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Title: Chapter 1

 

 

 

   UPDATES,  UPDATES  PLEASE!!!

 

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2015 12:25 am
Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story I hope you come back soon to finish.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 04 2015 06:34 am
Title: Chapter 10

We miss you and your wonderful story..Come back soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2015 02:02 am
Title: Chapter 1

Really good!! will keep reading!

 Reviewer: Leya Sade Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 08:26 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I was begin selfish and inconsiderate, please except my apology for my rudeness on how long it takes to update.   Please come back when the time is right for you and no one else.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 06:39 am
Title: Chapter 10

I'm very sorry for your  lose, take your time, we will here waiting.

And thank you for letting us know.

 Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 02:58 pm
Title: Chapter 10

I understand that most writers have other responsibilities to take care of such as work, writers block and family..Please let readers know, this why I continuously feel disappointed by extremely gifted writers who do not update their books.  You have a very good book but the wait is to long and I will no longer look for updates.  I hope you will continue to write because you do have a gift that will need fine tune as you continue to write.



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I'm so sorry for the long wait and I promise to update soon. Someone very important passed and I just been taking some time to deal with it. So please just bare with me and I swear the wait won't be much longer.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 06:09 am
Title: Chapter 10

Ok, Am I the only one checking daily waiting for the next chapter?????  :(

 Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 12:09 am
Title: Chapter 10

Where is the people with the white coats for this psyco?

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2015 11:43 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I am really enjoying what I have read so far :) can't wait to see what is going to happen next. Is Aries and her  ex best friend  going to have the confrontation  that was suppose to happen 3 years ago? Can't wait her the next update! Hope it's really soon ;)

 Reviewer: Darlene Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 06 2015 03:05 pm
Title: Chapter 10

I absolutely love this story, a current fave of mine as of right now ! I just read the whole thing. I can't wait til the next update!

 Reviewer: LilMissBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 04:24 am
Title: Chapter 10

haha hosia you been tooted and booted, makes you feel stupid huh? You still stuck on stupid? Man this hoe is clueless? She need to remeber who they is...Bd boy is bout to get too lit....Let her try them and she will become another body! Now she stuck with no-body! f aroubd she ain't getting nobody! IDKY bu im not shippinh christian and her and its going to get messy if christian keeps taking the role of a father even if its innoent he is already pissed.

 Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 03:23 am
Title: Chapter 10

One my fav stories to read at the moment 

 Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 06:53 am
Title: Chapter 10

i hope that love will blossom between Cameron and Aries. How will she adapt to all these men surrounding her and capting her son's attention? It's been the two of them for the past 3 years, how will she manage? I love the fact that little Jaylen is a copy of his dark skin mom but has his daddy's and all the Marino's feature: his grey eyes!

 Reviewer: ava Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 01:03 am
Title: Chapter 10

Love the update! Hope those men protect Aries and Jaylen from that crazy Ambrosia. Ambrosia has problems and needs help!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 12:14 am
Title: Chapter 10

First and foremost, I think I'm in love with Christian. I wish Cameron would try and take that baby, I would come through this computer and jump into this story to kick his ASS!. Ambrosia think she still has this bully mentality over Aries, she about to have a rude awakening. Mess with me I'm a big girl I can handle it, mess with my child, not even the Avengers and my boyfriend THOR can get me off her ASS!.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 05:02 pm
Title: Chapter 10

I love this story. Does Aries father have money? She said the neckless her mom gave that her father gave her was worth like 2,000 or 3,000 dollars. Man wouldn't it be a trip that Aries and Ambrosia were sisters. They did say her dad was in love with another woman but Ambrosia's mom told him she was preggers and that is the only reason he married her in the first place.

 Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 05:01 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Trouble! 

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 05:00 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Ohhh heck, stuff just got real! I can't wait to see the battle between the Marinos and Ambrosia. 

 Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 03:13 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Cameron you need to admit that you brought satan into your family but since Hosia never birthed your child you can permanently kick her to the curb. That ho needs medication.  When is Cam going to aplogize to Aries for allowing Hosia to terrize her?  He has alot to make up for but he does deserve to be a father.  Aries let go of the anger Jaylin can feel the tension. So love this story! 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 02:49 pm
Title: Chapter 10

in my eyes Cameron is just as bad as ambrosia.  he was spineless and knew how she treated Aries but just shrugged it off. I'm irritated that he acts like her taking jaden and running was surprising and I'm curious to see if he'll be confronted about it and knocked down a peg. Can't wait to read more.

 Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 02:27 pm
Title: Chapter 10

NO DONT STOP THERE!!!,  Please update ASAP, I dying here. LOL,LOL :)

 Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 11:33 am
Title: Chapter 10

Oh man, this Ambrosia! LOL! She's so entertaining! The only woman... Can't wait for Aries and Antonio Jr's new girlfriend Tinashe join forces! She will pop a blood vessel!

btw, we need an interlude about how those two met before he introduces her to the family...

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 08:57 am
Title: Chapter 10

Ambrosia is playing with fire if she hurts that child. Because I think Aries will kill anyone who will hurt her child.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 08:36 am
Title: Chapter 10

So tired of Ambrosia already and it's only the 10th chapter. Someone please go dump her in the middle of nowhere.

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 08:12 am


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