i absolutely love love love this story. it demonstrated so many life lessons in it. and in the end im happy that those two were able to get back together and she was able to find and meet her father. thanks for writing such an amazing story.Reviewer: Vava Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/12 11:41 am
Aww im sittin' here, all by myself and crying happy tears over this story. This was an amazing read.Thank you..Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/01/11 06:36 am
Gurl ..u have no idea wot i went thru to find this story and i love all of it every word i thank you for writing this it'a a wonderful story i see that it has been awhile since you have written on this site i hope all is well with you that life is treating you kindly, that your health is good that your inlove and happy i thank you for this peek into your mind it's a great place to relax ...i'll keep my eyes open in the hopes that you return to us soon...cyn~Reviewer: cynn333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/11 08:15 am
Great story even though it does need some editing. But Great job! I just wanted to know what happened with Chris and how he had a change in how he saw and was starting to feel about Erica, the girl he had to kiss in the cafeteria because of a bet?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Jennifer! I'm always going through and correcting any mistakes I might have made. I don't always catch them all but if you could tell me where the errors are, I'll be more than happy to fix them. Also, you and some of the other readers have been asking about Chris and Erica. I'm thinking about doing a piece on them but I don't like working on more than one story at a time. I'll give them their story once Learning to Heal is finished. Thanks again!
Date: 02/22/11 06:13 pm
I so loved this story, it is one of my favorites.Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 11:46 am
Thank you for sharing your story. I'm so glad things worked out for Michael and Malia, and their ex's got what they deservedReviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/11 04:35 pm
This was a nice story, I'm glad they didn't let anyone stop them from being together and that they both got over their fears so they could be happy.Reviewer: Kiah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/26/10 09:09 pm
I liked the ending...I'm confused about the second part I should be reading though...I've read all the chapters plus the Epilogue. Can you be more specific about this second part? Like what chapter does the "change" take place?
Author's Response: When I first posted the ending it didn't have the part about their honeymoon in it. Four people read and reviewed only the part about Malia and her family and them setting a date. One of them said they wanted to know what happened after the wedding so I added the part that comes after *^*^*^*^ this line. Didn't mean to confuse anyone. Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/19/10 09:46 pm
I love your stories and the characters and i have been waiting a long time for the end of this story and im happy that Malia gets the happy ending that she deserves but...I feel that you might have rushed the ending too fast and that there were some loose ends that couldve been tied up more nicely but overall the story was great i really enjoyed it. GOOOOOOOD Job!!!!Reviewer: honey Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/19/10 08:28 pm
That was a GREAT ending to a GREAT story, and I am glad that you finished it.... Michael and Malia deserve a happy ending after all that they went though not only to get together but to stay together... and it was also nice that Malia connected with her father and that she has a family now.
Again this was a GREAT story, and I hope that you are doing better.Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/19/10 07:12 pm