Reviews For Dangerous Descent
Title: Chapter 22

Short but sweet. Glad you are back.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2017 05:18 am

Title: Chapter 21

I think they are both wrong for doing that. He knew exactly what she was doing and let her anyway. And she knew she shouldn't have done it but she still did. It's not going to change the situation, she is still broken. 

UPdate soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2017 01:28 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Well written and although I wish she had not did this with Brandon, I understand why she did go this far.

I also think Maxim is no longer in the picture as far as having a future or any kind of relationship with Nina.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2016 07:37 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Poor Nina...not the best way to reclaim herself but she just wanted to feel different in the immediate sense...not a solution by far...doesn't even seem like a step in the right direction...but her anguish has been palpable and she's just looking for a fix that is not the same physiological high as drugs...but wouldn't the agency have programs to help agents like Nina "detox" after such an incredibly cruel mission...glad you are still updating...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2016 06:31 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Interesting... She is trying to run from one problem by creating another. She needs to focus on getting herself together and off those drugs. I hope he doesn't take advantage of her in her state of vulnerability. It's just going to make things worse. 

Update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2016 04:51 am

Title: Chapter 20

I feel crazy for not really seeing this potential Maxim/Nina/Brandon love triangle coming. If anything, I expected for Nina and Brandon to become best friends, and for Nina to confide in him about her feelings for Maxim. I expected Brandon to be more of a player type of guy (probably because that was role during the undercover investigation), but I'm glad that I was wrong, and that he's more of a complex character. Good job with this chapter!

Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2016 03:09 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Brandon said he hadn't fallen in love with anyone else in the agency...so is Nina imagining Brandon's love for her...Maxim is f*cked up...but Nina loves him and he loves her...that in itself is f*cked up...still it seems Brandon has been her anchor not Maxim...good story...thanks for the update after a long hiatus...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2016 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 20

Excellent!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2016 04:31 am

Title: Chapter 19

I knew she was going to be fucked up from that coke. Now look at her. She doesn't need to be an agent while she's like this. It's just going to mess up the integrity of the mission. I hate to say it but Yuri is completely right about her at this point. 

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 08:53 am

Title: Chapter 18

They both lost themselves in that mission. I truly hope they shut down his entire operation so they won't have to deal with people coming after them. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 08:43 am

Title: Chapter 17

Lol. I don't blame her for trying to kick his ass. Hell I would have shot his ass as soon as I got my gun. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 08:29 am

Title: Chapter 16

Yay!!! She was able to complete the mission.. Not before she got high yet again though. But whatever, the mission is complete. It just sucks that she wasn't able to do that before he raped her again. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 08:19 am

Title: Chapter 15

I hope she doesn't get high and is able to complete this crap so this can be over and done with. 

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Date: July 22 2016 08:02 am

Title: Chapter 14

She really needs to get a damn grip and stop with the coke. She is going to blow her cover. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 07:54 am

Title: Chapter 13

Like I said... this whole mission is shit. I know I couldn't do that. Fuck a mission. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 07:48 am

Title: Chapter 12

She is lost in coke and Maxim is lost in revenge. Both aren't good. I hope he doesn't drag that guy's sister into this. That's not cool. It's really pushing a line you've already pushed to the limit. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 07:41 am

Title: Chapter 11

Damaged goods?! She wouldn't be that if you weren't destroying her like that. Ass. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 07:34 am

Title: Chapter 10

That's sad... She has been gone for 3 years?! What if Nina has to do that? I couldn't go through things like that for years at a time. It's pure madness. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 9

I agree with Maxim, snorting coke the way she has is not good for the mission or herself. She will quickly become an addict. I hope this mission is over quicker than it started. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 07:08 am

Title: Chapter 8

Oh Lord... This just gets worse and worse. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 07:00 am

Title: Chapter 7

This cocaine is going to make things easier and harder for her. She is going to get lost in that to take away the pain, I feel like she is going to forget what she's there for if she doesn't get that under control. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 06:53 am

Title: Chapter 6

Oh my... I'm sorry but she is right. It's not worth it to get raped and brutilized to take down a sex trafficking ring. Not to me. Why couldn't they send in another man? He isn't raping them! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 06:46 am

Title: Chapter 5

I know that had to be hard to go through.. But I'm glad that she wasn't raped.. At least not this time but I know it's coming. I can't wait for her to take this asshole down. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 06:37 am

Title: Chapter 4

Oh my.... This was a twist of events quicker than I expected. Did he just have this girl raped in front of everyone like it was like getting some woman a drink of water or something?! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 06:08 am

Title: Chapter 3

I don't blame her. I don't think anyone is prepared to be the victim. I think what makes it worse is that she already knows what's going to happen to her unlike the other women that he has brought into his sex trafficking ring. This is definitely going to test her strength. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2016 05:22 am



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