Reviews For Stars Colliding
Title: Hell Week

Yes, Eric got beatened until the white meat showed and it was satisfying!  Dom's sister-in-law Irene is an ignorant heifer and not mention numb in the head. In my head I imagined Lia slapping the sugady out of Irene.  Nessa is wonderful, she's the only loveable member of Dom's family besides Dom.  Where did the rest of that archaic bunch come from?  The family dinner will be oh so entertaining especially when the Marani's sees how bad they treat Lia. Ladies, can you say World War 3?  It is about to be on and popping!!!  Lia is preggars, yay!!!!! 

Will they find that other woman that Eric harassed?

Awesome sauce!!!!!



Author's Response:

Maybe they'll find her, maybe they won't...you just have to keep reading :-D

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2015 11:27 am

Title: Hell Week

Thanks for the update. Thanks for Eric finally getting his. And thanks for the coming bundle of joy.

I thought when you told us they had created a baby, Eric was going to kidnap her and no one was going to be sure who the father was. I like the way you did it so much better.

Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2015 10:58 am

Title: Hell Week

Loved loved loved it. This stor just keeps on gettng better. Yay she's preggers. Love how Dom delt with Eric. hopefully she doesnt let his parents & racist sister in law stress her out. Glad they are getting to meet her family so they can put them in their place & educate them when they get out of line.

Author's Response:

Believe me, Mama Giulia is all sweetness and light until you mess with one of her cubs.  You might see a different side of Mama in the coming chapter.

Reviewer: KVGURL Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 16 2015 08:21 am

Title: Stars Colliding

I just wanted to let you know how much I am LOVING this story! I don't want it to end! The love between Dom and Lia is so sweet. I love how protective he is of her and how down she is for him. I love that Eric isn't coming between them, and if anything, is bringing them even closer together. I'm also glad that Shamey gets to stay! Keep it coming, Jaye, I am awaiting your next chapters!

Reviewer: shewhogiveslife Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2015 03:54 am

Title: Stars Colliding

I love Dom how he handled this situation was classic hopefully this gets his message across but probably not because it's a psycho he's dealing with. He may have to hurt him physically before they leave to get his point across.


Oh the visitation of his family can't wait for that.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 15 2015 03:29 am

Title: A Shit Storm is Brewing

He's really psycho like really. Glad she let everyone around her know personally & work related. Glad she's taking precaution to protect herself like defense training.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 15 2015 03:21 am

Title: The Talk

Eric almost pissed in pants, ooh rah!!!  I just want Eric beaten to a pulp, beaten until the white meat shows, beaten so bad that he wakes back up his Momma's womb!  That would truly satisfy me, Jaye.



Author's Response:

LMAO!  I might have to hurt you today, Ms. Gayles!  LOL

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2015 11:45 pm

Title: The Talk

Oh Dom! I just hope there were no cameras in the elevator. I wonder if he got through Eric. Cause you know crazy speaks a different language.  I don't know if Dom can interpret crae crae.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2015 11:19 pm

Title: The Talk

Yeah Dom!!!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2015 06:32 pm

Title: A Shit Storm is Brewing

Excellent work!!!

Reviewer: Kurious Kale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2015 04:13 pm

Title: Stars Colliding

Eric sure is creepy..can't believe lia is still living at that apartment... Hope Dom gets back soon..wish Dom was a bit more romantic though...wish he'd give Lia flowers, gifts, jewellery, take her out on new and exciting dates etc..update soon!!!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2015 12:28 pm

Title: A Shit Storm is Brewing

Eric is getting worse, and Dom's family is coming it just keeps coming. These two can't catch a break. Lia and Dom are so cute together and are so much in love.  I am happy that Dom and her family are hyper-aware because the police are no help. Eric is going to be kilt! Awesome sauce!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2015 11:23 am

Title: Four Angry Men

Yesss, Mimi, thank you.  Recognizing this dude is coocoo for a cocoa woman.  Call the police, get a restraining order, keep seamus nearby and again some mace, taser etc on hand.  Never get into an elevator alone with him, check the peephole in the door before opening it for anyone and before leaving your apartment.  Again:  Warning should be plastered across his door: This dude is crazy, stay away.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 03:13 am

Title: Shaking Hands with the Devil

If that didn't wake her up to have this guy investigated and to never, eva, be around him alone, I don't know what it.  Who gets mad at an engagement ring and darn near stop all circulation in her hand. 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 03:09 am

Title: Shaking Hands with the Devil

Eric is a psycho. Glad Dom' s sister is happy about the engagement.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 12:53 am

Title: Four Angry Men

I love it! He picked the wrong one to be obsessed with! Last two chapters were way too short, but I'm rocking witcha.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 12:40 am

Title: Four Angry Men

Aww shit!!!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 12:24 am

Title: Four Angry Men

With Meems here. Nip it in the bud by being proactive about it. Don't wait for something awful to happen.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 12:13 am

Title: Four Angry Men

Dom and the Marino brothers will handle that!  C-I-L-L Eric!!!  Call your friend the policemen Mimi a.s.a.p!!  Jaye write me in the story so that I go ham on Eric. Thank you Jaye Sims you are the shiznit!



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 11:42 pm

Title: Shaking Hands with the Devil

I am enjoying this story, please don't let anything happen to Lia and Dominic.

Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 08:43 pm

Title: Shaking Hands with the Devil

Crazy ass yo needs his wig pushed back!!! 

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 06:12 pm

Title: Shaking Hands with the Devil

So...it's time to move. when animals react like that humans need to listen! Plus if you aren't comfortable in your own apartment building how can you call that place home?

Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 12:21 pm

Title: Shaking Hands with the Devil

I'm glad he's got his sister in his corner supporting him dispite his parents. She better be careful of mr. Creepy but now it's good she knows his name & there's something not right with him.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 08:45 am

Title: Shaking Hands with the Devil

I am really enjoying your story. Eric is some kind of messed up is Seamus barked at him on two separate occassions. Lia needs to be careful around him and now that she knows his name, she needs to tell Dom and have Eric investigated and followed by a P.I. I'm sure he will without telling Lia...if she's tells him creepo's name. I'm glad she got to meet Dom's sister and they get along very well. I can't wait unti they meet in person!! Update soon.



Author's Response:

Oh, she IS gonna tell her man...AND her brothers.  Them Mariani boys ain't no joke when it comes to they're little sis.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 03:58 am

Title: Shaking Hands with the Devil

Eric is coo coo for coca puffs!  Please tell Dom about your encounter with Eric, and then you all need to move because Seamus is a keeper, Seamus wi. Bite a hole in Eric' s ass!!   Die Eric!!



Author's Response:

Your reviews always make me giggle!  I haven't had much reason to do that lately, so thank you for that.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2015 03:57 am



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