Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

I had to read this last update again. It has me wondering, what Nate saw in Winder in the first place?  She had to evil and materialistic when he met her?   Did she think that he would get rich from fishing? Walter's ass don't have any money he's a damn cop, I am just not understanding the gruesome trio.  Nathaniel,  Eden and Uncle Leonard protect yourselves Satan resides in your midst!!  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 04:55 pm

Title: JANUARY 22ND 1990

Wow!  I'm surprised they would print all of that infomation in the newspaper. Especially the info about where she may be headed. I would think they would figure it euwould put her in danger, right?

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 04:55 pm

Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

Please let Walter Wendy and Charlotte get what is coming to them

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 06:18 am

Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

I love Nathaniel Eden and Sol together, they make such a cute family, and I can't wait for Nathaniel and Eden's Alone time together.

Wendy and Walter need to GO, all they care about is that they are better than everyone else, and that people ENVY them. how Nathaniel was married to Wendy is a Mystery to me... but as its said God doesnt like Ugly, and those two will REAP what they SOW... as for Charlotte, she needs to lose her job ASAP, I bet she's as miserable in her marriage as is Wemdy.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: rocky balboa Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 04:04 am

Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

Solomon will bring Nate and Eden together in a flash! They will fall in love and won't know what heat them! Can't wait for their date! 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 03:17 am

Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

Loved the update! Wendy and her hubby are up to no good. Hope all their plans back fire and give them a reality check!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 03:03 am

Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

I like hoe you keas with the evil threesome and ended with the good people.   Please have a nefarious plan for Windex. WAL-ass and Char-,ratchet,  I really hate those three characters. I love this story and thank you for updating! !  Solomon is so cute!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2015 02:08 am

Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

Yesssss....don't they see hurt her uncle I swear they will get it and get it good cause it's brewing and if they hurt sol...nat he will be the papa bull they do not want to mess with

wendy needs to get over herself like gosh! You tell nat to get over it but can't do it when he has. Get a life you cause the pain then you handle it or karma will bite back 1000 times worse then your stillborn.... Thank goodness that child went to heaven cause God said nope he isn't going to be turned evil he is going to be a child that deserves better.

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 11:54 pm

Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

Eden and Nate are so nice and maybe a little too nice.  They are sitting ducks and need to learn how to stand up to Wendy, her dumb husband, and the townspeople, too.

 I know Curtis was killed by Nate, but he needs to prepare himself for Wendy and crew---he know she is crazy.  Wendy was materialistic before Nate married her, he just ignored the signs.  

I hote Eden beats the hell out of Wendy bc she is going to hurt Sol to get to them;  they have let her slide with the name calling, bumping into Eden, and snapping at Nate.  Yep, this couple are sitting ducks.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 11:34 pm

Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

So Wendy and Walter gave Curtis the where about's of Eden. They basically helped in the attack on Eden and Solomon. Now they are wondering why their baby died," Do unto others as you would have them do to you". In Wendy's mind the more stuff you have and the more money you have makes a person happy "NOT". Charlotte is wrong on so many levels, a dog that brings a bone also carries a bone. I hope that the plot that's in their heads about Leonard and Eden be their downfall. Nathaniel and Solomon are so cute together. Eden needs to run her own home daycare and early childhood development center. The relationship with Eden and Nathaniel is about to heat up I'm guessing YES!YES!YES!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 11:06 pm

Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

Wendy is psychotic and hateful! But Eden and Nathaniel are so wonderful together! So pumped to see more updates!

Reviewer: brookedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 11:00 pm

Title: FEBRUARY 28TH 1990

Wonderful update.  Please update soon

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Date: July 27 2015 10:52 pm

Title: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

Wendy bares watching she is going off the deep end.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 02:35 pm

Title: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

Sol knows that Nate is his dad in all the ways that count. I can't wait until Eden realizes it too. They're already a cute family. Maybe Eden needs to go back to Nate's so she and Sol can sleep well every night :) That busybody Charlotte and wench Wendy are going to have karma bite them in the butt. I'm trying to figure out why Wendy wants Nate to be so miserable is she's happily married to that other douchebag? I will never understand why miserable people want to bring others down and be miserable with them. Nate has suffered enough and is finally getting back to life. Oh the small town life. Great update!

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 02:06 pm

Title: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

That newspaper don't have no couth, printing a child's name. Eden needs a village to help raise Solomon, but not that village of ignorant townspeople. Through the eye's of a child, Solomon knows how Nathaniel feels about him because that little boy feels the same way for him. It's sad that Wendy lost a son again, but sometimes sins of the parents affects the children. Wendy is a spiteful, egotistical, uncouth harlot. I'm guessing things at home is not going to well, with losing the son that Walter wanted so bad, the son they taunted Nathaniel with. Plus seeing Nathaniel with a baby boy that he cherishes is pissing her off. Charlotte needs to be fired if she disclose any information about Solomon birth certificate. I'm hoping that Eden and Nathaniel stop beating around the bush with their attraction and get a relationship going on. Nathaniel needs Eden and Solomon in his life. The best revenge he could give to Wendy and Walter is to live a happy and good life.The ememy don't want to see you happy. I just love this story.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 01:48 am

Title: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

What a wonderful update.  Thank you for sharing your book

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2015 04:02 am

Title: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

Idle hands are the Devil's workshop and Wendy "Satan's handmaiden" Rodgers and Charlotte "run tell dat" Baker are living proof.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2015 03:24 am

Title: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

Loved the update! Glad Curtis got his!! Now Wendy needs a reality check!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2015 03:01 am

Title: FEBRUARY 10TH 1990

Great job!  

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2015 06:25 pm

Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

You come up with some really awesome plot ideas, but the execution and style is amateurish.  Lots of spelling and word usage errors.  A good beta reader/editor would help turn your awesome ideas into well written stories.

Reviewer: constructive critic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 25 2015 05:44 pm

Title: LABOR DAY WEEKEND 1985

omg i love this update and how their realstionship is buidling can't wait for it to be more romantic feelings comes arond uggh they are too cute

Reviewer: QAN Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2015 05:13 pm

Title: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

That town is poisonous.  It's not good 

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2015 01:39 pm

Title: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

People are like this everyone and they are sad. Nathaniel hasn't done anything to anyone but is being treated like crap because of a horrible situation. Wendy is bitter as hell. She has the new husband and a child even though her son was stillborn. What the hell is her problem? Oh, I know she doesn't want Nathaniel to have anything or anyone. Wendy will get hers if she isn't careful. You can only get away with hurting those who don't fight back for so long. Nathaniel is just taking the high road. Everyone has consequences, Wendy and her husband included. Oh, she may get by doing her dirty deeds, but she won't get away. That's life. Loved the update!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2015 12:41 pm

Title: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

No Wendy, it's called " God doesn't like ugly". Which you have been displaying for a long time while Nathaniel has been treated unnecessarily harsh by everyone and when she gets put into her place, the rest of these wishy washy townies should get it too.  How do you believe negative of Nathaniel when Wendy cheated on him, divorced him and had a kid before any papers were signed who was clearly not Nathaniel's, how is he the bad guy again?  Ignorant folks just like my grandma would say.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2015 12:25 pm

Title: FEBRUARY 23RD 1990

Wendy gave birth to dead baby, now if that isn't karma I don't know what is?   Nathaniel needs to file a restrianing order on Wendy saying that she have ni contact with Nathaniel at all. Windex, opps I mean Wendy must remain 500 ft away from Nathaniel at all times.  That ho Charlotte needs to loose her job!! Pur Windex's husband on that TRO as well. This is some good story telling!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2015 12:14 pm



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