegra Rose is such a beautiful name & I'm glad that Aileen is starting to come around. I'm going to be super sad when this story comes to an end. :(

Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 09:36 pm

Title: Stars Colliding

Thank you for making mamma a bear or lioness about her children.  As it should be.  Great story.  I am one to never want A story to end so keep it going.  

Reviewer: carmel beauty Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 02:58 pm

Title: Allegra Rose

More please.  There are so many unanswered questions and I love this story.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 02:20 pm

Title: Allegra Rose

Good for you Aileen, I knew seeing her New granddaughter would get to her. I hope they can work things out.

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 01:55 pm

Title: Allegra Rose

Aileen has now remembered that she has a son.  Dominic is in love with his baby girl!! I call that awesome! !  Momma racist is on her way to New York, who would a think?!  This was such a sweet update! !



Author's Response:

As always, I thank you.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 12:25 pm

Title: I Do

Perfect!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2015 11:16 pm

Title: I Do

So awesome. So great. Their family being so open as to claim Doms sister as daughter as they had claimed him as son was just awesome. You did a fantastic job with

Author's Response:

Thanks Kvgurl.  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 06:56 am

Title: I Do

what a wonderful update to your story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Bredreaway!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 04:24 am

Title: I Do

Simply beautiful!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  :-)

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 03:24 am

Title: I Do

Sweet!!!  Lia and Dominic jumped the broom, yay!!!  Love Mamma and G- Daddy, they are awesome parents.  Dom and Nessa will know more than the thought was possible. Mamma and her wooden spoon, that just tickled me. Dom's family needs Jesus! I mean dumb them all in a vat of holy water. Irene you can just shove a stake through her heart. 



Author's Response:

LOL!  The MacCleod's do need a double dose of Jesus, don't they?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 03:08 am

Title: Can't Hide From Mamma

YAY!! They're getting married & having a girl! I'm so happy for them! Seriously, I freaking LOVE this couple & this story! Thanks so much for sharing it with us. :)



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading!

Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 02:29 am

Title: Stars Colliding

momma always knows her daughter. Now they are getting married in a month yay. The baby is a girl. Dom was right :)

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 22 2015 10:19 pm

Title: Can't Hide From Mamma

Awww so sweet! Love it. Thanks for all the quick updates.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 22 2015 03:57 am

Title: There's No Place Like Home

Love this story. It's so good!  Glad the weirdo is gone and that they moved. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Michmom2!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 22 2015 03:51 am



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