Reviews For Below The Surface
Title: Chapter 1

 Chance's girlfriend is pregnant and he's getting hard over another woman. I don't have feeling about this but Jen seems rather judgemental. Would it be bad to hope that Chance leaves her and fights for full custody of the baby? Don't like Jen!



Author's Response:

:D 

Jen is a busy body!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2015 12:22 am

Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm. The jury is still out on Jen. I'm sensing she may not have good intentions. Great start though. Update soon 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 11:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting! I can't wait to see where this goes.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 11:45 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this chapter. Very excited to see where this is going. I'm looking forward to your next update. 

Reviewer: MissT Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 11:35 pm

Title: Cast

Great looking cast, althought Iwould have liked to seen a face foward of Chance so that I can better visualize him as I read this story.



Author's Response:

Sorry for that. I just loved that pose. It's Michael Fassbender.

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1

lol. Always a Jen in a neighborhood no matter what community lol. Cant wait to see where this story goes :)

Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2015 11:07 pm



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