Title: Chapter 9

Good for Aries! Stand your ground! He can get some licks in about not knowing about Jaylen, but not too many. She's taking what he's serving like a woman; however, he doesn't have much room to judge, given his own behavior. That's probably why she made that comment to him. How secure can she feel that he would keep her and her baby safe with him and the rest of the Marino men drinking all the cool aid Ambrosia was serving them? So no, she really doesn't think much of him, right now.

And if he wants to be angry, then turn that on himself. Aries has had to go it alone, so she went in to protective mode for her and her baby. God knows he's only been whining, and crying being led around by the nose while Ambrosia's been making a plum fool out of him behind his back the whole relationship.  

Even after he finds out about the cheating he takes her back? Now he's learning how truly crazy this lunatic is! Bullying, pushing, spitting and orchestrating a rape??? Then he has the nerve to act all surprised when he finds out about the affair? But this was the love of his life, right?

Cameron needs to be a better judge of character period before he judges Aries on her character.

All respect goes to Christian. He took Aries and Jaylen under his wing and became protective of them before anyone right away, without question.

Nice!!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 04:59 am

Title: Chapter 9

Oh, it's on now!

 I stop whatever I am doing when I see an update on Aries and Cam.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 04:59 am

Title: Chapter 9

Loved the update! Ambrosia just doesn't know when to quit! She needs a reality check! Hope Aries is ready for her this time around! Cameron better watch his back!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 04:21 am

Title: Chapter 9

I don't like Cameron.  That heffa Ambrosia was harassing Aries and he tries to blame Aries for keeping Jaylen a secret?  He was to stupid to even know his ex-fiance was cheating!  He needs a beat down before he would be able to tell Aries anything.  She was right to protect Jaylen from the heffa Ambrosia. I hope you will redeem Cameron because right now he's not looking too good.  But Aries is a proud mama bear protecting her cub!  She's no gold digger (unlike Ambrosia) but is doing what she needs to help her child and put him first.  I really like this character.  Cameron could learn a lot from her.  Good story!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 04:16 am

Title: Chapter 1

Awesome update. I would like to know when is Cameron going to man-up to his family and Aries about his playing deaf/blind/stupid to all of Demonbrosia & Company hateful antics towards Aries. Someone needs to check him because he is in complete self preserving denial.

It's true Jaylen needs a father. However, if said father isn't a stand up (right now he is rub back hen picked jackass) man, then he can't really be a daddy.There is something about this that makes me dislike Cameron.

Aries and Chrisitian should be good friends but she needs a man ( a real one) to take interest in her. She needs to have some successes in the future to showcase her inner strength and beauty.

Demonbrosia and goons need their a*$$ kicked, period.  I'm praying for the beatdown, Cookie style. 

Reviewer: Zetacrave Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 04:00 am

Title: Chapter 9

Why in the world would jr. tell her that. If his brother told him to run her over with his car if he see's her that should have been a big clue that she was no longer welcome.

Reviewer: kiarah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 03:56 am

Title: Chapter 9

Really? No one included Antonio Jr on what Ambrosia was doing? REALLY? Now she is going to be let into the HOUSE!!! OMG!! Why didn't anyone TELL him. Wow. I almost hate Ambrosia. I do hate people like her, though. She needs to be dealt with and quick. The bullying, lying, deceitful, whorish b*tch. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 03:26 am

Title: Chapter 1

For this family to be so connected with each they rarely ever communicate the important stuff to each other and they are very willing to share family information with outsiders.

 

Great update.

Reviewer: Anon. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 03:15 am

Title: Chapter 9

Cameron is getting on my last nerve. He's acting brand new, like he didn't know how Ambrosia was treating Aries. I'm happy Aries stood her ground with him, acting like a bully. When she basically told him if Ambrosia breathe at Jaylen, she would kick both their asses I clap so hard. I think Cameron has met his match with Aries.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 03:04 am

Title: Chapter 9

Best chapter so far good length started good n ended good

 

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 03:02 am

Title: Chapter 9

ah man i want more

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 02:55 am

Title: Chapter 9

First - Loved the upate

Second - I know you hear this all the time (ITS WAY TO SHORT), LOL, LOL

Third -  How soon before the next chapter. 

I check everyday the next chapter and trust me it always worth the wait

Your doing a great job keep it up.

Reviewer: tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 02:45 am

Title: Chapter 9

Fantastic updat, it was worth the wait.   

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 9

Hosia wants Aries to beat until the white meat shows and I hope she gets her wish!  Glad Cameron had the locks changed but still no restraining order. Huh?  Hosia needs to ordered to stay away from the whole family!! That heifer is cray cray!!!  Hosia is down right evil!!! I wish death upon her but drag it out and makes it painful!  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 02:30 am

Title: Chapter 1

Please update soon, keep checking to see it this story has been updated. This has fast become one of my favouite stories. On other not I think some people are been harsh on Cameron. Yah what he did was the not the best and his judgement was bad and he thought he was in love. People make terrible decisions when the heart is involved. But hopefully he'll make it up to his son. That's all that matter him getting to know his kid and building a father and son relationship. But whatever you do please don't but Christian and aris together that's not a good move for the family, especially since they are all close. I know someone people want that.

Reviewer: spyan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2015 10:18 pm

Title: Chapter 1

No pressure, but where is the next chapter. I'm lossing it waiting  :)

Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2015 10:17 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Cameron better stop playing the victim here, in the past, he let his girlfriend bully Aries and was relieved when she left college. She has to remind him that she had to leave without disclosing her pregnancy to protect her baby because the hoe's actions were endangering their unborn child !!! He should think about it and blame himself for his cowardice. Even if she wasn't pregnant, a good man can't look else where when his girl is showing her true colors and still accept her. With this past, I can't forgive Cameron and really hope that Aries end up with Christian, we just met him but he seems to be a more caring man. Cameron doesn't deserve Aries ! In a twisted way, karma punished him with all these miscarriages and cheating...nah!!

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2015 10:03 am

Title: Chapter 8

This chapter almost had me in tears.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 23 2015 12:37 am

Title: Chapter 8

Just caught up with this story, and it's Good.. Love the Marion men, and Aries is a stronger woman than she believes, and Jayln is too cute.

Ambrosia has serious issues, she is looking for the love of her father so badly, that's why she is sleeping with Gregory, they all need Dr. Phil.

Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2015 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 1

Loving this story please update so I can get my fix😀 and find out what happens next 

Reviewer: spyan Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 11:53 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Great start.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 07:58 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I'm hooked on this story.
I read every chapter today and can't wait to read how Aries will adapt to this new family.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 07:58 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I am soooo loving this story! Jaylen is so cute and adorable! Jaylen and Aries deserve to be surrounded by a caring and loving family...Aries with made the perfect Queen Bee of the Marino Family!

You are a fabulous writer!

 

Reviewer: Audrecio Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 8

Glad they are all there to meet Jaylen but Cameron can't blame everything on Aria because he is at fault to letting Ambrosia bully her & try to destroy no wonder she dropped out of college but didn't tell him about Jaylen. No telling what would have happened.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 02:00 am

Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story! !!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 01:59 am



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