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Title: Chapter 8

I want more SOON!!!, please  :)

 Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 12:04 am
Title: Chapter 8

Glad to see he bonded to his father quickly....good chapter

 Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 11:36 pm
Title: Chapter 8

MORE PLEASE

 Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 10:56 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Such a beautiful story

 Reviewer: Karen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 08:03 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Oh my goodness you got me crying over here. My husband looking at me like her damn hormones are acting up again. I love that there was no hesitation on Cameron part about the paternity of Jaylen. He shouldn't be angry with Aries, He knew what kind of girlfriend he had at that time. Protect that baby by any means necessary. what a wonderful little boy.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 06:11 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Beautifull chapter! I would like to know more about their first and only time!

 Reviewer: Bel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 05:27 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Yay another chapter i love the reveal keep up the good work

 Reviewer: yamiik Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 05:26 pm
Title: Chapter 8

I'm a bit surprised that Cameron hasn't put 2 and 2 together to have some sort of clue as to why Aried hid the pregnancy. I meant, why would she want someone who would be devious enough to post naked pics of someone around their child?! 😕

Cameron and Jaylens introduction was sweet. 💖💕💖💕

I wonder how the discussion between Aries and Cameron will pan out!  Curious to see. 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 05:21 pm
Title: Chapter 8

That's so sweet. I can't wait for the next chapter.

 Reviewer: tostsi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 05:07 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Great update looking forward to the next chapter.

 Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 04:26 pm
Title: Chapter 8

This story just keeps better and better. I wonder what Ambrosia is doing and what she will do once she finds out about Jaylen. 

 Reviewer: WannaBeWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 03:50 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Hosia showed how vindictive she can be when Cameron told her the truth, so why did still see Hosia as his one? If you ask me his numb in the head ass deserved to be deceived.  People show you who they truly are so believe them and move on when they prove themselves to be unworthy.  Before you go on Aries think about what happened years and just be greatful that she loves that little boy beyond measure. Aries please tell that fool about the real Hosia, because he is still denial somewhat.  She was wrong for not telling him but he was wrong for allowing his ho to organize Aries harrassment.  Can you write into the story yhat Hosia and Gregory die in bad car accident?  No one woukd miss her but her momma but she seserves unhappiness for raising her daughter to be so selfish and evil. Not to mention vindictive!  Yes, I has to read this chapter again and obviously has more to say.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 11:51 am
Title: Chapter 8

Jay is definitely a Marino.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 08:41 am
Title: Chapter 8

Finally! Thank you!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 08:32 am
Title: Chapter 8

Loved the update!! Glad Aries and Antonio's interaction seem to be improving. Also glad Jaylen accepted Cameron as his dad.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 07:23 am
Title: Chapter 8

OK, Antonio just endeared me to him for life! They are going to be pals from now on.

Cameron...meh, he's still on my list.

Jaylen, man I love that little guy!

Those brothers are a trip. I really like the smart assness? of Stephen...ha!

Who is left at home to greet Junior...lol?

Yes! Cant wair for the rest...

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 06:00 am
Title: Chapter 8

Well, he won over Jaylen and vice versa, but he may as well put on his work clothes to get Aries to like or trust him.  

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 05:42 am
Title: Chapter 8

Awwww😿

 Reviewer: simplydijah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 05:08 am
Title: Chapter 8

I'm really enjoying this story.

 Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 05:08 am
Title: Chapter 8

I'm a goner after reading that last line.Jaylen is so precious!   How could Hosia have foolked them all so completely? Cameron saw how she treated Aries and still loved her. Can she was so showing her true colors, how dumb are you?   Awesome sauce!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 04:51 am
Title: Chapter 8

This chapter almost had me in tears.It was go good, got my face hurting smiling from cam and jaylen's interaction.

 Reviewer: precious Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 04:35 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful intro.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 04:21 am
Title: Chapter 8

This chapter brought tears to my eyes which means that this was a wonderful chapter.  Great job

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 04:20 am
Title: Chapter 7

YIKES!!! THIS IS GETTING HOTTER BY THE MINUTE I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.

 Reviewer: yenaj36 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2015 12:51 am
Title: Chapter 7

Love the story...can not wait until Cameron comes in contact with his son.

That Ambosia is a mess...she will bring more drama - I am predicting.

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 10:09 pm


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