ambrosia you evil bitcha oh i love this story every shapter better and better
Reviewer: yamiik Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 01 2015 03:49 am
You have to do longer chapters or else you shouldn't be so good. Can't wait to see these two fall in love and Amb gets what's coming to her. Aries is going to have to show her she is not afraid of her.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed
[Report This]Date: June 01 2015 03:44 am
Good chapter...excited to see a little more interaction between Aries and Cameron. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]Date: June 01 2015 03:32 am
I hope Pops means what he says about Ambrosia, because if something happens to Aries, and especially Jaylen, I'm not gonna like that! One bit. Its all about protecting them.
Cameron would do well to not be dismissive of Ambrosia and underestimate her. The chick is crazy. For real.
I didn't want Aries to show Cameron that he could affect Aries about Jaylen and taking him away, but I guess the reality is that he could if he really wanted to.
Waiting for the meeting with Ambrosia....
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: June 01 2015 03:21 am
- When will Cameron admit that he was wrong in being silent as Ambrosia terrorized Aries? Was Aries wrong in keeping his child a secret, yes. However, she had a good reason based on Cameron's in-action to protect her from Ambrosia and Ambrosia sending someone to rape/harm her. How would she have known based on his actions that he woiuld protect her child?
- Aries needs some Sunshine in her life. She deserves some Success so she doesn't have to depend soley on the Marino family. Moreover, she needs to show in definite manner her growth and strength to Ambrosia; she has to fight back even physically if necessary.
Hopefulness23, Thanks for this awesome story that invokes strong feelings in your readers.
Reviewer: Zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 01 2015 03:01 am
Oh Amby, you do not want to f with the Marinos. Hope you've made out yo will. You dumb slut.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: June 01 2015 02:35 am
Yes, you updated! I was so excited to read it. Ambrosia is just one relentless woman who doesn't know when to stop, I sort of feel sorry for her as that how her mother brought her up to be.
Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 01 2015 02:33 am
Very good update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 01 2015 02:29 am
Finally! Thank you! The longer you make us wait, the longer chapters we expect.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 01 2015 02:09 am
Ambrosia is Cra Cra, she is do craving the attention that Mom and Dad never gave her, and Gregory is nothing but P-Whipped for helping her, I hope his wife finds out about him Doing Ambrosia and takes Half. Better yet, take it All.
Reviewer: rocky balboa Signed
[Report This]Date: June 01 2015 02:06 am
love the clan and their immediate and undying love for Jaylen. Finally, Aries is no longer by herself. Can't wait to see how the relationship between Aries and Cameron will evolve.
Reviewer: katt Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 01 2015 02:01 am
This chick is straight loco. Can we say coo coo, coo coo. My God, the man nor his family members are not responding to your repeated calls. He didn't leave you for Aries, he left you because he found out you were cheating and that all the miscarriages he mourned for may not have been his. Girl, get your life together. Aries just said, she didn't want any drama but I also believe Ambrosia doesn't realize the Aries from before is not the same Aries as now. She has a child to protect and she will put those paws on you and have you laid out. I soo hope she does. Cameron still has some work to do. I am not sure he is as over Ambrosia as he seems right now. This is all hurt feelings, ego and pride right now. What will he do when the dust settles?
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: June 01 2015 01:59 am
Hosia has some deep seates psychosis and Shoule receive a beat down feom Aries. Antonio and Cameron ate g pi ng to gonpostal on Hosia and I can't wait.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 01 2015 01:48 am
I am enjoying this story si much I ant wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: yenaj36 Signed [Report This]Date: May 28 2015 01:19 pm
Welcome back, and thanks for the longer chapter.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 27 2015 02:55 am
That awkward moment when someone tries to tell you which direction your story should go. Anyhoo I like Aries she not the typical female lead. I love that she hasn't secretly been hiding her love for Cam since their night together or saving herself for years and years waiting for him. I love your story.
Reviewer: Tori Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 27 2015 12:41 am
Thanks for the new chapter.
I was quite surprised by the way Aries reacted when Cameron asked to talk : I get that she felt a bit on the defensive, and I am all for her not to get ruled over by Cameron, but that was very stupid and childish of her to try and ignore him and then yell at him. Like WTF was that? I really do hope they don't get into unnecessary drama : Cameron is the stubborn type, and I expect Aries to not let him roder her and their son around, but I would be quite disappointed if she started behaving the way she just did.
Also, talking about unnecessary drama : I am so not here for the "EVIL ex-fiance creating crazy obstacles and drama" bad soap opera style drama. SO. NOT. HERE. FOR. THAT. I don't think there is need to put Ambrosia further down to make Aries look good/as the better alternative. Ambrosia is manipulative, and it's logical that she would try and get Cameron back, but please, no crazy unnecessary drama. I hate this trope so much.
Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2015 08:17 pm
Cam has some nerve being mad at her like really. Ambrosia is still on ten thinking she can worm her way in, crazy how she don't even want Gregory anymore just evil. Like T but Ant Jr. Just now let the cat out the bag. But the same girl she terrorized years before she's got a rude awaking she's grown up plus she's got her son to protect. Let's see what goes down. Can't wait
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2015 07:30 pm
I like Tinashe already!
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 26 2015 04:01 pm
yes this chapter is the drama about to unfold update update update! keep up the great work
Reviewer: yamiik Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 26 2015 01:15 pm
if Ambro terminate her pregnancies on purpose I think I will be sick for a few weeks unless Greg has a problem having kids.
Can wait to read what will happenin 😱
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2015 12:45 pm
I'm nominating you for a "featured" story to read.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2015 11:11 am
This is sooo good,I couldn't stop reading it! Can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: lwxie Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2015 10:04 am
I hope Ambrosia doesn't take a trip to NYC because there will be some serious explaining to do.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2015 06:31 am