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Title: Chapter 5

DAMN!

If Jen lives, Chance has some crazy yet to confront. And as for Angie, Harris is a nutjob. There should be warning bells going off. He has given her glimpses of his overbearing, controlling true self. She should heed it.

Who will be the crazier of the two? Hope it doesn't get too ugly. Moppet might be elderly, but I'm thinking she can throw her cane/walker with percision.

Really enjoying this, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2015 10:09 am

Title: Chapter 5

It's juicy... Jen crazy n Harris Psycho 

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2015 06:19 am

Title: Chapter 5

Holy cow wow. Damn Chance knows how to do it well. Harris can go kick rocks. He is crazy. Get rid of him without any drama.

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 19 2015 02:52 am

Title: Chapter 5

Well done...going to get my cigarette and I don't smoke :-)

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2015 02:42 am

Title: Chapter 5

I can't believe that Jen gave herself a back alley aboirtion. Chance is a beast in the bed!!! Pretty sure he will tear Harris up when it hits the fan.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2015 01:14 am

Title: Chapter 5

That wasn't smart of Angie...at all. I'm wondering about her at this point. First, she only gave him what he's been wanting all along. Second, he hasn't resolved a damn thing with Jen. The only thing she's done is get herself right in the middle of that mess. Jen is after the money and she's trying to make sure she gets it now. Whatever comes her way concerning Jen, Angie put herself in it. I can't even believe she did that.

And Angie has that Harris situation to work out. Actually, she can just dump him because all she's given him were afew dates. she owes him nothing.

Chance has always been kind of shady to me. He may get better, but actively persuing one woman while with another says it all. I don't care how crazy she is. Then settle the matter with one woman FIRST before going after the other. 

This was interesting....

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2015 12:22 am

Title: Chapter 5

this was really amazing...I'm so sorry for Chance's loss but something good came out of it...I can't wait for the next update...I'm so eager to find out what happens :)

Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 11:52 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I was hoping that you wouldn't let either of them cheat but i guess that hope will not come to pass.  Harris is going to Go ABSOFUCKINGLUTELY crazyyyyyyyyyyyyyy, cos he already show'd her he is controlling and who knows what else.

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 10:57 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Jen is a murderer, she's a coward and I'm done with her. Jen never deserved Chance, how dare she take away his right's of becoming a father. If I were him I would have her charge with murder. That child had a life, she's not God, acting like she had the right to choose if that baby live or die. She's heartless and soulless. Harris done bump his head, trying to tell somebody what to do. Ordering her on a date and she went HELL NO!, ordering her food, it's about time for me, oh I mean her to do like Barney Fife said "Nip it in the bud". My man Chance got skills, Angelina better keep that man. He's rich, he can f*ck, your mama and your grandmama like him,DONE DEAL!!!.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 10:18 pm

Title: Chapter 5

DAMN!!! I was not ready!!!! That was a very hot sex scene!! Chance is a beast in the bedroom.

I don't think Angelina cheated.... Harris and Angie are not bf/gf they are just dating right, but yeah I think Harris is going to flip. What is up with him anyway? He likes perfection and he never asks her for oppinion and he snaps at little things. She needs to run not walk, but run from him because his true self is starting to show and all of it is red flags.

I have no words for Jen but idk I have no words.

Fantastic update!!!! I need more!!!

Update Soon!!

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 09:27 pm

Title: Chapter 5

DAMN Chance !!!!  Kick rocks Harris. Jen Get help but adiós!!!

Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 08:45 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I think trouble is coming! Harris is going to be livid!

Reviewer: annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 08:36 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I would like to Jen charged with murder, she took a coat hanger an stuck up her stuff. I want her to pay the price.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 08:15 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I don't like Harris anyway there is something shady about him.  Jen killed that baby for no damn reason, they heifer should die! Angelina only went out with fool twice so how is cheating? I knew that ho got pregnant on purpose, she is a mom endorsed gold-digger. !

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 07:59 pm

Title: Chapter 5

If ol' boy had told me we were going to dinner instead of ASKING me, I'd have met him at the door in sweats with a bowl of ice cream in my hand.  Harry got issues.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 07:19 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Well damn...bye Harris :-) he can't compete with what Chance just threw don't.  I would still let him deal with Jena and stay out of it (using a hanger will never be forgiven)--Chance will be ok, since Angie just gave him his medicine :-)

Anybody reading this story knows when your mama and grandmama gives you a heads up on a snake, then you best take heed.  This man just assumes they will have sex and that is a turn off--call things off in public, and with your own transportation nearby.     

Harris showed his true colors and Angie is too through with him: she can't talk while his jazz is playing, can't order what she wants to drink, can't eat what she wants to eat, can't be dressed down, can't live where and with whom she wants...with Harris in that fine package is a bunch of can'ts--how about 'can't be happy with Harris'?

I am glad she is independent and I didn't understand the check cashing policy--what did I miss???

 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 06:54 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Chance has thouroughly claimed her.  What will Harris do but more importantly how will Angie feel in the aftershocks.  Chance is still "with" Jen.  Looking for all sorts of drama at this point.  PLEASE HURRY BACK.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 06:18 pm

Title: Chapter 5

What a wonderful update but that woman could be so mentally unstable 

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 05:47 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Harris is a controlling douche. He and Jen are made for each other I think. Chance and Angie have a real connection. Good story!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 05:09 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Harris is crazy!!  Angelina needs to be careful.  Harris is going to be furious because Angie and Chance hooked up.  Angelina probably did not see their dating as a serious relationship.  It seemed as if they were still in the getting to know each other phase.  Moppet and Denise were right, there is something off about Harris and I think Angie is startng to see it too.

Jen has a lot of underlying issues and insecurities.  Why does she think Chance cheated?  He's a handsome and nice person; Of course other women would be attracted to that, but that doesn't mean he's reacting back or cheating on her.  Is she trying to justify her cheeating by making it seem as if he's cheating so its ok for her to do the same?  I can't wait for the next chapter. :-)

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 04:58 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I was not prepared......

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 04:46 pm

Title: Chapter 4

great update! love Moppet and the chemistry between Angie & Chance - it's sizzling! thansk for the update!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 04:04 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I like Moppet! Chance is right old girl is a hoot!

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 05:54 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Listen to Moppet Angelina, Harris ain't no good!   Chance take that ho Jen to court and get full custody as she needs medication but is in denial. Love Moppet!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 04:48 am

Title: Chapter 4

I'm sorry, I still can't get with this possessive nature Chance has concerning Angie. He gets too close, he's too touchy, and demands where he has no business at. Why would he even suggest that Angie would be playing "games" with him while he's the one with the pregnant girlfriend at home? He knows that's not true. And she doesn't need to greet him any type of way. They are not in a relationship. They barely know each other. She should have told him to kick rocks. Also, he's right, he needs to get his crap together. However, asking Angie to help with that is a no go. She doesn't need to involve herself in that business. They had problems way before she got there. That's all his to clean up. Keep the distance until he does. People like Jen could get folks hurt.

I love Moppet.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 03:18 am



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