Reviews For Beginnings
Title: Chapter 1

Such a great story! What is she becoming after that night? Werewolf? Vampire? Sorry, not familiar with the challenge.



Author's Response:

Magdalen will still be human.  The compound is used to give her certain alien traits that will enable survival on Vaydren's planet.  Thanks GreenRoots!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 11:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1

beatuiful sweet read - thank you!



Author's Response:

YW.  Thank you, Yuukiyanagi!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 08:04 am

Title: Chapter 1

That was swexy, that's sweet and sexy!



Author's Response:

Lol!  Thanks Pmgayles!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 03:15 am

Title: Chapter 1

Loved it and would like to get rich's story from consequences.



Author's Response:

Thanks Indigo bluee.  I'm working on it.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for answering the challenge!

This piece was BEAUTIFUL!!

Love to see more of it.



Author's Response:

Thanks and you're welcome, Elizablu! 

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 12:28 am

Title: Chapter 1

Holy crap Batman! I love it and can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks Dallas5star!  No plans to continue this one at the moment, but I never know when inspiration will hit.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 12:23 am

Title: Chapter 1

"In the moment, you will remember how deeply I love you and count the pain as a small ransom to pay for the oneness of our flesh and surety of our future." DAMN! the man is smooth.



Author's Response:

Lol.  Thanks Jacqua43!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 10:29 pm

Title: Chapter 1

This story deserves to be continued. Amazing chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks SweetCoCo76! 

Reviewer: SweetCoCo76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 10:10 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wow...lovely.



Author's Response:

Thanks Jaye Sims.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 08:35 pm



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