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Title: Chapter 4

Grandmother's are usually right about these things.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 02:49 am

Title: Chapter 4

I just loved this update and her connection with mom and Grandmama had me lol and it was believable, even the eavesdropping.  So glad they both see beneath Harris slick charm, so bossy in everything.  

Chance has prayed, confessed, and is coming after her--I am sure the Lord didn't tell him to do this :-).  The Team of three (C,D,&M) working together can get rid of Harris, whom I expect has a bad temper when he doesn't get his way.  

Our two has that Liv/Fritz chemistry.  I hope Chance shows up unexpectantly at the good Dr. B's office and either Jen is doing the doc or she is doing someone else (me thinks Harris).  Chance sure tell her Angela nd Harris are dating and watch her flip--she is so crazy I wouldn't put it pass her to be pregnant by someone else, just to keep Chance and his $$$.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 02:28 am

Title: Chapter 4

This is such a great story! I cannot wait for another update. I don't know what's up with Harris but trust Angie's great grandma. Chance is just in a bad situation, but he needs to clean up his mess like he said before he keeps pursuing Angie. It's not fair to Jen or Angie. As for Jen, I don't trust her either, well not really. There is something about her. She seems to like Angie, but who knows and now she is seeing the therapist she and Chance go to daily? I don't know if the therapist is a man or a woman, (can't remember from the prior chapter) I think Dr. Baines is a man and I might be wrong but Jen might be cheating on Chance with him or with someone. She is way to insecure. Did Chance ever cheat on her? I didn't think he did. I feel bad for their unborn child. Jen is angry, insecure, and seems to have deeper problems than one might expect. Is the child even Chance's? At this point I would not be too surprised what may happen. Heck her and Harris could be doing it. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 01:23 am

Title: Chapter 4

I pray that he finds out that she is not pregnant by him but by someone else with her bipolar ass. But I'm with Moppet, Harris is way to perfect. He says all the right things all the time. He is a slick one.

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 01:18 am

Title: Chapter 4

I love the update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 12:35 am

Title: Chapter 4

Oh my goodness! Moppet is my grandmother all the way, when your elders tell you something you best believe it. My grandmother has 40 of us grandchildren, 55 great-grands. When she talks we listen, It is called "Wisdom". There has never been a time in my life, where she has steer me wrong. She told me in high school that my husband Micah was going to be my husband. We have been married almost 21 years. Harris seems like one of those shady salesman, he has a quick temper too. I think I like Chance take charge kind of mentality, but he has to be through with Jen first.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 12:06 am

Title: Chapter 3

Seems to me, Harris is a controlling ass hole. Nothing about his attitude is attractive in my opinion. I'm all for knowing what you want but he seems too forceful.

Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 07:35 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Loving this story. Chance is so unhappy but too stupid to do anything about it.  He needs to man up and if he really wants Angelina he needs to wait then approach her the right way. I think she is attracted to him, but Anti isn't about drama and I don't blame her!!!  Great story...update soon please. 

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 05:09 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Harris Luther can't be rhat perfect. Waiting for the other shoe to drop.

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 06:40 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I am so intrigued. I can't wait to know more about these characters.

Update Soon!!

Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 07:49 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I think I understand chance a little better now. I know first hand a bad woman can turn a good guy bad, and vice versa. Just because you get a women pregnant doesn't mean you have to marry her you can co-parent. I don't think Jen is psycho either, she's trying to throw fault at chance for something she's doing. Withholding sex is a cop out, that one of the horniest times. Harris is moving to fast he talks a good game but something in the water ain't clean to me. Chance is just horny and trying to get attention from Angie. With men it's all about the chase the other woman throwing herself at him was a turn off. I'm loving this story.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 04:02 pm

Title: Chapter 3

yaaaay - thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 09:31 am

Title: Chapter 3

I'm very anxious to see where this is going!!!  Is Jen going to lose the baby? Is Chance going to leave her if she doesn't? Is Angie gonna be a good stepmother?  I like this so much!!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 02:28 am

Title: Chapter 3

I am waiting to see where you take this.

 Good that Angel is sticking to her character and fighting her attraction to Chase and I guess you can be attracted to more than one man.  Perhaps Chase can back off, pull it together and then prove he is worthy.  Does Jen work or do anything at all? 

Problem with Harris is that he is on a speeding bullet to get what he wants.  If she is not ready to settle down, she needs to tell him.  Seems to me she will be jumping from work to Harris world w/o any fun.   I also like the way she is able to read him.

Feel sorry for Jen's baby bc a crazy mama is never a good thing.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 02:00 am

Title: Chapter 3

Jen suffers from a deep psychosis, what was his mother thinking?  I don't trust that Harris douche either. He makes my spidey sense tingle!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I've been holding this in, but after this chapter I feel it's been confirmed...Harris is the father of Jen's baby. This is getting messy. I can't wait to see how you bring it together.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 10:36 pm

Title: Cast

I like your characters (except Chance, heheh). Angel is cool as ice. That Jen, I almost feel sorry for her: mental illness is no joke. And what kind of meds CAN she take with a baby on the way? You've described her swings very well.

There are women who are like this when pregnant: no sex to hurt the baby, which is actually a manipulative power play (using sex as a weapon) to gain the upper hand in the relationship. Normally though, they wait til the ring is on, before changingthe rules...

Love the portrayal of Harris, too. He's almost too good tobe true... I had to read what he said to Angel about not wanting a relationship three times before I got what he was saying. I got the feeling he used that line a lot to seduce women and make em think maybe they could be the oneto change his mind... Lordy, you sure write em well! 

The only whackadoo in my opinion is Chance who is acting shady as .... I am very curious to see how you will develop him o make him worthy of our Angelina. Why is it that he feels pressured to marry Jen? Is it his Catholic background?

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 10:20 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I'll stand up and say it; yes Angie, you are the stupidest woman alive!!

What would possess her to not shut the door in his face after apologies were made? But see, she won't let it be right there, she's gonna mess around and get caught up in some crazy bullsh*t with him and his woman. Watch. She won't be able to say later on that she didn't know because she knows enough now to keep her distance. If she knew these people and had some type of emotional investment, then I could possibly see that. But she just met these people! They are basically strangers to her. Don't know them or their story. 

Chance, not digging him right now. He's too demanding and presumptuous where Angie is concerned. And way too damn possessive. I don't like how he gets all up in her face like he has some right to do that. Really, all he's showing is that he's horny as hell and needs to bust a nut! That seems to be the focus for him. Nothing more. Because he doesn't know her for anything more. But he'll keep pushing until sh*t gets started involving Angie and that dangerous lunatic he's living with.

This is gonna get crazy....

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 10:14 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Lawd!!! Jen is going to need 10 different kinds of psycho meds cuz one prescription will Not help her...WTH! Her behavior cannot be blamed on hormones, she NUTS!!!

Jen has stop being intimated with Chance and he seems sexually& emotionally frustrated. His attraction to Angel and not the other women throwing themselves at him, makes me think he is looking for somthing deeper.

Reviewer: Kayla Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 03:15 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great start, I'm intrigued. 

Chance needs an ass whooopin!  Eat a damn snicker and quench that mega-thirst. I can see he's going to be a thirsty-parchie. It doesn't sit well that his thirsty-parchie eyes is all up in Angie ' s cookie jar when his fiance is pregnant. Now as to the neighborhood watch and welcome party, Jen,  her nosey ass needs to go take several seats all up in Angie ' s businiess. #byefelica

Til' the next chapter,

Sienna

 

Reviewer: siennagray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2015 01:32 am

Title: Cast

I'm really enjoying this story. Please continue soon. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 28 2015 01:37 pm

Title: Chapter 2

What the hell is up with Sybil and her boyfriend!! Jen is too damn nosy and fully nuts! That dangerous deadly kind of nuts! Chance is not too far behind her! Why in hell would he expect Angie to open the door for him? Like she was his woman who better do what he said or something? And why should he be mad she didn't? And why would Angie relax and return his kiss like that? Dude totally went from jekyll to hype in a split second! WTF??

Angie's needs to listen to that inner voice about those two.

You always have a different and surprising spin to your stories, I tell ya!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2015 07:05 am

Title: Cast

You know why I'm here 😍😍😍

 

P.S. and Fassy can get it too 😈

Reviewer: siennagray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2015 12:31 am

Title: Chapter 2

Wow!! Damn, that was hot! Lol!! I feel terrible because I don't like cheating but Jen is crazy and bitchy... I can't wait for more. Great job 😍

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2015 08:18 pm



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