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Title: Chapter 11

What exactly is Gabriel surprised about in Humphrey's remark? That's the example he set to follow. And that's what irks the piss out of me; that he's suddenly got some weak ass memory loss with it all. 

Still waffling about Adele. Not sure what she would find so attractive about someone who would say and think something like that about her. And being dismsissive about her feelings and pride about it while saying "you're not the woman I thought you were"and basicaaly get over it already would get him kick to the nuts! To me that outweighs everything else and make hims very unattractive and ugly to me. He didn't offer an apology about it, really. And when are they going to have a REAL conversation about it? Surely that can't be it?

Waiting for the rest....

Wonderful!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 03:52 am

Title: Chapter 1

i'm glad she didn't stay with that STANKY law firm. Now she can "unconfirmed" at the other place and make partner in five years. Blast Gabe and every idiot like him everywhere!  

Duon, thank you for not making Adele a moon eyed man pleasing, skin brightening failure of a woman. 

Land if Gabe wants her, then he'd better start acting like it!!

Reviewer: Good For Her! Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 03:41 am

Title: Chapter 11

For what its worth, I'm actually so glad she turned down the job offer. They treated her like shit and who in their right mind would want to work for a bunch of people who dont even want you there? Yes! make partner at the other firm so you can beat their asses! She deserves to kick ass.

GABRIEL COME ON MAN. In all honesty, I really hope he actually doesnt think that way about her body... I mean she was right to turn him down because so far it only looks he noticed her since she lost weight. How shallow of him... PLEASE TELL US HE ISNT LIKE THAT. i mean what happens if she puts on weight again? will he be disgusted? will he act like a damn jerk? I hate that he didnt get the punishment he deserved. But im glad she basically said no to them having a relationship. Now who lost? Like I honestly want him to apologise ... like remember what you bloody said and did. IS WEIGHT ALL THAT MATTERS? I hated how he really didnt see how bad his statement was. Please help us understand that more. I really hope hes not that shallow

OMG I LOVE MAX! He is the best friend anyone could possibly have, and it doesnt hurt that he's so hot hahahaha what a way to make gab jealous lol they would make amazingly beautiful babies. Im not saying i want them together, i love them as friends ! but he is honestly the best. He never judged her based on her weight or anything. He loved her for who she was and theyre so attached to each other it is so insanely beautiful!

overall I LOVE IT! IM A NEW FAN ALERTTTT!!! seriously so fucken good ! cannot wait for more xx

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 01:30 am

Title: Chapter 1

I read more chapters than this one but there is nothing that I like about gabriel what if they get together and have kids and she puts on weight? hes going to go back to seing her as she was before I am sorry i cant continue reading i disagree with the pairing way too much

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 11

Max is soooooooo gay, or he woulda made a move by now. It's good to know Adele is not a push over, go get your future Adele.

Reviewer: dounome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 11:42 pm

Title: Chapter 11

This perfect. I love their passion. I hope they work it out!

Reviewer: IandA Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Is she serious... I understand turning down the job. But your man too

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 11:19 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Humphrey lives with a sense of entitlement, he needs to be brought down a peg or two or wipe out altogether. Gabriel needs to let go. I'm glad Adele turn down the job, why work someplace where you are uncomfortable. Plus dating someone your work with or for is a no no in my book, people might say she got her promotion laying on her back. They need time apart.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 10:06 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Gabriel needs to realize that he's not the only one who can see Adele's light. Max seems like one of those people who sees beauty in everything and in everyone. A true friend that don't judge but inspire you to do better. Max is a keeper in the friend department, Gabriel needs to own up to the mistakes he made, and rectify them.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 09:49 pm

Title: Chapter 11

I knew that she was playing with Gabriel!  I hope that this new position is more money but with greater respect.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 09:25 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Is Adele really giving him a chance? Gabe apologize please!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 09:19 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Yessss!  You go Adele!  I am glad that she has enough self respect to leave the firm instead of taking the associate position.  Gabriel is clearly 100% clueless as he didn't acknowledge when Humphrey's called him on his change of heart about Adele coinciding with her change in appearance.  Gabriel also failed to acknowledge the truth of Adele's words that she is not wanted at their firm.  Humphrey's attitude clearly shows that truth as in spite of Adele finishing second, he claims basically that she was a token who was lucky to get the position while failing to acknowledge she got the position on merit.  The blindness Gabriel shows to these facts makes him quite unsuitable for Adele.  He has no clue of the world in which she really lives.  Good job!  I hope to see growth for both Adele and Gabriel.  Right now I'm team Max as Gabriel still has no clue why Adele and Max are friends.  Maybe he'll learn.  I'm just glad that Adele chose to be true to herself.  If she's really worth it, Gabriel will want the real Adele and all that comes with knowing her. 

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 08:42 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I'm glad that Adele is being cautious with Gabriel.  He still is clueless about his behavior which I hope will be addressed at some point.  

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 08:31 pm

Title: Chapter 9

This was a great read. I look forward to the stories you pen Dion.

Reviewer: dounome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2015 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 9

Whoo hoo! That was hot!  I'm glad she told him and they got a chance to discuss it all. He was persistent and apologetic or at least he regretted was he said before.  They do seem perfect for each other.  Plus this chapter was longer...yay!!! Can't wait for the update.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 02:49 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Ok I love it but I need longer chapters

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 12:48 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Love it!!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 12:29 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I'm intrigued. Like the pace of this story and the characters so far. It's definitely pulled me in!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 12:17 pm

Title: Chapter 9

More chapters please.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 11:57 pm

Title: Chapter 9

SHE SHOULD STILL IGNORE HIM. SHE GAVE IN TOO EASILY TBH SHE SHOULD REALLY RESIST A BIT MORE HE HASN'T LEARNED HIS LESSON OR CHANGED HIS VIEWS. THIS IS A GOOS STORY I JUST DONT WANT IT TO BECOME ONE OF THOSE THINGS WHERE SHE LETS GO OF HER VIEWS AND MORAL TO FIT HIS. BUT I MEAN YOU'RE THE WRITER :) GOOD CHAPTER

Reviewer: Alexis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 09:32 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Boom ! This story is Awesome ! I literally just sat here an read all 9 chapters ! More please and soon. :)

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2015 03:25 am

Title: Chapter 9

I'm really interested in Adele's next move at this point.  I had to delete my previous review and still give it some more thought after reading this story.  Will Adele be moved by his sweetly spoken words, begging when he really has taken the time to think about how his words from before affected her.  How will she analyze the meeting when he kinda kicked her to the curb for his position and now how she will be humiliated in a meeting with clients because she was purposefully not given all of the information.  There are so many other nuances than him liking her and her liking him.  It is also about how he views her as an exception vs the norm.  He had no problem downgrading he when he wasn't attracted to her and that is a problem.  Honestly, anything Gabe says or do will be looked at with a side eye if I was Adele.  You claim one thing but do another repeatedly.  I would also not stay in an environment and waste my talents and hardwork somewhere that will never give me the recognition I rightly deserve.  Why put myself thru that stress?  I would finish out my training and take my expertise to the competition and shine.  The best way to make these individuals take notice is to hit their pocketbooks.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 10:41 pm

Title: Chapter 9

No one defines you but you. People say" sticks and stones can break your bones but words will never hurt you", that's a lie. Words can hurt and words have power. I think she should give him a chance and forgive him. To thy own self be true.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 04:26 pm

Title: Chapter 9

How did I miss this gem?  

My two-cent worth:  Gabe needs to get a conscience and maybe Max can help him with this.

Adele now knows there is chemistry, but needs to make him work for it.  No making out at the job bc then she will think she is the token putting out as expected to make it.  

Gabe really does seem to have a sense of entitlement and I think that is all he knows.  He doesn't even have a sense of protection toward her, bc he didn't even protect her from that meeting.  Gabe neds to pay, and then maybe we can see him as salvageable.

Adele is a better person than me, bc I would have blackmailed their azzes and Zoe would have been my main witness.  Perhaps Gabe can start a diversity program for the company--that would be a hoot. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 03:37 am

Title: Chapter 9

Loving this story so far but I hope she doesn't fall into what he wishes so easily after the kiss. He needs to prove himself to her. But also curious about how she & Max became such great friends too?

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 11:10 pm



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