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Title: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

Wow this was amazing! Brandon is exactly the type of guy that I want! 



Author's Response:

Thanks Melani!  I think Brandon's pretty adorable too : )

 Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 02:32 pm
Title: Chapter 3 - Enter the Bachelors

I'm enjoying this story. I laughed out loud several times.



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it.  Thanks JFJD!

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Date: May 03 2015 02:17 pm
Title: Chapter 2 - The Beginning

I like this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks JFJD!

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Date: May 03 2015 02:05 pm
Title: Chapter 1 - The End

That was so good!!

 

Wish there was more



Author's Response:

Thanks Sharon!  Sorry there wasn't more.  My imagination isn't giving me anything else on these two.  It that changes, I'll happily write and post it.

 Reviewer: Sharon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 07:38 am
Title: Chapter 1 - The End

Ahhhhhhhhh i can't get over how good this story is like whaaaaaat it's do too please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks lwxie!  Glad you liked it.  As it stands, this one's complete.  But if something else comes to me, I'll give it a go.

 Reviewer: lwxie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 05:38 am
Title: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

God bless you for this. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Azulphoenix!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Azulphoenix!!!

 Reviewer: azulphoenix Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 04:13 am
Title: Chapter 3 - Enter the Bachelors

Lmao!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Khamalani!

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Date: May 03 2015 04:04 am
Title: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

Loved it.  Loved everything about it.



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Thanks Jaye Sims!

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Date: May 03 2015 04:03 am
Title: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

Hahaha, that was a great read.   Boy, oh boy, them dates she had with the bachelors was too much.  When that man said recycled water, I was like oh no.  I would have ran out the door as well.  I kept thinking of all the women he kissed.  Ewwww.   If I ever get a divorce, I will be alone for the rest of my life, too afraid to even think about dating in this world right now.

Whew.  God doesn't send you what you want, He sends you what you need and He doesn't care about the outside packages.

 



Author's Response:

Exactly.  Thanks Lajack1!

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 03:36 am
Title: Chapter 3 - Enter the Bachelors

Okay...I know this was a great chapter because I DID read it, but all I can think about is the piss drinking dipshit.  I am UNDONE, Joelle.  UN. DONE.  LOL



Author's Response:

Lol.  Thanks Jaye Sims!

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Date: May 03 2015 03:27 am
Title: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

I looooove this story, but why oh why has it be a short story. It was fun, hilarious, sexy and sweet. Your characters were great, very well written. You are so talented.

thanks you a lot for sharing



Author's Response:

YW.  Thanks for the wonderful review!  As it stands, the story is a short.  But if something else comes to me, I'll be sure to add more.  Thanks Siobhan!



Author's Response:

YW.  Thanks for the wonderful review!  As it stands, the story is a short.  But if something else comes to me, I'll be sure to add more.  Thanks Siobhan!

 Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 03:18 am
Title: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

Ok, first I must say you are so talented!  I love everything you write.  Next...this story isn't finished you need to continue it. PLEASE!  And we're requesting Rich' s story, but write mire of this one first!  10 - all the way!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the lovely compliment, Michmom2! Unfortunately, right now, I'm not getting any good ideas about how to continue their story.  But I will definitely give Brandon and Diya their due when the ideas start flowing again.  Thanks again!

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 02:53 am
Title: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

Great short story with clear details.  Thank you for sharing 



Author's Response:

YW.  Thank you, Bredreaway!

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 02:33 am
Title: Chapter 2 - The Beginning

Diya is special, wearing but cowboy boots and a tutu with drool cup attached to a helmet!



Author's Response:

Haha!  Thanks (I think).

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 12:51 am
Title: Chapter 1 - The End

Me likey!



Author's Response:

Thanks Pmgayles!



Author's Response:

Thanks Pmgayles!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 12:48 am
Title: Chapter 5 - All a Part of His Plan

"Completed:Yes" Noooooooooooooo!! More please, for my sake. 



Author's Response:

Lol. As aoon as something comes to me, I'm on it.  Thanks AP!

 Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 12:27 am
Title: Chapter 3 - Enter the Bachelors

Yeah,I was still trying to eat until I got to the conspiracy theorist. Now I'm not. Lol You're a brilliant writer JJ. Thank you for this!



Author's Response:

Lol!  You are very welcome.  Thank you, AP!



Author's Response:

Lol!  You are very welcome.  Thank you, AP!

 Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 10:55 pm
Title: Chapter 1 - The End

Taj is bitchy. Fingers crossed it's the pregnancy.



Author's Response:

It is...sort of.

 Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 10:38 pm
Title: Chapter 2 - The Beginning

I shouldn't have been eating this chapter...too funny 😂



Author's Response:

Lol.  Thanks AP!

 Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 10:35 pm


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