I like the story, even when I read it on Lit. It's kind of rough around the edges, but the skeleton of it is good.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: December 04 2016 03:47 pm
I'm soo excited that you posted. I was beginning to think this was discontinued. I hope all is well with you. Are you feeling better since the accident?
I wonder how Zaria got that message to Adrian? Either way, I'm glad he got it. Now he can save her and kill that low life backstabbing whoring trick Elena and Igor's crazy ass. I know Z is going to survive this. She has too. I just hope that they find her before Igor rapes her or tortures her even more. I know she isn't going to back down, no matter how bad he beat her. Don't forget about lil Eli!!!
Update soon!!!!
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: January 11 2016 12:28 am
Glad to see that you're back with this story. I can't wait for more chapters.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: January 09 2016 08:28 pm
What's going on with her son, that will be her first question. Welcome back btw.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2016 10:14 pm
Yes! I am loving Zaria,don't let them see you hurt. I can't wait until she kicks Elenas ass off a cliff. And Igor is sadistic and deserves everything coming to him. Can't wait for you next update and there should totally be a sequel!
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2016 06:56 am
Glad to read an update! I wonder how Adrian will hold up in the confrontation against the demon Igor.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2016 04:42 am
I think you shouldn't make us wait too long for the next update lol. Great return well worth the wait though. I love the new flow it seems less hurried. Just try to make the ending happy please.
Reviewer: reader918 Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2016 08:28 pm
Oh my gosh this is so good... I'll be waiting for that next chapter cause it's the bomdiggitty!
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2016 01:28 pm
Still a Great story,can't wait for more updates.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 07 2016 05:13 am
Yeah! Thanks for the update. I'm liking it so far.
Reviewer: Leigh Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 07 2016 03:51 am
My story is back!!! Yippee skippy!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2016 03:39 am
please finish
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2015 02:22 pm
I just stumbled upon this story and I am very intrigued! I am really looking foward to seeing what happens next. You're a great writer. Keep up the good work :)
Reviewer: Narcissus87 Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2015 08:54 am
Please! Please! Update soon. I love this story.
Reviewer: Mary B Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 29 2015 12:51 am
Glad you're back. you have made some exciting changes. looking forwardd to more regular updates.
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 09 2015 01:10 pm
That was worth the wait. I hope you give us another update very very soon.
Reviewer: Shanee Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2015 09:01 am
I hope all is well with you. I'm glad you're back though. I look forward to hearing from you. Now I'm going to reread this...
OMGosh poor Zara. I hope Adrian finds her soon. I can't believe they didn't recognize each others voices over the phone. I wonder what Colin is going to do when he gets to the house and finds Adrian there.can we just kill Elena now. Stupid bitch!
Update soon.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2015 03:50 am
Loved the update! Looks like Zaira is always out of Arian's reach! I hope that Elena is caught for her treachery!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: June 08 2015 06:47 am
Excellent update, welcome back
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: June 07 2015 11:04 am
Fantastic update. More please
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2015 04:34 pm
I hope every one is okay and no major injuries.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2015 03:45 pm
Hope everything is okay. This was a good chapter.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2015 03:17 pm
Elena And Igor must die!! I really want Elena-s spine ripped out through her throat. Can you tell that I really hate her? Igor is a maggot who kidnapps woman. Adrian is going to heat his brother.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2015 03:04 pm
Poor Zaira...she' got kidnapped by one ugly mofo...let's see what happens next...but what is it about these men wanting to own a woman without her say so...slavery is supposed to be over but apparently that's not true, obviously...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2015 01:40 pm
I love reading again. I get to comment all the thoughts I had when I originally read it. LOL
Oh gosh who kidnapped her? I hope it was Conrad's people or Adrian's. I can't believe that girl really is a whore. Going from one brother to the next. How pathetic. I wonder what she and Duncan plan on doing. I hope they rip her to shreds. I just know Conrad isn't going to hurt her, she is his brother's mate. Be mad at her, yes but don't hurt her. Is there any way to make someone else your mate if you want them to be. Like can Colin mate with Zaria if he wanted?
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: May 09 2015 07:23 pm