Title: Chapter 4

Great story!!

Author's Response:

Thank you jacqua43!! I'm so glad you enjoyed It!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2016 11:36 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I really liked this story, I just wish there was more story before the ending. You're very talented.



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie!! I appreciate the feed back and push to put more in more stories

Reviewer: Virginia Gilbert Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 05:15 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Poor Patrice!

Reviewer: Virginia Gilbert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 03:48 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Perfect timing for the reveal into Charity's past.

Reviewer: Virginia Gilbert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 03:38 pm

Title: Chapter 3

OO-KAY...

Reviewer: Virginia Gilbert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 03:23 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Uh-oh, I feel like I should tell Charity to run, but I got to read more.

Reviewer: Virginia Gilbert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 03:12 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I love your story, and I really dig Wes Riggs. I'm really hopped up to find out what Charity's secret is, and how their story will continue. Great job. Now, I moving on to chapter 2. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time out to read my story!! I'm so happy you like it!!! 

Reviewer: Virginia Gilbert Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 03:03 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I truly loved this story. I really hope you write something else soon. I love a dominant man and you are very good at writing one.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! i'm so humbled by your words, and i really really appreciate your feed back!!!  This was my first time venturing out with my writing and i'll tell you, i live for a dominant man and i think all my stories will represent that!! Thank you reading my little story!!! Be blessed

P.S i will write more!!!!!

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 03:17 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Good story, didn't see momma as the killer. Wow!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 03:36 am

Title: Chapter 1

What's next 



Author's Response:

There will be more to come, working on a story now and where i left off with this one i may start there too!! be on the look out!!!

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 01:38 am

Title: Chapter 6

I love the update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2015 11:43 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Oh damn!!! Damn!!!!! Bitch! Yes!!! I love it!



Author's Response:

Lol!!!! You a mess!!Thank you so much for your feedback!!!more to come !!

Reviewer: Alexandria Glass Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 11:49 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Now it gets really interesting...



Author's Response:

stirring up the pot!! more to come!! thank you for reading!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 02:54 am

Title: Chapter 5

Awesome sauce!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!! i'm glad you liked it!!

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 02:03 am

Title: Chapter 5

Finally! I'm happy Rachel (I'm not calling her Charity anymore I like Rachel better) didn't kill him she doesn't deserve to live with that. So you are in to torturing your readers....a cliffhanger at this point is just sadistic.

Author's Response:

I promise there's more to come, it'll hit fast and the ending will leave you i think a little dazed lol!! thank you for staying along for the ride!

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 12:32 am

Title: Chapter 5

Very wonderful update



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!! more to come

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 12:25 am

Title: Chapter 5

This is exciting! Nice to see an MC story. Looking forward to the climax of the drama.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!! I love a good MC story,so i thought why not attempt it!! more to come!

Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2015 10:56 pm

Title: Chapter 4

OK ewww! Dirty old perv! This girl didn't stand a chance the whole family was crazy

Author's Response:

pretty much!! thanks for reading chica!!

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2015 11:57 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Yasss this is some hotness!! I need more because I have questions!



Author's Response:

your questions will be answered!! you know when that good good hit you, you got write it out LOL!!! thank you for reading

Reviewer: Alexandria Glass Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2015 02:05 am

Title: Chapter 3

Wow! As much I love the hotness wth happen with the murder. Again that was fantastic to read but I'm feeling some type of way about the unanswered questions. Plus you ain't slick try'n to daze and confuse us before you drop a plot bomb on us.

Author's Response:

LOL!!! i promise the next chapter is coming with it!! thank you for reading!! 

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 11:19 am

Title: Chapter 3

Well damn!!   Wws is a roughneck and should never treat a woman with that much aggressiveness.  With that being said, that sugady was hot!!



Author's Response:

Thank you lol!! i'm an alpha male girl to the fullest!!! Thank you so much for reading!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 3

I hope she wasnt a prostitute before. I just dont want that image of her in my head.



Author's Response:

I understand and i thank you for reading!!!

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2015 08:06 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I can't wait to read more. I'm loving this story!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for the feed back!! i will be updating real soon!! 

Reviewer: bittersweet Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 04:03 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for the quick update. I'm loving this more and more! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts!! I'm glad you like it!!!

Reviewer: Alexandria V. Glass Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 03:23 am

Title: Chapter 2

Ok...interesting. I want to like them both, but right now I'm only liking VP.



Author's Response:

that's cool and i respect that!! thank you for the feed back!! 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 01:57 am



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